Co-Written by GhostKaiser23

Disclaimer: Do not own Ben 10. We also do not own Interspecies Reviewer.

AUTHOR'S NOTE:

Hey everyone, I hope you all enjoy this! ... What?

Oh, right, what this story is about. Okay then. Well... *cough cough*

Has anyone here heard of InterSpecies Reviewer? Well... yes.

Ben 10 is gonna be doing that, a Ben 10 fic inspired by that manga/anime's premise.

Ben, Rook and Kevin are gonna be going around and reviewing the brothels of different species, comparing what they are like to sleep with.

Yes, really. That simple

And as you can see in the chapter title... this is a pilot. Because, you see, Ghost and I are not sure if you would want to read this story.

So, to put it simply, if you want more... say so. Post a review saying if you want more, and Ghost and I will provide. If this story does not get a lot of support, if you guys don't like it, then this will end up being a one shot.

We have, so far, only written this one chapter and we won't be writing more if you guys don't tell us you like it.

So... again... let me make this clear. If you want to see more, tell us, and we will make more.

Ben 10 Intergalactic Reviewer

Pilot/ Chapter 1: Starting the Group

Bellwood. A quaint city that was in the middle of America, a lovely place that many people could come and go. And over the years an amazing thing had happened, the knowledge of aliens living among them. Some people took the news hard, since they had thought it was impossible for other life to exist. Some people were thrilled, so many conspiracy theories proven true.

Others well.

"Morning, Carl!" A red-skinned four-armed alien waved from walking out of the house next door.

"Morning Thrax!" A brown-haired man waved back, getting his morning paper.

Taking it pretty well, actually.

"How's the kids?" Carl asked

"Fine, how's that son of yours?" Thrax responded.

"... He's still depressed." Carl sighed sadly

"Oh no. What's happened? Last time we talked he was in high spirits." Thrax asked, walking over to the fence "You said he was planning on proposing."

"She dumped him." Carl flinched "When he proposed she started laughing and dumped him."

"...That bitch." Thrax frowned as he heard that.

Carl frowned and sighed heavily. "He's not been the same."

*elsewhere*

We zoom through the town of Bellwood, seeing a teen depressed at a fast food restaurant. He was wearing a green jacket, a black shirt, blue trousers and surrounded by chili fry baskets and smoothie cups. Wallowing in his self-pity... which was brought on by a bitch of an ex-girlfriend.

This was the might Ben Tennyson, Hero of the Universe!... And he was drowning his sadness in some weird new smoothie flavour
He had one hand on a half-drunk smoothie cup and his other one flat on the table. "Love is a lie... There's no hope... everything is despair." He wept in a... let's be honest 'emotionally compromised' state.

A green car came up opposite of the fast food place, where a black-haired man wearing overalls and a black torn-sleeved shirt with grey undersleeves underneath "Oh man... this is rough, wore than I thought it'd be."

"Indeed. He has been like this for a while now." An alien spoke up, it was a blue-and-white-furred humanoid man with black and blue armour.

"... Let's go cheer him up, Rook." The black-haired man patted Rook's shoulder

"I do not think that is a good idea." Rook answered, trying to be respectful.

"I can hear you two y'know. Burp!" Ben called out, not caring right now "Go away."

"Come on Ben. This isn't good for ya man." Kevin commented as he got out of the car, waking over "So she dumped you, so what? Happened to me and I was fine."

"You spent three days in the bathroom crying and hugging a pillow." Rook commented

"Exactly. I was fine." Kevin nodded

"Just go away. I don't want to talk to you." He tried to swat at them, but his hand was just flopping from the despair.

Kevin sighed and pinched his nose. "This is getting us nowhere."

"My sentiments exactly. What Ben needs right now is-" Rook tried to help

"Guys night out!" Kevin interrupted. "We're gettin' you outta this funk and back in the game."

"What?! No! I was going to say he needs to go home and have us be there for him as friends as he lets out his sorrows!" Rook called back

"I'm with Rook." Ben answered, before burping again.

"Ben, as your jerk friend, I'm going to tell you straight. You're turning into a blimp over a slut who blatantly cheated on you!" Kevin answered

...

"She did what?!" Ben gasped

"Kevin, he didn't know that bit." Rook flinched

"... I thought you knew." Kevin blinked.

"NO!" Ben snapped. "Who-? No, no! Don't tell me!" Ben was now pissed as well as depressed "I... How could she?! When I fucked her as every single fucking alien she wanted without complaint! Every alien the perfect example of their species! Every position possible with every species! We never even did when I was in human form because there where 'too many options'! "

"Yeah... that's why." Kevin frowned and flinched.

"Alright! Let's go!" Ben called

"Go? To this 'Boys Night Out'?" Rook asked as he saw Ben's lit enthusiasm.

"Yeah! We're gonna go and-!" Ben answered, knocking over the cups off his table as he stood up...and wobbled a bit.

"Whoa, easy there, Ben. I've got a place in mind we can go." Kevin answered as he caught him before Ben threw up his smoothies and chili fries.

'I believe that Ben is the only person I know who could get drunk off smoothies.' Rook thought

"Alright, c'mon. You're going home first... And probably need some anti-acids." Kevin answered

"But guys night~!" Ben whined

"Ben, you're probably gonna barf if you don't take something." Kevin answered. "And trust me, where I'm thinking of going, they will and I'm not joking here, kick you out on your ass and make you pay for the clean-up."

"Fine."

