Hello everyone I am MJW1000 and this is the first chapter of the rebooted Taken and Return.
The Loud house is a home that has a loving mom, a caring dad and 10 daughters but one day that all changes when someone from their past comes back into their lives.
I hope you enjoy the first chapter of Taken and return.
Royal woods is a small town in Michigan and in the town just about everyone is aware of the Loud family. The Loud family has a house that resigns on 1216 Franklin Avenue and it has 12 people living in it. Lynn Sr and Rita Loud are husband and wife and the parents of 10 daughters.
Lynn Sr is the husband of Rita and father of their 10 daughters. The Loud father wears a sea green sweater over a light green checkered collar and cuffs, brown slacks and shoes. He has a long pointy nose, brown eyebrows, and curly brown hair that is thinning on the top. Lynn SR is a proud husband and father who works at Aloha Comrade which is a restaurant where he is the co-chef to the head chef. Lynn sometimes can be stern and serious with the kids but he is mostly fun, he has been known to have a childlike side at times, even sometimes taking part in his kids' antics, when it's all in good fun. He is always joking and laughing with them which is not a surprise that comedy is one of his many hobbies and interests along with others such as cooking and music. He's also the more sensitive of the two parents, often necessitating his wife, and stepping in whenever he needs to pull himself together.
Rita is the wife of Lynn Sr and mother of their 10 daughters and she is the woman with short blond hair who wears a pink buttoned shirt with a white collar and cuffs, and purple pants. She has big blonde hair and white earrings. She also wears blue eyeshadow and red lipstick. She also wears black low tops. Rita is caring towards her husband and children, but is not afraid to punish them if they go too far and she is more level-headed than her husband. Rita currently works as a dental assistant but she wants to be a novelist which she has been working on for years but she never lets this come first, what comes first is her kids.
Lori is the oldest of the Loud children at 17 years old. Lori has large blonde hair which is a genetic trait she shares with her mother. Lori wears light blue tank top, brown cargo shorts, blue slip-on shoes, and she has on blue eyeshadow. She also wears white pearl earrings. Being the oldest Lori leads by example and with an iron fist when it comes to her sisters. She uses it to assert authority and absolute dominance over her sisters. Lori knows how to lead but despite this she is still a teenager who loves being on her phone and being with her boyfriend Bobby.
Leni is the second oldest of the Loud children at 16 years old. Leni has long, blonde hair which she shares that trait with her mom and with side-swept bangs, and three pairs of eyelashes. The outfit that she wears is a seafoam green dress, with white frills, and triangular sleeves. Along with this, she also wears red hoop earrings, white sandals, topped with light green bows, and a pair of rounded white sunglasses with black lenses on top of her head.
Leni is quite ditzy and is very forgetful, absent-minded and perky but what she lacks in intelligence she makes up for having a big heart. Despite being ditzy and absent-minded, Leni's shown to be skilled at fashion designing, wood carving, singing, lock-picking, and making smoothies, which demonstrates that while she may not be very bright, she is creative and artistically inclined. She is also very friendly and gets along well with her siblings.
The third oldest Loud child is Luna who is 15 years old. Luna has short brown hair which she is the first out of the Loud children that inherited the same color hair as the Loud father Lynn Sr, her hair is styled into a pixie cut, she has freckles on her cheeks, and she wears light purple eyeshadow.
Luna wears a purple t-shirt which has a white skull on it. The purple shirt which has a torn crew neck, and triangular sleeves on it. Luna also wears a checkerboard pattern lavender skirt, with it there is a white belt on the skirt, and she wears high purple boots. A distinguishing feature of hers is her paperclip earrings. She also wears three black bracelets on each of her wrists and a choker around her neck. Luna is very happy, wild, caring, and easily the loudest sister of the entire family. She owns and plays an electric guitar, with which she has proved to be a very good guitarist. Her skills aren't limited to just the guitar though. She also plays the drums, as well as other instruments. What she likes most is singing, playing musical instruments, and being with her family.
Luan is next in line at age 14 and she has silver braces on her upper teeth which her 2 front ones are bucked and her lower teeth, and she also has light brown hair which is an inherited trait she got from her dad. Luan's hair is worn up into a large ponytail with a small swirl at the end by a yellow scrunchie, with two long protruding hairs sticking out from the center of her forehead.
Luan dresses in a white sleeveless shirt, with a yellow skirt that has a checkerboard pattern on it, yellow socks with a line pattern that are worn all the way up to her knees, and brown shoes. She also wears three pink flowers, one on her shirt, and one on each of her shoes. Luan is a very goofy and fun-loving girl with an enthusiasm for comedy and making puns. She has a taste for everything that is related to comedy, this includes comedy movies and TV series, clowns, pranks, stand-up comedy, and funny internet videos. She loves pulling pranks on her sisters and parents and frequently makes puns for every situation, causing her to get on everyone's nerves. Despite this, she loves her family and she just wants to make them laugh.
