I do not own Ben 10 or Unbreakable. (All I own is my OC's) Takes place a month after A New Dawn on Ben 10 Omniverse. But imagine the animation in this "Cartoon Fanfiction" Ultimate Alien Style.
I saw Unbreakable (2000) and thought why not try to make a fanfiction?
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Unbreakable
By: DoctorEd17
Chapter 1: Rise of an Anti hero
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We go to a train going down some tracks on the way to a city-like town called Bellwood.
In one of the cars we see a 17 year old male with brown eyes, slightly tan skin and short brown hair. He is wearing a black long sleeved shirt with blue jeans and black army boots. We see he is listening to his music.
"Hey there… My name is Frank, Frank West. I am on my way back home to see my little brother Charlie who is living with Aunt Sara and Uncle Victor. Mom and Dad died when Charlie was less than a year old and I was 7. Some idiot shot them accidentally while he was buzzed. Our Aunt and Uncle took us in. I made sure I was and still am a good brother to Charlie. I just graduated from a Boarding High School."
"I have yet to decide what to do with my life… I thought I wanted to do programming but it turns out… Not my thing." Frank thought to the 4th wall
He looks at his watch and saw there was another hour before the train reached it's destination.
He then noticed the people with him are looking scared and confused.
He pulls out his ear buds and he hears a grinding sound.
Then everything went black…
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In Bellwood we see Charlie West who is a 10 year old child reading a comic book in the living room while Victor is watching TV.
Charlie has brown hair, Blue eyes and a slightly pale skin. He is wearing a blue t-shirt, Green cargo pants and brown shoes. He has glasses.
Victor is 43 years old and has brown thinning hair and brown eyes. He is wearing a white dress shirt with brown pants and tan suspenders.
He was watching a golf game when a "BREAKING NEWS!" showed up.
"What the? This better be good!" Victor complained
"Breaking news! Bellwood's Train #737 has mysteriously derailed and crashed 30 minutes ago outside of Bellwood! The authorities are currently looking for any and all survivors. But so far only two were found." A newswoman said as a live video of said train is being shown
"That's it?" Victor asked
"Uncle Victor?" Charlie said worried
"Yes pal?" Victor asked
"Doesn't that train number sound familiar?" Charlie asked still worried
"Now that you mention it…" Victor said thinking
He pulled out a paper and it said, "Please pick up Frank from the train station. He's on train number #737."
"Oh no…" Victor said now worried himself
We hear the phone ring and Victor answered it.
"Is this Victor or Sara West?" a voice asked
"Yes…" Victor said
"I'm Dr. Barnes. I'm with the Bellwood hospital and we're calling about Frank West." Dr. Barnes said
"Is he…?" Victor asked too sorrow to even ask
"Huh? OH! No! He is alive! In fact… I'm calling you to see if you can come pick him up!" Dr. Barnes said
"What?" Victor asked confused, "We'll come pick him up."
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At the Bellwood Hospital we see Frank on a hospital bed wearing a hospital gown. He wakes up and looks around confused.
"Where am I?" Frank asked
We see a man in a doctors outfit approach him and asked, "Hey there. How are you feeling?"
"OK? What happened?" Frank asked
"Your train derailed. Some sort of malfunction. It was very bad. They only found two survivors." the doctor said
"How bad is it?" Frank asked
"Before I answer, I need to ask some questions myself. Where were you on the train?"
"By a window."
"Were you standing up?"
"No."
"Not even for 5 seconds before the accident?"
"No."
"Any allergies?"
"No."
The doctor stares at him completely confused.
Frank notices and asked, "Why are you staring at me?"
"Two reasons, One, in a few minutes you will officially be the only survivor of the crash. And two, you didn't break one bone… There's no internal bleeding… No rupture… No damaged organs… There's not even a scratch on you…" the doctor said
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As Frank is discharged those words echo in his mind.
He enters the lobby wearing his clothes and he sees Victor and Charlie there. The two see him and hug him.
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Back at the house we see a 41 year old woman with long brown hair in a bun and light green eyes. She is wearing mom jeans and a red sweater.
She is in the living room worried.
We see the Victor enter the room with Charlie and Frank. The latter's presence made her joyed. She hugged him.
A couple hours later we see Frank looking at his reflection in a mirror on his desk.
He survived without even a scratch.
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The next morning we see Charlie at the table reading a comic while eating cereal. His eyes widen as he had a thought.
Frank was at the other end of the table eating his cereal.
"Frank?" Charlie asked, "Can I ask you something?"
"Is it related to the event?" Frank asked
"No." Charlie said
"Ask." Frank asked
"How many days have you been sick in all of your life?" Charlie asked
"Well, there was… Wait… I had… no, that was Carl. Come to think of it… I don't think I've ever been sick. In fact Mom took me to get the Chicken pox from some other kids. Don't ask why. I was exposed many, many, many times. But I never gotten it. I never got the flu. Not even a cold." Frank said
Charlie got up and said, "Follow me."
We go to the basement where we see Charlie putting a 50 pound weight on each end of the bench press bar.
"You want me to lift weights? Why?" Frank asked
"I want to test something." Charlie said
"Fine." Frank said as he laid down
He grabs the bar and tries to lift it. He gets it off the hooks, pulls it down to his chest and pushes it back up. He was struggling the whole time.
As he puts it back and sits up Charlie says, "OK. I'm going take off some of the weight." as he went to work.
He removed the 50 pound weight and replaced them while Frank drank some water.
He goes back to the front and said, "Ready."
"OK!" Frank said as he laid back down
He grabs the bar and takes it off the hood this time with no struggle. He lifts it up and down 10 times before he puts it back.
He sits up and looks at Charlie who stared at him.