"... And if you barf in my car, I'M gonna kick your ass." Kevin answered

*The Next Day*

"Right, you feel better?" Kevin questioned as he was driving fro Ben's house

"Yeah, but I could've handled yesterday." Ben responded as he sat in the passenger seat "... And why does Rook have my seat?"

"I believe I used the phrase 'Shotgun' and allowed me to be placed here." Rook answered.

"Nyeh." Ben grumbled and looked out at the buildings... which he realised he was going into one of the seedier parts of town "Err, Kevin. I think you took a wrong turn."

"No, I didn't." He smirked and went into a 'cash only' parking area.

"I think you did."

"Nope. C'mon. This is our stop." Kevin smiled after he paid the toll and parked the car.

"I do not understand." Rook answered as he and Ben got out.

"Same dude." Ben shrugged

Kevin chuckle with a smirk and approached a door, with a pink neon sign with a sexy woman on it, called 'The Sweet Lust'.

"Er... Kevin?"

"Yeah?"

"Why are we at a Brothel?"

Kevin simply looped his arm around Ben's neck and pulled him forward in a brotherly manner. "You need to get your dick wet; that's why. You've been throttled by that bitch you were with and now, you need a fresh slate. Or in this case, a fresh pussy."

...

"What?"

"Kevin, I am not sure about this." Rook spoke

"Ben, look at me. That bitch cheated on you; right? Humiliated and basically cucked you." Kevin tried to explain. "-This-? This is to get you back to your cocky self and get you outta this god damn funk."

"I... Guess."

"Good. Cause I'm not dealing with 'Pouty Ben', we're gonna have fun!" Kevin pointed at the brothel.

"Are you sure about this?" Rook asked

"Don't wimp out on me now." Kevin deadpanned as they walked in.

As they entered, they saw a red carpet laid reception area with the host there, it was a tanned skinned woman with bleach blonde hair and wearing a skimpy shirt. "Ah~! Welcome, Sirs. What brings you to 'The Sweet Lust'?" The woman asked

"This guys ex-fiance cheated on him and dumped him when he proposed. Laughed in his fave. So we brought him here to her lucky and cheer himself up. And since we are here, me and our other friend would like a lovely lady as well." Kevin explained

"Yeah... Thanks Kev." Ben grumbled

"Oh~, you poor man. Well, we have a fine selection of women that you can choose from." The receptionist answered.

"Is that right?" Rook asked curiously.

"Oh, a Revonnagander. A pleasure to meet you, sir." The receptionist responded. "It's not often we meet one of your species here."

"Really?" he asked, a bit shy now that the focus was on him

"But, we welcome all species here. As long as they adhere to the rules, of course." She answered, passing over a card and a catalogue book of girls for the guys to share.

Ben blinked as Kevin started flicking through the pages, having never been to one of these places before... While also having the most sex out of the three even if it was with fewer girls "Hmm... Ooh, she's cute." Kevin smirked as he landed on a picture of a blonde haired girl, wearing pink frilly underwear.

"Looks too much like my cousin Lucy, it'd be weird." Ben shook his head

"Then choose a different girl." Kevin answered, turning to the host "This lady, please."

"Of course." She answered, ringing the girl up.

Ben sighed heavily and passed the book to Rook. "Here. You choose."

"Wh-m-me?" Rook stuttered, the most nervous/innocent of the group. He coughed and blushed, flicking through the book

"Cause I can't pick right now." Ben waved off.

"V-very well." Rook answered, flicking through the catalogue and landed on a sweet looking girl with candy-coloured panties. This girl, please?"

"Of course." the tanned woman nodded and all attention was once again on Ben

He gave out a heavy and incredulous sigh, flicking through the book, seeing the various girls inside. There he made his decision, a tanned girl with bleached hair, above average breasts and wearing a flag patterned underwear "Yeah. This one." he nodded

"Excellent. They've been notified and will be ready for you." The receptionist answered

"Sweet!" Kevin smirked.

"Cool." Ben nodded weakly

The receptionist typed on the computer and nodded. "They are rooms: 20, 10 and 3 respectively." She pointed to Kevin, Ben and then Rook, giving them a room key.

"Thanks." Kevin smiled, taking the key and left.

"Here we go." Rook gulped

'Room 10... on brand for me, I guess.' Ben thought to himself, taking his key and walked to the room. With the boys separating to their own rooms, they each met their girls sitting on their beds "Hello." Ben gulped as he saw the girl

"Heya~, I'm Lacey. Thanks for choosin' me." The lady smiled, giving her best customer service to him. Lacey was a tanned skinned woman with C/D-cup breasts, wearing a flag motif underwear and bleached blonde hair, brown eyes and a subtle amount of makeup. She was beautiful and actually sounded kind "Oh wow! You're Ben 10, aren't you?!" she gasped in wonder

"I'm. Yeah. Yes, I am." He nodded, knowing his reputation precedes him, though at this point he was being more humble.

"I can't believe-! Sorry , I've never been with a hero before." Lacey apologised and composed herself. She suddenly looked all nervous and a bit self doubting "Well I'll make sure to make your night magical then!" she smiled and patted the bed for him to sit "How do you want to start?"

"I... I don't. How about a feel?" He asked, trying to be a gentleman, but also he wasn't on his A-Game, being in his human self after so long.

"Of course, go ahead." She smiled, pushing her chest forwards

Ben reached out and groped Lacey's breast, feeling it over her bra and how it filled his hand almost perfectly "Wow..."