Next is the 13 year old Lynn jr or Lynn and just like her sisters Luna and Luan, she has thick brown hair and just like with them she got her brown hair from her dad who she is also named after. Lynn's hair is pulled back into a short high ponytail. She wears a red and white jersey with a red "1" on it, red and white track shorts, and black cleats with striped white knee-high socks. Lynn is athletic and competitive. She loves to play sports and enjoy roughhousing with her sisters. She enjoys playing every existing sport, including football, soccer, hockey, basketball, and baseball. Lynn also tends to turn everything into a competition.
Lucy is next in line and she has very pale white skin and she has long black hair that conceal her eyes because of her bangs on her forehead. The only child that does not have the same hair color as her mom or her dad. Lucy wears an all black dress which and underneath that is a black and white shirt with long black and white striped arm sleeves. Lucy also has black and white stockings and black shoes. By her very interesting appearances, she seems to be the type of person who is gloomy, cynical, deadpan, and mysterious goth girl.
Next are twin girls Lana and Lola who are complete opposites of each other, the twin sisters are 6 years old with Lana being older by two minutes. Lana is nearly identical in her physical appearance to Lola. She has blonde hair, with two downward pigtails tied down with red scrunchies, and is missing her front teeth, like her twin does.
She wears a red baseball cap backwards with a small square hole, white sneakers with blue stripes, and a murky green t-shirt under dark blue overalls. Lana is a tomboy, contrasting with her twin's more girly personality. She loves to play in mud and enjoys getting her hands dirty. Despite her tomboyish behavior and gross habits which she is known for like digging through trash and playing in mud, she is a decent enough person and is loving towards her family. She also helps her family with more of the household jobs like unclogging the toilet and cleaning the animals out.
Now on with Lola, Lola has long blonde hair that she wears down, and a tuft of hair on top of her head pointed to the right. She is missing her front teeth, like her twin, Lana. She wears a princess attire which has a long pink gown with a sash and white pearl necklace around her neck, long pink gloves, white earrings, pink high heels, and a tiara on her head.
Lola is a sharp-tongued beauty queen and she carries a great sense of self-importance. She can be quite materialistic and will go to great lengths to get what she wants and dedicate much of her time she puts into winning her beauty pageants. Lola's interests include anything girly unlike her twin, this includes fashion shows, makeup, and posing for photo shoots which is why she is always constantly claiming how beautiful she is.
The second to last is Lisa. Lisa has short shaggy brown hair and wears large glasses to help her see. She wears a green turtleneck sweater, pink pants, and brown shoes, all of which were droop down to illustrate her stoic demeanor.
Lisa is a child prodigy, so she's the smartest kid in the bunch. Because of this, she often tends to be egocentric, boorish, condescending, and sarcastic with other people also Lisa is very honest and blunt about what is on her mind. She speaks with a lateral lisp, and usually has a stoic frown Due to her being a child prodigy she often works on strange experiments some involving her sisters and her parents. Scary intelligent Lisa wants to show the world and her family that she is the greatest mind in all of mankind.
At 15 months (1 year and 3 months) old, Lily is the youngest child of the Loud family and Lily is always happy, and enjoys being with her family. Unlike other babies, she doesn't cry too often. She is also the most behaved of the sisters. As the youngest of the Loud siblings, Lily is very small, and usually just wears her diaper. She has one prominent tooth, and a tuft of blonde hair on her head.
That's all the members of the Loud family are currently in their home on a hot summer day in August at 7:42pm and they are all in the living room of their house, some are watching TV on the couch, some are playing and others are doing their own things but everyone is enjoying themselves.
Lana soon got up from the couch and started walking away. "Where you're going Lana?" Asked her father as their show should be coming back on any minute now. "I'm just going to feed Walt, Geo, Cliff and Charles real quick." Lana said before taking off to feed the pets.
"Dad you ordered the pizza right?" Lynn asked and her mom response with "Yes he called to order the pizza a few minutes ago when the show got started." The Loud mom said to Lynn who was happy at the answer. "Good cause I am hungry." "I can agree with that dude." Luna stated but suddenly there was loud aggressive barking coming from outside.
"Why is Charles barking?" Lola said with an annoyed tone. "Maybe he just like sees a squirrel." Leni said. "Or he could see the pizza guy?" Said Lucy. "Incorrect, the pizza should be here in prominently 10-15 minutes from now." Lisa said disagreeing with that option. "Don't know but he is barking me crazy. Ha ha ha Get it?" Luan joked and laughed which everyone else groaned at. "LANA CHARLES IS BARKING, HURRY UP AND FEED HIM!" Screamed Lori for Lana to the dog. "I JUST GOT DONE FEEDING CLIFF! I'M GETTING HIS FOOD RIGHT NOW!" Lana shouted back from the kitchen, then moments later Lana came out with a bowl for dog food and some water for Charles and he was still barking out there. Lana opens the door to let Charles in and to give him his food but she stopped and this got her mom's attention.