"That was kind of fun. So how much did you take off?" Frank asked
"I didn't…" Charlie said
Confused, Frank looks at the bar.
"You added…" Frank whispered
"How much did I put on?" Charlie asked
Frank looks at the weights and whispered, "270 pounds." loud enough for Charlie to hear.
He looks at Charlie and said, "Put some more on."
Charlie did so and Frank did the same thing, with only a little struggle.
After he puts it the bar back, he asks, "How much did you put on?"
"All of it…" Charlie said in awe
Frank look at the bar and sees all weights are all on there.
Frank looks at the weights and said, "I just lifted about 990 pounds."
He looks at Charlie and said, "I probably should have asked this before we started but… what were you testing?"
Charlie hands him a comic book. On the cover we see a picture of a man lifting a car with the words, "Superpowers… Human evolution."
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In Frank's room we see Frank is on his bed talking to Charlie who was sitting on the desk chair.
"Charlie, your theory was based on a comic book?" Frank asked
"Explain how else you were able to lift 990 pounds?" Charlie asked
"Good point… Either way don't mention this to our aunt and uncle." Frank said, "And what did you hope to happen. That I would become a superhero? Bellwood already has one!"
"I know…" Charlie said
"No offence. I just don't think I can be one even if I wanted to." Frank said
Charlie was about to say something before a light bulb went off in his head.
"You're right. You don't scream superhero." Charlie said
"Thanks for acknowledging it." Frank said
"You should be an Anti hero." Charlie said
"Anti hero? What is that?" Frank asked
"They're like superheroes. But more darker. You're right, this town does have superhero. So I think we're overdue for an Anti hero." Charlie said
"How are Anti heroes different?" Frank asked
"Superheroes don't kill or badly injure. Anti heroes however…" Charlie said
"Say I humor you… I'll only kill those really deserves it. For example someone who killed." Frank said
"That is what most Anti heroes do." Charlie said
"Why do think I should be an Anti hero?" Frank asked
"I know you are struggling to find you place in life. All I am saying is to try." Charlie said
"OK. I'll go out tonight." Frank said
"First you need a costume!" Charlie said
"No tights, no spandex, no symbols!" Frank said
"But people will recognize you!" Charlie said
Frank went to his closet and pulled out a small trunk. He puts it on his and opens it. He then pulls out a dark blue rain poncho that reaches halfway down his lower legs. It also has a hood.
"A poncho?" Charlie asked
"First, your lucky I'm even doing this! Second, this was dad's. It's from back when he was my age. This rain poncho was made by a now gone company and the fabric is hard to rip." Frank said
He then puts it on and he pulls up the hood covering his face.
"I take back what I said, That actuality looks cool." Charlie said
He pulled the hood off and pulls out a black cap from the trunk, then puts it on. He pulls the hood back up and looks at his reflection.
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Later that night, we go to downtown Bellwood where we see Frank walking around. His poncho is in a backpack while the cap is on his head. We see ear buds on his ears.
"Anything yet?" Charlie asked on the headset
"No." Frank said
He see humans and aliens living in peace. Frank smiled.
"This is amazing… I think people like Will Harangue are idiots." Frank thought
As he walked his arm brushed against another mans arm.
In that few microseconds, Frank sees the man in Undertown in a knight outfit. He along with two others are in a warehouse pointing some aliens guns at an alien family who were tied up.
Frank snaps out of it and looks at the man walking away.
"Frank?" Charlie asked
"Charlie… Retain radio silence!" Frank said before he turned the ear buds off and started to follow the man.
He follows the man to a warehouse. The man enters the warehouse and after a few seconds Frank goes in.
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Inside the warehouse the man now in the Forever Knight outfit is walking to an alien family. He and two others are holding high tech guns and pointing them at them.
They were about to pull the trigger when some of the lights went off. Just enough to confuse them.
"What happened to the lights?" a Forever Knight asked
We then see Frank approach the Knights. He is now wearing the poncho and his upper face is covered by the shadow from the hood and cap.
The knights didn't notice. He approached one of them and quickly snapped his neck. He fell to the ground with a thump!
The other two turned to see their dead comrade and Frank standing there.
"I'll give you one chance. Let them go, quit the Forever knights and never do anything like this again." Frank said in a deep voice
The two knights just laughed.
"Why should we? We're cleaning the Earth from all alien filth!" One of the knights said
Frank just walked over to them. He took a Knight in each arm and put them in a choke hold.
As a result they dropped their weapons and struggled to get out. But due to Frank's strength they were unable to. After a minute or two they stopped moving and Frank dropped them.
The alien family stared at Frank a little scared as he approached them. They thought they were going to get the same fate.
Instead he grab on to the rope and got them out. He then started to walk away.
A alien little girl said, "Thank you, mister!"
Frank stopped and said, "Your welcome." in the deep voice.
"Who are you?!" The alien father asked
Frank thought about that for a second before saying, "Call me… the Overseer." before he left.
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The Next Morning…
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We go to the West household where we see Charlie and Frank at the table. They were both eating homemade waffles provided by Aunt Sara. Frank was reading the newspaper while Charlie was reading a comic book.
Frank notices an article that said, "SAVED"
Frank sides it across the table to Charlie who sees the article and reads it.
"Last night an alien family that went missing from Undertown were found by the Bellwood police. They explained they were kidnapped by a xenophobic group called the Forever Knights to be killed."
"Before that could happen, they explained that a person wearing a poncho came along and saved them. The Forever Knights were found dead in the warehouse. From what the family described the person is a human male. But somehow possesses incredible feats of strength as he was able to hold two of the strong Knights in a choke hold."
"This person calls himself the Overseer. The real question is will we see him again?"
Next to the article is a drawing of the Overseer.
Charlie looks up at Frank who said, "You were right. I think I just found my place."
Charlie smiled.
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