*with Rook*

"Your hands are so soft, Mr Rook." Bree gasped as she was being teased by Rook's hands, teaching and praising him.

"Thank you." he muttered, his hands rolling over his girls outer thighs and ass

"You can be a little rougher. I'm not made of glass." She instructed. "Some women love a man in charge."

Rook nodded with a gulp, his trip tightening lightly as his claws dug into her skin a bit. Not enough to draw blood, but to be 'rough'

"Ah~! That's it. N-Now. Try and pleasure my breasts." Bree informed him, almost ordering him.

"Okay." he nodded

*with Kevin*

"Oh, wow~!" Kevin moaned as he felt his member being rubbed by his girl's breasts after she lubed up.

"How are my breasts, Sir?" The blonde-haired girl asked as the scented oils of her breasts where massage into his member

"Fantastic!" Kevin smiled as he looked down at her flowing blonde hair. "Glad I picked ya, Steph."

"Really?" she asked with a flutter of her eyes

"Yeah. You're a special girl; you know that, right?" He asked, cupping her chin.

"I bet you say that to all the girls." she teased

"Cause it's true with you." He answered, before seeing her take a condom packet and opened it with her teeth.

*with Ben*

Ben was on top of Lacey, kissing her neck as she looped her legs around his waist. It was like she was enjoying this more than him. But she was getting excited and wet, even staining her panties from her love juices in joy. Ben grunted as his naked member brushed her panty clad slit, his teeth nipping at her neck

"Ah-ah~! Mr Tennyson!" Lacey moaned as she felt her body shuddering from the nipping and brushing of Ben's member.

"I... I want to do it now." he panted

Lacey nodded and exposed herself, stripping off her bra and panties with ease, since they were removable, helping out Ben with his own clothes now, imagining how the Hero of the Universe would be. She gasped. A large ten inch long, seven inch thick member slapping down onto her pussy "Wh-what a monster~!" She commented, mesmerised by it.

"Here I go." Ben warned, slowly pushing inside of her.

"A-AH~!"

*With Rook*

Rook was laying on the bed, moaning as he looked up at the beautiful visage moving up and down on his crotch

Bree was bouncing slowly on top of him, feeling his hot red member penetrate her slowly as her C-Cup breasts bounced from inside her candy-striped bra and her brown chocolate hair bounced with each thrust "Oooh~! YES!" she moaned, bouncing on his member like a rabbit

"Bree. This is magnificent!" Rook gasped, holding her hips to keep her in place. "You are truly talented!"

"Yes! Like that!" she moaned as she moved her hips faster "Your cock is hitting all the right places!" she shuddered "It's so different than a human cock! Oh fuck it feels good!"

Rook continued to pump his cock into Bree, all the while he was enjoying her body, even reaching up to her breasts.

*With Kevin*

"Ah~! You stud! Ram me!" Steph moaned as Kevin fucked her pussy in the doggy-position.

Kevin smirked and grunted, giving her ass a hard slap

"Ah! You're an animal, Mister!" Steph moaned as she was being used like this, not that she didn't mind since she was trained so well.

"You don't know the half of it!" he grinned as he gripped the metal bed frame

And within seconds, Kevin's entire body became metal, even his erection inside of Steph was now metal. "AH~! S-So cold! Smooth! Ah!"

*with Ben*

Lacy was moaning as she was stretched out by Ben's monster member, her pussy was stretched out to past-human limits. Ben was on top, thrusting carefully as he knew this would hurt her...but she seemed to love it.

"Fuck!" he grunted. He had only had three women before, and the one of them he didn't sleep with. He had only had sex with Julie and Kai before this, the furthest he and Ester had a chance to go was giving each other oral. But he had spent the past two years exclusively fucking Kai. This new pussy was... magical

"I-I'm cumming~!" Lacyrepeated. Over and over those two words, feeling Ben's hard long shaft deep inside of her. Before she squirted over his cock and felt the condom inside of her fill. Her eyes rolled up into her head, feeling the condom balloon in her womb

It felt fantastic!

*with Rook*

Rook was sitting gently with Bree, having just enjoyed his first time with an Earth woman...And honestly. He just felt like cuddling with her "That. That was spectacular, Bree."

"It was the most unique one I've ever had." she admitted with a smile "So... are you all finished?"

"I believe so." He nodded, before Bree slid out from his grasp.

"Good." she grinned and licked her lips, going down to suck his cock

*with Kevin*

"You. Are. Crazy." Steph panted as she was now sprawled out on the bed, exhausted at how much stamina Kevin had.

"Sorry for the shock. But I did say you were a 'special girl'." He smiled, sitting back and enjoying his rest. He had came over her face and chest, and she looked gorgeous like that

"Oh? Why?" she asked

"Well, I might come back and see you again." Kevin smirked

*next day*

"I know I said this last night. But, thanks Kevin. I really needed that." Ben answered, patting his best friend's back.

"Hey, it's what bro's are for." Kevin answered. The three where at the Plumber's cafeteria, sat at their own table

"It was heavenly." Rook sighed softly, head in hands

"I mean it was good... but it wasn't that good buddy." Ben commented "I mean it felt wonderful to be with a different woman for the first time in two years, and being allowed to do it in my human form for the first time in about three, but it was kinda average."

"Eh, easily above average. But not as good as Rook is making it out to be." Kevin shrugged

"No! It was a heavenly experience! Amazing!" Rook responded passionately

...

"Wow. We all went to the same place but had vastly different experiences." Ben pointed out

"True. Weird." Kevin blinked before he laughed "Hey, you know what would be funny? If we wrote reviews for the place."

