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The gods had been all been looking for the "legend" of the time, a lower world being so powerful that it could leave any of their children in the dusts. All of the gods, were looking for this entity. This entity was going to change the future for the rest of the lower world.

Bell Cranel arrived in Orario after the unfortunate demise of his grandpa, "so called death of his grandpa". In order to so, he escaped the despair of having the only one who cared about him leave. He was locked in his room for weeks, but he left with a resolve stronger than diamond for only one goal, to become like the heroes that his grandpa told him about, even just a taste would be enough for him. When he arrived in Orario no familia wanted to accept a 5'0 foot tall 10 year old adventurer.

Bell Cranel looked for a familia throughout everywhere in Orario, but none would accept a kid. "Come back when your older", "this is not an orphanage" is what all of the familias told him. No one would give him a chance to start being an adventurer. Except until a certain goddess who could see his soul through her eyes decided to take him in.

She had never seen a soul so pure, so powerful that it would best be described as a god, maybe even more than that. She saw his future potential to be limitless; She never seen anything like it, to call it unique would be far too much of an understatement. She wanted the soul to be hers for the rest of time; The goddess of beauty was in love, once again. It was the soul of the Legend, Freya believed.

Three days past since he arrived: Bell had no more money to stay in Orario;

At the daybreak, the boy had finally woken up from his room and decided to leave his wore-down inn. It was the last day that he could afford to be in Orario, not a single one of the mid tiers and even low tier familias even accepted him.

He packed his stuff and left the inn, but he still had that unbolstered spirit. He would come back to Orario after training, but this idea was stopped when a massive 7'0 Boaz approached him.

Bell didn't know why but he had to run, and he ran away with a speed that rivaled a level 2 adventurer, but the Boaz chased after him and caught him with ease. Bell was frightened that he was caught like a fish on land, and the enormous frame of the man that caught him.

Holding Bell with two fingers, Ottar, the 7'0 Boaz and, ironically, the only level 7 adventurer in Orario, had decided to tell him " Our Goddess has shown interest in you. You will join our familia"

Bell didn't know whether to show fear or happiness. Fear because he was being carried with two fingers nonchalantly though he weighed 100 pounds by a man with a gigantic form, or Happiness because he finally found a familia at the time that he had given up.

"Okay, Okay. Please let me down" Bell didn't know why, but he felt an eye watching him; the eye was emanating such a strong lust that Bell trembled. Bell again being the silly 10 year old planned on running away once he was let down, but the Boaz didn't let him down, but, instead, knocked Bell out, as if he knew that Bell would try to escape again.

Bell woke up in a luxurious bed with a window showing a view throughout the rest of Orario so beautiful, but for one thing, he was tied up.

Bell Cranel had been awake for 5 minutes without seeing a single person, but then entering the room came out a woman. The woman was 5'7, unparalleled in beauty, to call her the most beautiful woman would not begin to describe it, she was beauty itself.

With a voice as smooth as honey on the ears " Hello, Child. It seems like you've caused me trouble to obtain you. How would you like to join my familia, the Freya familia"

Bell tried to reply, but it was futile. He was being controlled like a puppet being pulled by its strings. Before he could even think the word "yes" came out of his mouth.

"That's a good boy. Anyway, turn around and I'll give you a blessing" the goddess whispered to the boys left ear, making the boy shake even more

The young boy had next to no control of his body because he was charmed. How could such a young boy be charmed?

Bell again couldn't control his body and turned around, while being tied up. He yelped in pain because getting the falna burnt like being a flame.

Bell Cranel

Race:Human

Age:10

Level:1

Strength:00I

Endurance:00I

Agility:00I
Dexterity:00I

Magic:00I

Developmental Abilities:
Luck:I

Abnormal resistance:I

Lifesteal:I

Skills
Liaris Freese- rapid growth based on feelings (his dream and longing to be a hero) negates charms and hexes

Argonaut- power to overcome overwhelming odds

Mage Cannon- Doubles all magical spells from user

Magical Counter: Reflects all physical attacks at twice the power

Magic:
Level Boost: No chant magic which automatically level boosts all members of the party

Wynn Fimbulvert - blasts the opponent with cold wide range magic that can even freeze time

Veil Breath raises the target's resistance against physical and magical attacks and also heals the target slightly.

