I do not own Naruto, credits Masashi Kishimoto. Seriously, if I did, it would have made Naruto seriously trainedo by Kakashi or would have made Naruto take being a ninja seriously, in my opinion it's better.
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This story was about what would happen if when Naruto stole the Hokage scroll he was found by Mizuki before Iruka?
Naruto after these events will decide to become a serious shinobi and determined to lay down his life for the village like any good ninja, gradually giving up on his previous dream of becoming a Hokage.
This story occurred to me a long time ago and I wanted to share it with you, at some point I will take it to a YouTube channel, the name of the channel will be the same that I have in fanfiction, if you do not know what it is, go see it filthy pigs, I hope you like it.
Chapter 1:Theft of parchment
Naruto, a boy with blond hair and an imperfect personality, was jumping between the branches of the trees of the village of Konohagakure in a hurry, smiling from ear to ear, the reason? if you looked closely at the child you noticed that along with him he carried a rather large parchment which was fastened with a rope behind him, this parchment was nothing more nor less than the secret parchment of konoha in which he had secret techniques from his village that were created by the very first hokage Hashirama Senju.
But why had he stolen this parchment?
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(Flashback)
'' Don't be mad at Iruka Naruto he just wants you to be strong and that if you manage to pass the genin exam it is because you deserve it '' said Mizuki a chunin with light purple hair and black eyes wearing the standard clothes of konoha and the village bulletproof vest
'' I know Mizuki sensei it's just that this time I really tried hard to pass, I really wanted to be a ninja
"Well if that's the case then I could tell you a secret so you can graduate and be a ninja" a smile reflected on his sensei's face
"Seriously, Mizuki Sensei is not lying" Naruto said a little excited to realize his dream of becoming a ninja
"I give you my word of Naruto I'm not lying I swear I want to help you be a ninja"
"Good," said Naruto starting to jump in cheers, "Well, what do I have to do some test or something like tha"
"Well you will see Naruto what you will have to do is steal the forbidden parchment found in the hokage tower tonight and learn a jutsu if you manage to do this you will be able to pass and become a ninja you understood me Naruto"
"If Mizuki sensei saw that I will learn a jutsu from that scroll and I will become a real ninja" he said holding up a thumb
"Well then I'll see you tonight Naruto see you" Mizuki said thus getting into a shunsin leaving some smoke
(End of Flashback)
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In order to steal Naruto a few hours before, he studied the movements of the ninjas who guarded the hokage tower so he could plan a strategy to steal the scroll without being discovered
At night Naruto managed to infiltrate inside the hokage tower, outwitting the guards and advancing between the corridors until he found the door that Mizuki had told him in which the parchment was.
Before entering the room, Naruto looked down the hallways only to gasp in relief at not noticing anyone who had noticed his presence.
"I think this test is quite easy because Iruka sensei had not told me" Naruto thought opening the door entering and slowly closing the door of the room
Naruto upon entering saw that there were some scrolls arranged on shelves inside the room, slowly entering the room he noticed a parchment inside a showcase of a size bigger than a normal one illuminated by a light that was reflected from a lamp
"So this is the scroll that Mizuki sensei spoke to me" so carefully opening the case and taking the scroll "this is great now I just have to learn a jutsu and I can become a ninja" Naruto thought walking slowly towards the door to head outside From this place
And so after leaving the hokage tower Naruto was attentive if an alarm began to sound or something that indicated that it had been detected or something but it was quite the opposite everything was absolutely silent
"I think I'm great" said the boy out loud
And so a couple of minutes later we can see Naruto running through the forests of konoha
"Well now what I have to do is try to find a place to hide and train until Mizuki sensei finds me and I pass my exam" thought the hopeful boy as he ran
A few moments after Naruto went so far into the woods he ended up finding a cabin which didn't seem like anyone was there.
"Well it's a perfect place to start training" he said as he took off and unrolled the parchment
When reading the first jutsu that was inside the parchment Naruto almost fell headlong almost until I continue reading kage bunshin no jutsu: shadow clone jutsu: rank B ninjutsu: It consists of creating solid copies of the user which can be used for different purposes.