"Ha! Yeah." Ben laughed as food was placed in front of them

"Here you go." A woman said, slightly grumbling

"Thanks Swift." Ben nodded.

Swift had once been part of an evil group called the Rooters who where out to kill Ben... they failed, obviously. She spent her time in the Null Void and a few other such things until she was 'reformed'. Now she worked at the Plumber HQ diner and cafeteria as a waitress. Swift was a slightly below average height woman with deep maroon skin. She had about B-Cup, but could be mistaken for a A-Cup if she wasn't wearing skin tight cloths, and an admittedly impressive ass.

She had two red/pink eyes, with a similar looking gem on her forehead. She had a yellow head crest that went up her nose, splitting apart at the forehead gem before going along her eyebrows and then pushing upwards as a set of horns. She had three fingers and a long curly tail. Her lips where pained black and she had short, chin length dark red hair that was so dark it almost looked black

She wore a black waitress outfit, a tight knee-length skirt with sleeves that went halfway down her upper arms and had a small cut out to show her chest a bit. There where white accents around the neckline of her outfit and at the ends of her sleeves. She also had some shoes that went halfway up her shins

"Whatever." she muttered bitterly "What's got you all happy, weren't you a walking depression pool just yesterday?" she asked, her tone showing a fraction of concern in it

"Nah, I'm fine." Ben waved off

"We took him to a brothel and had a glorious night with some amazing women!" Rook proclaimed, a bit too loudly causing everyone to stare

"Oh bother." Ben grumbled while Kevin was holding back his laughter

...

"Perverts." Swift huffed and walked away, her tail knocking Rook's drink into his lap

"AH! COLD!" Rook yelled as he fell over

"Well that went well." Ben groaned

"Why? You trying to get in her pants now?" Kevin joked

"NO!" Ben snapped with a mad blush as Rook pulled himself back up from under the table

"You know... thinking about it, maybe we SHOULD do that review thing." Kevin commented

...

"What?" the two blinked

"Come on guy, it'll be hilarious!" Kevin urged "Just harmless fun and people are gonna know we are shitting about, it'll be awesome!"

"I don't know..." Ben hummed

"Okay." Rook nodded

"Rook?!" Ben gasped

"I wish to share the news of the wonderful night I experienced!" Rook said dramatically

"... Okay. Okay. Fine." Ben groaned

"Cool." Kevin nodded and got to work, quickly making an Extranet site "Okay. So... we need to make mini profiles, so people can judge us properly." Kevin commented as he started typing before showing it to the others

Kevin E Levin, badass Osmosian
Age: 24
Raised on Earth
Currently single, been with a long time girlfriend until last year when she realised she was a lesbian
Outside of this business, I have slept with around 20 women of various species, including my previously listed ex

"Something like this?" Kevin shrugged

"Yeah, I guess that works." Ben nodded "But really, 20?"

"Alright! Rook, your turn!" Kevin urged

"Alright." Rook nodded, typing away

Blonko Rook, Rule Abiding Revonnahgander
Age: 23
Born on Revonnah
Single, solely focused on my job as a member of the intergalactic law enforcement, The Plumbers. Only one sexual encounter.

"Seriously? 20 different girls?" Ben asked with a raised eyebrow.

"What? I'm being honest here." Kevin responded

"Your turn, Ben." Rook passed the chair to him.

"I know, I know." Ben answered and typed away. Ben grumbled before turning the screen around, showing the profile he'd come up with "Here; how's this?" Ben asked

Benjamin K Tennyson, Ben 10
Age: 23
Born on Earth.
Single. Hero of Bellwood and wielder of the Omnitrix. Been with only three people.

"... It is quite small of a description." Rook commented

"I woulda thought your ego would've filled the page." Kevin answered

"Short. Sweet. Simple. If I put everything down that we did I'd be here all day." Ben listed off and pointed out

"True." Both Kevin and Rook answered in unison

"Rate them on a 1 to 10 scale? 1 being worst, 10 best?" Kevin suggested as the three started typing their reviews

"That works for me." Ben answered

"Perhaps we should also include our persona thoughts? Give our opinion rather than just a mere number." Rook added

"Sure, we can do that." Kevin answered

"Swift, three coffee's please!" Ben called as the three typed

"Sure thing!" She called back.

Kevin typed on his Review of 'The Sweet Lust' girl he was with.

Kevin

Last night at The Sweet Lust was frigging great. They had a whole catalogue of girls ranging from 'cute' to 'hot'. The lady I was with was a sexy number who could charm the skin off a snake.

Kevin took a sip of his coffee, getting back to work

She was wild, kinky and hot as hell. Boy did she know what to do. The only problem is that it was fairly similar to a lot of girls I've been with in the past. It was fucking fun but didn't stand out that much

7

"Okay, Rook. Your turn." Kevin let the Plumber Revonnahgander write.

"Thank you." Rook answered

Rook

The previous night was the start of something amazing for me. The start of a new way of life. The woman I was with showed me how to pleasure women and how to be 'rough', as it were, with her.

Rook rubbed the back of his neck before taking a drink of coffee.

Her womanly parts wrapped around me, making my member feel an ectasy I thought was impossible. My first time was much different compared to that of last night. It felt so different, so wonderful and magical. And her screams where that of pure deeply. I defiantly recommend, especially if you have never been with a human female before.

9

"Alright, Ben. Here you are." Rook spoke as he pulled back and let him at the keyboard.