Via Shilheim creates a barrier that completely blocks physical and magical attacks

All for One: Copies any magic

Freya was startled at this, never had any god seen a level 1 adventurer with 3 developmental abilities, 4 skills, 4 magics and tier 4 at that. His abilities were not only plentiful but so rare that it even eclipsed the skills of a first class adventurer. She had realized how powerful of an asset that he was being able to level boost adventurers in her familia with no chant, capable of copying any magic and reflecting all physical attacks, and pertaining 3 elfs spells. Not only that, but he had a skill which was practically a pass to being a hero and a skill that gave rapid growth

Freya looking at the boy's stats told the boy, "Well now you are a child of my familia. Welcome to the Freya familia. You have great potential. I'll keep you close "

Bell immediately was confused. The Freya familia was the strongest familia in Orario and Bell tried to apply before, but he didn't apply because the mentality around the familia was far too serious for his tastes, not like he would get in the familia. Whilst thinking about applying, He was scared off by a cat person threatening to kill the boy if he thought about joining their familia. He immediately ran off.

Freya finally untied him and gazed at him, like an owner to a new puppy.

Bell finally got the freedom to move and decided to try to escape again because of the look that his goddess was giving him that not of a mother but a crazed lunatic. He had to escape if he didn't he would lose who he is, but he realized that the doorway was blocked off by a dark elf.

The dark elf was a muscular dark elf. He had beautiful silver hair along with purple eyes, just like their goddess. His skin was beautiful, and he had a long red sword sheathed within his hip.

Before Bell could come up with a plan to try to escape, Freya told Hogni to train him.

Hogni the Dark Elf blocking the doorway only stoically nodded and began to walk closer to the untied boy .

Bell tried to run away from the dark elf trying to grab him, but he was caught again with ease. Hogni only again nodded at his goddess, then began to drag the ten year old boy out of the room, and into the familia courtyard.

While being dragged out of the room, Bell realized that it was evening. He had been knocked out for maybe 8 hours, and all of his stuff were missing. But while being dragged out, He saw the huge building that he was being dragged out of was a temple like building with a gate and was made made with a lot of mortar and concrete. The inside of the familia home was majestic.

Hogni threw the adolescent boy at the grass in the courtyard. All of the members of the Freya familia in the courtyard stared holes at the boy making him feel unwanted and despised. It seemed as if everyone in the training area were only competing for something and then something came along and took it away from then.

"Our Goddess made us pick you up. You better be worth the time that she spent on you" the dark elf bickered.

Bell reluctantly nodded towards this statement. He began to feel inadequate.

"Pick a weapon" The dark elf pointed at a gigantic, dark red cabinet filled with weapons, ranging from daggers to even magic staff. All of the equipment within the cabinet looked amazing, even a smith would be astounded at such a great collection. It seemed like all of the weapons within the gigantic cabinet were all first class weapons. Bell had also never seen cabinet so large. Even just the cabinet had such beautiful gold gildwork.

"Uhhh… I" Bell tried to talk to Hogni telling him about how he wanted to register as an adventure, but before he knew it Hogni punched him in the stomach making him cough out blood.

"Pick a weapon" The dark elf repeated again irritatedly, like the boy had disobeyed him.

Bell couldn't get up, the punch that he had received was the most painful thing he ever experienced.

Hogni picked Bell up by his shirt's collar and threw him towards the weapons. Everyone was still watching the 10 year old boy get thrown around and punched and still glared at him with hatred. Just what were the Freya familia thinking?

After a couple of minutes, Bell murmured "ok", got up slowly and picked up a heavy long sword from the cabinet. Hogni glared at him and posed ready to fight.

Bell knew that the Freya familia was filled with top tier adventurers, but to be training with one of them was far too extreme. At first, the boy had accepted that he was a member of the Freya familia, but to be trained by a level 6, not even a whole day after being an adventurer was far too insane. Bell had to leave if he wanted to live. Hogni was not going to show the boy techniques, but instead beat the boy down, and Bell knew that he didn't stand a change against the dark elf.

Bell stared at Hogni and Hogni's longsword and he knew he had to do something. Run! That long sword looked like it would skewer the boy with next to none effort