"Lana, is everything alright?" "Um there is someone in the front yard." Lana said with confusion and this made everyone else confused. They all got up to see what the animal lover was talking about and quickly started walking to the door where Lana was looking at Charles was barking at the unknown person. They were by the door when Charles stopped barking and Lana screamed "PUT HIM DOWN! PUT HIM DOWN RIGHT NOW!" The family rushed quickly and saw someone holding their dog.
The person was a boy around Lynn's height slightly shorter, the boy was wearing an oversized long sleeve shirt that had a hoodie attached to it which was covering the boy's head. Along with that, he also wore gray jeans that were worn out with some small rips and tears on them and were dirty and sneakers that were also dirty.
Everyone was watching from the front porch as the random boy was looking at Charles as he was holding him with both arms wrapped around him and Lana was not happy that a stranger had her dog. "HEY PUT CHARLES DOWN NOW!" Lana screamed at the boy but he just continued to look at the dog. The Loud family looks at each other nervously, wondering what should they do? "Hey excuse me." Rita tried to get the attention of the kid but he just continued to look at Charles. "It's not nice to pick up other peoples pets without their permission, so please give us back our dog?" Rita asked politely and the kid moved his hand while still having Charles and then started petting the dog, getting some of Loud sisters mad. Lana was about to run to try and get Charles but Lori, Luan, Lola and Lynn Sr held her back.
Everyone still watched the boy as he pets their dog then he looks up from Charles and looks to the Loud family but due to the darkness outside and the hoodie, they couldn't see his face. After staring at the family while still petting Charles, the boy starts walking towards the family making the Louds confused and nervous. When the boy is by the steps that go to the porch he stops, than moves Charles so he is underneath one of his arm and the other one he points.
"Me?" Lana said nervously while the Loud parents and sisters watched in confusion. The boy nodes his head at Lana than while he is still pointing at her, he gestures she to come to him. Lana looks at her parents and sisters and saw that they were not happy with this boy. "What do you want with her?" Luna asked angrily at the boy. He moves his hands to the sides of Charles and holds him out in the direction of Lana. "You want to give him to me?" Lana asked with caution and the boy nodes his head to her. Lana was scared of the boy who had her dog, one of her best friends and the family knew this too and also some were as well. Lynn Sr took his daughter's hand and walked down to get Charles. The boy just stood there waiting for them, never moving from the spot where he stood.
The 2 stop directly in front of the boy but close enough to get Charles, with her dad being behind her Lana reached her hands out to grab their dog. After what felt like hours of Lana reaching out, she was close to him, almost fingertips away and she looked at the boy's face. The boy has features such as pale skin like Lucy, noticeable bags around his eyes and freckles on his cheeks but what made Lana feel scared was that he was looking directed at her, every move she made he saw and he judged but kept the same blank expression. Lana had her hand almost around Charles but was a little bit scared to grab him despite her dad being right by her side but than the boy surprisingly pushed his arms out farther to where Lana was basically holding Charles, all she had to do was grab him and she quickly did than ran to her family who were on the porch where some of the sisters checked on Charles.
Lynn Sr looked at the boy who looked up at him, saw the boy's face and the Loud father had what he believed was a weird thought but pushed it in the back of his mind and then walked away to his family. As he walks up the small stairs, he notices his wife and daughters's faces and then Rita gestures to him to turn around so he turns his head to his left and finds nothing behind. He looks at Rita and turns his head to right and finds nothing yet again. "Where did the boy go?" Lynn Sr asked himself but he couldn't think for too long because he felt a hand quickly touch his left shoulder making his scream and startling him. Lynn Sr turns around to see the boy standing, looking at him with the same expression as before.
"Dad he moved every time you turned your head and he went to the other side of you where you couldn't see him." Lynn explained as she saw the movements from where she was, Lynn Sr gets up and turns his attention to the boy. "You can't do things like that. Didn't your parents teach you not to do stuff like that." Lynn Sr angry but still trying to compose himself with his wife standing right next to him. "What is he doing out here at this time by himself anyways?" Leni asked and Lynn Sr thinks maybe he is lost so he asked the boy a question. "Are you lost?" The boy shakes his head no leaving Lynn Sr and the Loud members confused. "Yo where are your parents?" Lynn asked from the porch and the boy did something that no one was expecting.
He points to Lynn Sr and then points to Rita. Everyone is confused at this and Lori let her thoughts be known. "What are you trying to say that mom and dad are your parents?" Lori said confused and got even more along with everyone else when the boy nodes yes to her question. No one knew what to say next. They see the boy looking at all of them slowly turning his head and then he takes off his hoodie to reveal his white unkempt hair that goes down to his neck.
When the hood came off the Loud parents and the 5 oldest Loud sisters heads started turning and understanding while the younger Loud sisters still felt the same as before but they did notice everyone else's reactions. "What's wrong?" "You know him?" "Parental units, are you aware of this male creature?" "Is he really family?" Questions that were asked by the younger Loud sisters. Rita and Lynn Sr got a closer look at the boy and it hit Lynn Sr to the thought he had not even 2 minutes ago. "Why does he look so similar?" And now he knows why. With tears coming down from both parents, they address their kids who look on in confusion.
"This is Lincoln and he is your long lost brother."
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