"Thanks." Ben answered, taking the last of his coffee before typing away.

Ben

I have to admit, I was apprehensive about going to 'The Sweet Lust'. After being in a depressive state this was a great breath of fresh air. The lady who serviced me was wonderful, kind, eager. Though I don't know if it was from being with a hero or if she was just doing her job. She was fantastic, beautiful and to be honest it was nice to try out being a human for once when having sex.

8

The group sat back, proud of themselves

"So... we send it off now?" Ben asked

"Yeah, of course." Kevin nodded and clicked 'send' on their reviews.

Posting their small one page site to the extranet, and mainly the Plumber's HQ on earth

*time skip*

"I'm off to work." Ben spoke as he walked out of the house.

"Bye, son!" His parents responded, hearing the door shut.

Ben inhaled slowly and sighed heavily... before seeing Kevin drive up and screeched in stop "Hey Kev, what's up?" Ben asked as he jogged up to the car, worried there was some big attack

"Dude! You are not gonna believe what happened on our page!" Kevin called out, through the windows.

"What page?" Ben asked, getting into the car

"Okay, okay, okay!" Kevin panicked as he was driving away with Ben inside. "Y'know how yesterday we uploaded those reviews?"

"Yeah, that was yesterday." Ben answered rolling his eyes.

"Okay, it seriously 'blew up' on the extranet!" Kevin answered before he stopped at a red light.

...

"Wait, what?!"

"Check your phone." Kevin answered as he drove to the Plumber HQ.

Ben shrugged and did as he was told, going to their page and as he looked at the page... his jaw dropped. "What the fuck?"

"That's what I said!" Kevin agreed as he continued to drive.

"But. How? Why? It was just three guys dicking around! How did this happen?" Ben asked

"Dude, you're saying, verbatim, what I said two hours ago." Kevin responded

"'Verbatim'?" Ben deadpanned

"I picked up some words from Gwen; okay?" Kevin answered

"Look at these comments! Is that even a real number?" Ben flicked through the page.

"Check the 'pinned comment'." Kevin pointed, as he drove up.

Ben blinked and did just that. There it was, the first comment... It was from 'The Sweet Lust'.

Just want to say, thank you to our patrons from last night for ranking our girls.
And if any of you want to experience our girls, we'll be awaiting you.

Ending with a heart emoji at the message and the logo of the establishment.

"D-Did we just increase their revenue or something?" Ben asked

"There is a website to check that stuff, I did before I picked you up, and we fucking did! Last night they made nearly twice what they normally do!" Kevin explained, the two getting out of the car... To see Swift, who was holding out three paychecks

"Here." She spoke in a monotone voice, handing them out.

"What's this for?" Ben asked as he took one, while Kevin two the other two.

"What you did last night. One of those is Rook's, Kevin." Swift answered. "Your little reviews have made a huge splash in Plumber HQ."

"Huh?" Kevin blinked

"Your little... Reviews... Gave lots of to our site. And your page for a *lot* of views. So just take the damn money you earned today." She huffed

The two nodded, taking the checks... And nearly passing out as they saw the number on it

"This is insane!" Ben yelled

"Yeah, for joke 'reviews' on a Brothel!" Kevin agreed, laughing "... Let's find Rook."

"Right. Thanks Swift." Ben nodded and waved, the two sprinting off. They hurried through the building before they found Rook near the training room... Surrounded by guys laughing and thanking him for the reviews, how it gave them confidence to go and try the next step with their human girlfriends or going to a brothel or so on

"Y-You are all welcome." Rook panicked gently as he was overwhelmed.

"ROOK!" Ben called in excitement

"Okay guys, back up! Back up!" Kevin ordered, pushing past them

The people backed up and let the two pass, getting to Rook and pulling him out.

"Dude! That blog post has gotten insanely popular!" Ben cheered, passing Rook his check

"Oh... my... goodness..." Rook stuttered

"Dude." Ben commented "Look... at... how much we made! And this is being split in three! This... we could make this a fucking carrier!"

"Is? Was that a joke?" Rook blinked as he heard that, looking at his cheque.

"Huh?" Both Ben and Kevin asked

"Pardon my language, but you said a 'fucking career'." Rook answered

...

Facepalm

"How did you catch that?" Ben groaned as he heard that.

"Correction. How did I not notice that?" Kevin snarked

"But... do you really think we should do that?" Rook asked "Make this a... side job?"

"Dude. Did you not see the numbers on these checks?!" Kevin shot back

"But... we can't just keep going?" Ben commented, now having some slight doubt in this "I mean we will loose people real fast if all we do is human brothels and it will also get boring to do fast. But it isn't like any other species have brothels or anything, right?" Ben asked, now upset as Rook and Kevin shared a look as if a light bulb went off in their heads

...

"Right?" Ben asked again

*time skip*

"Oh... my... god..." Ben blinked, looking at the pages and pages of intergalactic brothels across the galaxy. Tetramand brothels on Luna Lobo, Kineceleran places on Terradino. There where all over the place!

"Yep. And they're all waiting for us to review them." Kevin smirked

"Seriously? We've only been to one brothel." Ben answered

"I believe Kevin means 'we are to go to these places too review them'."Rook clarified.

"... oh..."

"Well if we are going to do this we need to improve our site." Kevin added "We made it very bare bones since it was just a joke."

"I...Yeah. Okay." Ben nodded in response.

