~*~Disclaimer and notes~*~
I do not own Lord of the Rings or any of the characters
This fanfic is not meant to offend any one..it's merely to show what a Mary Sue is so you could avoid making one. ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
Marissa sat at her desk in school the math teacher going on and on about fractions. She sighs flipping her long raven black hair which is a bit wavy and goes to the very middle of her back. She had it slightly tapered last week. Her crystal ice blue eyes staring at the doodles she made during class.
Finally the bell rang and Marissa rushed out with the others. As made her way to her locker she thought about how stupid all these classes where. Right then and there she decided it may be easier to quit school and become a stripper. As she neared her locker she pushed the thought out of her mind and she packed up her homework in her backpack and got on the bus for the ride home.
The bus stopped on her street and she got off and walked to her house going upstairs she dumped her back pack on the floor and flopped on the bed opening up the latest book she was reading titled the Lord of the Rings. She found it boring and liked the movie better but she had to read it for school.
She soon fell asleep and woke up. But not in her own bed. She found herself in this huge bed that looked like Rivendell in the movie. She slowly sat up and looked around with her crystal ice blue eyes studying her surroundings. She looked at her self in a mirror and noticed she wasn't wearing jeans and a t-shirt anymore and instead she was wearing a long flowing blue dress with sliver embroidering. She then noticed something else about her in the mirror. Instead of her ears being normal they were.POINTY! And her lips.they were blood red like she had lipstick on.but she DIDN'T!
As Marissa was staring at herself and her surroundings there was a knock at the door to her bedroom. Marissa jumped in surprise and went and opened the door. An elf maid walked in and bowed to Marissa as she set a tray of food on a table and made the bed. Marissa being starving ate the food which was a few different fruits in a bowl and a glass of wine. Marissa sniffed the wine questionable then took a sip and it was surprisingly tasty un-like the other wine she as had in the past. Although the only wine she had was that cheap crap her grandma always bought for Christmas.
The maid finished making the bed and was an about to leave when Marissa stopped her "Wait.excuse me miss but.where am I?" The elf maid laughed at this question then realized that Marissa was serious. "Lady Firfenwen you are in Rivendell your home."
"What did you just call me?" "Lady Firfenwen. My lady"
"But that's not my name! My name is Marissa Jones."
The maid shooke her head and left the room leaving Marissa in confusion. Questions un-answered rolled around in her head. How did she get here? Why did she look like an elf? Why had that maid called her Firfenwen? And why did she call her LADY Firfenwen? As she thought all this over there was another knock at her door. Marissa sighed and yelled "Come in". Arwen walked in and sat on the bed Marissa woke up in.
"Firfenwen what is wrong my sister? Why is it you are asking the maid where you are and telling her you name is not Firfenwen?"
"Um.because it's NOT! My name is Marissa! Marissa Jones! Not Lady Firfenwen! And I'm not an elf! I'm human.and did you call me your sister?"
"Yes I called you my sister! You ARE my sister! And you ARE an elf and your name IS Firfenwen!"
Marissa sighed and laid down on the bed screaming in her pillow. Arwen confused stands and walks to the door and as she's about to walk out turns and says to Marissa.
"You obviously are not feeling well! Take a nap and I'll have Father come by later and talk to you."
And with that she left Marissa totally and completely alone. Marissa lies on the bed staring at the ceiling hoping to wake up from this dream as soon as possible.
I do not own Lord of the Rings or any of the characters
This fanfic is not meant to offend any one..it's merely to show what a Mary Sue is so you could avoid making one. ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
Marissa sat at her desk in school the math teacher going on and on about fractions. She sighs flipping her long raven black hair which is a bit wavy and goes to the very middle of her back. She had it slightly tapered last week. Her crystal ice blue eyes staring at the doodles she made during class.
Finally the bell rang and Marissa rushed out with the others. As made her way to her locker she thought about how stupid all these classes where. Right then and there she decided it may be easier to quit school and become a stripper. As she neared her locker she pushed the thought out of her mind and she packed up her homework in her backpack and got on the bus for the ride home.
The bus stopped on her street and she got off and walked to her house going upstairs she dumped her back pack on the floor and flopped on the bed opening up the latest book she was reading titled the Lord of the Rings. She found it boring and liked the movie better but she had to read it for school.
She soon fell asleep and woke up. But not in her own bed. She found herself in this huge bed that looked like Rivendell in the movie. She slowly sat up and looked around with her crystal ice blue eyes studying her surroundings. She looked at her self in a mirror and noticed she wasn't wearing jeans and a t-shirt anymore and instead she was wearing a long flowing blue dress with sliver embroidering. She then noticed something else about her in the mirror. Instead of her ears being normal they were.POINTY! And her lips.they were blood red like she had lipstick on.but she DIDN'T!
As Marissa was staring at herself and her surroundings there was a knock at the door to her bedroom. Marissa jumped in surprise and went and opened the door. An elf maid walked in and bowed to Marissa as she set a tray of food on a table and made the bed. Marissa being starving ate the food which was a few different fruits in a bowl and a glass of wine. Marissa sniffed the wine questionable then took a sip and it was surprisingly tasty un-like the other wine she as had in the past. Although the only wine she had was that cheap crap her grandma always bought for Christmas.
The maid finished making the bed and was an about to leave when Marissa stopped her "Wait.excuse me miss but.where am I?" The elf maid laughed at this question then realized that Marissa was serious. "Lady Firfenwen you are in Rivendell your home."
"What did you just call me?" "Lady Firfenwen. My lady"
"But that's not my name! My name is Marissa Jones."
The maid shooke her head and left the room leaving Marissa in confusion. Questions un-answered rolled around in her head. How did she get here? Why did she look like an elf? Why had that maid called her Firfenwen? And why did she call her LADY Firfenwen? As she thought all this over there was another knock at her door. Marissa sighed and yelled "Come in". Arwen walked in and sat on the bed Marissa woke up in.
"Firfenwen what is wrong my sister? Why is it you are asking the maid where you are and telling her you name is not Firfenwen?"
"Um.because it's NOT! My name is Marissa! Marissa Jones! Not Lady Firfenwen! And I'm not an elf! I'm human.and did you call me your sister?"
"Yes I called you my sister! You ARE my sister! And you ARE an elf and your name IS Firfenwen!"
Marissa sighed and laid down on the bed screaming in her pillow. Arwen confused stands and walks to the door and as she's about to walk out turns and says to Marissa.
"You obviously are not feeling well! Take a nap and I'll have Father come by later and talk to you."
And with that she left Marissa totally and completely alone. Marissa lies on the bed staring at the ceiling hoping to wake up from this dream as soon as possible.