"Let's go." Kevin encouraged

*time skip*

The three where now at the cafeteria once again, all three with holographic key boards as they worked on the website "What logo should we have?" Rook asked

"Probably not going to use the Omnitrix, people might think the Plumbers sanctioned this." Ben answered

"Hmm... A mix of a black, blue and green colour scheme." Kevin said absentmindedly, setting up the Web pages design

"So the main page. A page about us reviewers. A page about the places we go to, their location, the species of girls there and a link to their reviews. And a page with links to review we do." Rook said as he worked

"Should we expand our bios?" Ben asked, designing a small logo

"It would be informative to anyone older or younger than us who want to experience these things." Rook answered

...

"Age restriction. We gotta make this age-restricted!" Ben pointed

"Fuck! Yeah, almost forgot that!" Kevin groaned, getting to work on that

"I apologise for bringing it up." Rook apologised

"Don't be, good work." Ben answered

"Okay, so after this; where do we go?" Kevin asked as he worked

"Huh?"

"The next brothel; keep up, Ben." Kevin answered "I mean there's a lot of places we can go to."

"Oh..." Ben blinked "I haven't even thought of that. Er... Damn, I'm not sure."

"Hmm. There is a place I know of when I was doing reconnaissance." Rook brought up making the two turn to him

"Where is it?" Ben asked

*time skip *

"This is the place?" Ben asked as he looked up at the place Rook chose.

"Do I even WANT to know how you learned about this place?" Kevin followed up.

"It is better if you do not." Rook answered as the three stood in front of a large hollowed-out tree with lit windows and a large sign that read 'Just Swinging'.

"This isn't the kinda place I think it is, is it?" Ben asked nervously

"I am sure that it is just a naming scheme." Rook answered as they entered.

"I -really- hope that you're right." Ben hoped

"Relax." Kevin patted his back. The three entered calmly... And it was like walking into a jungle

"Whoa. Okay. Jungle themed." Ben nodded

"Welcome to 'Just Swinging'." The hostess spoke as she dropped from the 'branches', revealing a female Arachnochimp, or for Ben's transformation, Spider-Monkey.

"An Arachnochimp brothel?" Ben blinked in surprise, looking at the woman who seemed to be in her 40's judging by her voice

"That's right...Wait. Ben 10? And the Plumbers?" The woman asked, before looking shocked "We didn't do anything, I swear!"

"No, no, please. Do not worry. We are not here on Plumber Business. We are here for your services." Rook explained

...

"Why didn't you say so!" the woman cheered softly "We've got plenty of lovely ladies for you to choose. Just tell me what you're into? Just one on one or would you like a little more 'adventure'?" The hostess asked.

"'Just the name'? Hey, Rook?" Ben glared

"What're your specialty?" Kevin asked

"We do serve bondage if you're into that sort of thing." The hostess responded and clarified.

"Bondage?" Rook and Ben asked on instinct

"Why yes. It's our specialty." The hostess nodded. "Here, we have several girls to choose from. Please make your choices." She passed out some catalogues, smiling "And if you do Bondage, make sure to the girl you are choosing either a dom or sub depending on your preference of position."

"Thank you. We appreciate it." Rook smiled, respectfully nodding and looked at the girls

"'Subs and doms'? Jeez, I thought this was just weird sex." Ben admitted, even though he did something similar with Kai... though she was always in control... And he admittedly really liked it. And thinking back to his ex-girlfriend, and how their nights where while the wound was fresh... He missed it
"I think... I'll choose this girl! " he said and pointed at a picture, which had the word DOM written under it in bold red text "With the Bondage option!"

"WHAT?!" Kevin and Rook yelled in shock

"Excellent!" the hostess smiled, looking at who he had picked

"Dude, are you serious?!" Kevin turned Ben around and looked him right in the eyes.

"I must agree. The font, colour and size means that this particular woman must be exceptionally trained in bondage and for professionals!" Rook followed up in worry. making Ben shrug

"Your funeral." The two sighed heavily and looked at the catalogue.

"I'll take this girl." Kevin said, pointing at a girl with 'SUB' under her picture "With Bondage."

"Er... Her, no Bondage." Rook added, pointing to another picture

"Understood." The hostess nodded and contacted the girls. "Please enjoy the girls and remember their respective safe-words. We do implore you."

The three nodded and went down the halls

"Here is my room." Rook commented, going into his room

"Have fun with your insanity, Ben." Kevin commented, going into his a few moments later

"Yeah yeah." Ben rolled his eyes and went into the final room

"My my. This is an... Interesting surprise." A sensual female voice commented from the dark bedroom, Ben blinking as he looked around

"Hello? Where are you?" he asked

"Strip first. And then you may see your mistress." she commented commanding, Ben only seeing four orange eyes in the shadows

Ben shrugged and calmly stripped like it was nothing, dropping the clothing to the ground

"Oh my~! Ben 10 sure has a monster!" the woman chuckled, spotting Ben's still soft cock

"Thank yo-GAH!" Ben responded, yelled in shock as his vision was assaulted by the lights suddenly turning on
After adjusting he blinked a few times to help his vision before he looked at the woman he would be spending the night with now that he could see her

She was a deep shade of blue, four small orange eyes nodded behind a red domino mask a modified girdle that accommodated her four arms, blue and black fur covered her body with only B-Cup breasts poking through and leather heeled-shoes made especially for her species "You should learn, Ben 10. Keep your eyes closed when it's dark." The mistress ordered

"Good tip. I'll keep it in mind." he said genuinely

"Now. Sit." She ordered, using her tail as a whip.

*with Kevin*

Kevin hummed as she entered his room, seeing the shy looking ape girl before him

She had short black hair with light blue and black fur, wearing a collar and string leather bikini. "Thank you for choosing me, Master." The girl bowed to him.

"Cute. As heck." Kevin smiled as he gazed upon her "What's your name?"

"Ginny, Master." She answered, introducing herself humbly.

"Well, Ginny, I think we're going to have some good fun." Kevin responded

*with Rook*

"Thank you for choosing me, sir." The lady Rook chose responded as she laid on the bed awaiting him. She was bustier than the other women, with a slimmer waist. Her eyes were pink and sparkled in lust

"Not at all." Rook answered as he approached. "You are very beautiful."

The lady laughed at that, feeling flattered. "I bet you say that to all the girls." The woman jested

"Not particularly."

"Well then, Sir. Shall we begin?" She asked, sliding off the bra and exposed herself.

*with Ben*

The hero grinned as he sat there, his hands and feet tied to the bed posts with a blindfold placed around his eyes "You're excited. Guess this is your first time?" The woman asked, snapping her tail like a whip.

"In my human form. And with a member of your species. Yes." Ben admitted

"Well. Then I shall try not to disappoint." She answered "Now. Beg."

"Please... Please mistress! Use my stupid cock! Please let my filthy dick feel good! All I want is to make you feel good!" he begged

"...Wow. You're really thirsty. I like it." The woman smiled

Two of her hands slipped down and gripped his member, rubbing him

"Two-handed handjob. Not many can say I've given this to them." The Mistress answered while her free upper hands got to work. One hand playing with Ben's nipples while the other slipped their fingers into Ben's mouth

*With Rook... Quickly!*

Rook panted as his girl bobbed her head up and down his cock, sucking it with well trained skill

"This. Is wonderful. You have skill." Rook moaned, holding her head. "Such a wonderful feeling!"

The woman smiled internally as she heard that, since she was servicing a Plumber. She just hummed, taking more of his cock into her mouth

*with Kevin*

Kevin chuckled, seeing his hard work as his girl was in rope Bondage using her own web. He held her hips, slamming deep within her pussy as he rocked her in a swinging web made of her own webbing "You like that?" he teased

"Ah! Yes! Yes, Master! I love this! Fuck my worthless pussy!" She moaned as she felt her hips slap against Kevin's

"You dirty whore." he smirked arrogantly

"I'm cumming! I'm cumming! I'm cumming~! AH~!" She moaned and climaxed

*with Ben*

"Oh fuck~" Ben moaned, a rope wrapped around his cock while his mistress road him like a bucking bronko

"That's it! Fuck me! Fuck me with your massive cock!" Ben's mistress moaned as she bucked her hips and fucked his cock "You love it, don't you?!"

"Ah! Yes! Yes I- Fuck!" Ben moaned and came inside of his condom making her gasp, the web tied around his cock breaking as he orgasmed

'H-How much can this human make?' She thought to herself, feeling her body shudder as she KNEW how strong her Web was.. And feeling the condom literally ballooning inside her

*with Rook*

"M-Mister Rook! Ah~, f-fuck me harder! I-I'm so close!" The girl moaned heavily.

"Sari, you feel so good!" Rook moaned

Sari, his chosen girl, moaned and almost screeched happily. Feeling Rook rub her clit while he rocked her body.

Her limbs wrapped around him like a venus fly trap as she screamed, cumming around his member. Rook exhaled heavily as he had finished, letting her fall limp into his arms. 'This. Was a good decision.' He thought to himself

*with Kevin*

"A-a-a-a-a-aH~!" Kevin's girl moaned as she was being fucked in the ass by her Master at this point, who had absorbed some wood "You like that? The pain?" he teased

"I-I'm a slut! I love pain!" She moaned before she came over his cock

"Yeah, little slut!" he groaned happily, before he climaxed and filled the condom.

"AH~!" She screamed happily, feeling her ass filled

*with Ben*

"You. Are. Free, Pet." Ben's mistress panted, freeing Ben as she was stuffed and exhausted.

"Thank you mistress. That was wonderful." Ben admitted "Are you sure you don't want me to pleasure you?"

"You've already done a lot." She answered. "Are all you humans this energetic?"

"You've never had a human before?" Ben asked, his fingers brushing her stomach

"Not really. Some prudes honestly. Never experiencing other things." She answered before she gasped, feeling Ben's fingers inside her

"Well if I'm right, hopefully you'll be able to try out all sorts of species soon." he assured "All the pets you could ever want, mistress."

"D-Don't make. Promises. You can't. Keep!" She moaned, bucking her hips on his fingers.

*Time Skip*

"Well, that wasn't as bad as I thought it'd be." Kevin answered as he drove the space ship back to the Plumber base

"I am glad you kept such an open mind." Rook responded

"Should we do the reviews on the road? We can each take turns driving." Ben suggested

"You ain't driving my ship, Tennyson." Kevin joked "I'll go first. Rook, take the wheel."

"Very well." Rook answered as he drove while Kevin gave his review

Today we went to an Arachnochimp Brothel called 'Just Swinging'. Despite it's name, it is not what you think. Just a jungle themed joke.

The Arachnochimp girls specialize in bondage, S&M play shit. And as such each of had our own experiences with a different girl, to see exactly what this place had to offer.

Kevin's Review

So... I got a sub girl with the bondage option. Boy was she hot, and the stuff you could do with the web ropes was just... ooh boy~! So hot!
The girl knew exactly what she was doing!

... Unfortunately I feel like she took the 'sub' stuff too far. I had to tell her to do every little thing. After a blow job she sat there for nearly two whole minutes before I asked her if she was going to swallow it. She never took initiative, she just sat around and waited to be ordered around. Something to keep in mind if you order from here.

8

"Alright Rook, swap back." Kevin called

"Understood." Rook nodded, signalling Ben to take over.

Ben saw this and smirked, sliding into the seat while Rook walked over.

"Thank you." Rook answered as he took over the review page.

Rook's Review

I have just sampled a lovely woman from the Arachnochimp brothel called 'Just Swinging', as previously stated in his own review, it is a pun based on their jungle planet. Their specialities include bondage, S&M roleplay and other such means.

The girl I chose, who I chose to be quite 'vanilla' in terms of the selections, no S&M or bondage option, was quite enthusiastic to service me.

Kevin's voice could quickly be heard. "Who told you, you could drive?!"

Rook and Ben laughed as Rook continued to write his review.

Mind you, I was curious about the other options, but being unsure about all of the choices, I feel like I was overwhelmed for choice. If I were to go back, I would choose some of their other options.

7

"Ben, I believe it is time for your turn." Rook called

Kevin glared down at Ben, who was laughing since he took over the driver's seat. "Okay, okay, I'm coming." He called out as Kevin took over.

The Osmosian huffed and sat down, taking control over the ship again.

"Thanks, buddy." Ben answered as he sat down at the computer.

Ben's Review

'Just Swinging', a heck of a play on words for a S&M joint. Honestly, I thought I was getting something completely different but glad to know what it actually was.

Unlike my compatriots, I went for the 'DOM' option, full-on Mistress and bondage. It was honestly a huge switch up of what I was used to and I enjoyed quite a lot of it.

Ben stopped his writing and shook his head, deleting some of his review before getting back to work

Ben's Review

'Just Swinging', a heck of a play on words for a S&M joint. Honestly, I thought I was getting something completely different but glad to know what it actually was.

Unlike my compatriots, I went for the 'DOM' option, full-on Mistress and bondage. I chose this was I've had experience with this sort of encounter with my ex-girlfriend and do enjoy it, admittedly.

The girl I selected was... she was magical. The perfect sort of possessive, powerful and controlling without going too far to the point where you feel dirty and terrible about yourself afterwords. It was an experience you enjoyed.

And an Arachnochimp woman... oh boy. The stuff they can do with four arms, two legs which can be used as arms and their tail. And having all seven limbs wrapped around you makes you feel both safe and wanted. Highly recommended and will be going back there one day.

9

"And with that we are done." Ben nodded

"You know... before we publish this we need a name for the site and our little group." Rook commented

"Oh, I had that ready!" Kevin smirked "Intergalactic Reviewers!"

...

"Yeah, that's perfect." Ben nodded, sharing a look with Rook

"Agreed." Rook nodded

"Well here we go. Intergalactic Reviewers, first official post." Ben smiled, pressing the button to post the review

*the next day*

"HOLY SHIT!" Ben screamed at the top of his lungs as he looked at the views their reviews had gotten. Well into the hundreds of thousands. The group where in the cafeteria once again at their table, looking at all of the attention their site had gotten

"Must you yell all the time? It is quite unbecoming." Rook rubbed his ears.

"But... Rook!" he complained

"Dude, we get it. Hell, I can't believe it at times." Kevin answered, taking a gulp of his coffee "Ah~."

"Here you go." Swift commented, putting down a plate of doughnuts with three more checks

"Thank you, Swift." Rook spoke politely.

"Cheers." Kevin smiled, as they took their cheques

"You're the best." Ben added as he took the doughnuts...and slowly stared at her body.

"Quit staring or I'll tie you up and leave you on my bed, desperate and needy, until I decide I need release... although looking at your review, you might like that." she joked/teased before walking off

"... Ew." Both Kevin and Rook winced at her remark and the grin on Ben's face.

"Don't knock it till you try it." Ben waved off.

"On that sobering note. Where do you think we should go to next?" Rook asked

"Really? You're that eager for some pussy?" Kevin deadpanned making Rook blush

"Speaking of. Aren't you engaged Rook?" Ben blinked, that situation finally hitting home for him. He'd been so caught up he hadn't realised that situation

"Yes, I am." Rook answered, after clearing his throat.

"... Seriously? I thought you were blue-balled until marriage!" Kevin realised

"Oh no. In my culture, men have to experience and learn about different sexual methods in order to pleasure and worship the women that we marry." Rook clarified.

"... So. Men do all the work, Women reap the benefits?" Kevin asked

"In short terms, yes." Rook nodded. "My father told me he had up to one hundred different experiences before he married my mother."

...

"Duuuude~" Ben and Kevin gasped in shock

"So you basically have an unlimited hall pass until you get married? Lucky for you man!" Ben smiled

"Of course I am. I am engaged to a wonderful woman who I love and I can only hope that I treat her like the goddess she is." Rook answered

...

SLUUUUURP!

Kevin smacked his lips after taking a drink from his coffee "Yep. That made my coffee sweet."

Ben sat back in his chair, slightly upset

"What is wrong?" Rook asked before he remembered the situation with Kai "Oh! Oh god! I'm sorry!" he whined

"It's... did-did you use a contraction?" Ben accepted the apology, before catching his speech making Rook grumble

"Well boys. I think this will be a good building." Kevin said as they all clinked glasses, it was a toast

To the Intergalactic Reviewers!