"Because the world hates me, clones are my worst jutsu" she said as anime-style tears started to come out of her eyes
Elsewhere Mizuki was running at full speed in search of the brat fox as he was saying a few moments ago he had warned Lord hokage that Naruto had stolen the hokage parchment instantly the hokage called an ambu so that everyone in the village quickly find Naruto, while he was tasked with alerting Iruka and finding Naruto with only an accent Misuki quickly went to carry out the orders
After warning Iruka Mizuki, he sped off to find the fox.
"I must find out before everyone so I can assassinate him so everyone will recognize me as a hero for assassinating the Kiuby and then I will take the parchment to Orochimaru sama so you can repay me very well"
A while later noises among the bushes alerted Naruto in which he quickly put the parchment back on his back since he did not know what would happen, suddenly a rain of kunais approached from the front towards Naruto in which he managed to dodge them running towards right but what I didn't know is that it had been discovered for a surprise attack
When he felt a noise behind him it was too late since the moment he turned around he managed to see Mizuki with a kunai in his hand just to stab him in the stomach, desperate Naruto tried to block him, although he was strong Naruto was in an uncomfortable position which gave Mizuki the advantage that in the end he ended up embedding kunai in the child's stomach causing him to cry out in pain, moving away from it instantly and withdrawing the kunai from the stabbed area only to take it and protect himself with the while his hand and kunai were stained with his blood
"Mizuki sensei what are you doing because you did this to me?" Asked the desperate boy as he saw his elixir of life gradually leave his body from his stomach.
"Seriously you have not noticed even a stupid fox" he said starting to get closer showing on his face a psycho expression while a smile adorned his face
"Realize that" Naruto said starting to back away
"Okay, I'll tell you because in a few moments you will no longer live and what better way to say goodbye to this world than knowing the truth"
"What a truth you are talking about" he said feeling the pain increase every time he took another step back
"Your child is the nine tailed fox demon that attacked the village 12 years ago. It is within you, since the fourth sealed it to save us, it chose you as you were an orphan child and nobody would care about you" He said starting to take another kunai out of his ninja bag
Hearing this, Naruto was shocked, assimilating everything he had heard and trying to make it fit with his day to day in the village.
"Now I will free this village from you demon and they will name me the hero who killed the beast and accomplished what the room could not" he said throwing a kunai directly at Naruto's head to kill him on the spot
While this was happening Naruto in his mind reviewed the times when he was separated from the children thanks to the parents when he only wanted to play with them, when he was kicked out of the stores or they sold him everything at a high price or when he was beaten and hurt by villagers as a child but all these memories were cut when a whistling sound in the air pulled Naruto from transe only to notice that a kunai was close to impacting him
He tried to run to the side only to find that he was locked between some trees by going back so far, having no other idea present Naruto leaned back in a vain attempt to save his life
But this was not entirely perfect since he ended up receiving a cut in his left eye which had not damaged the sight of the Uzumaki by miracle
This made the boy start to get scared since the probability that he would be killed if no one helped him was quite large, without wasting a second more and how he managed to perform the signs to invoke a number of four clones all equal to him and with the scrolls on their backs, between the smoke and the surprise of Mizuki Naruto took the opportunity to interchange with a clone the real parchment and give him an instruction while the three clones took an alignment in front of them to take the most attention from Mizuki
"I want you to give this to Iruka since he is the only one I can trust, that Mizuki used you to steal it and that the real one is fighting Misuki and is winning, after that I want you and Iruka to give him a hokage sama and explain the situation to him and tell him to send some reinforcement as quickly as possible since I don't know how long it will last you understood correctly
"The clone nodded clearly enough to make Naruto smile.
"Well then go" Naruto said and so the clone hastily started to jump from branch to branch heading towards the forest exit Seeing this action Mizuki thought that this jutsu had been used to surprise and escape so that he could warn the Hokage
"I won't let you demon escape" only to be stopped in its tracks by a kunai who nailed himself to the ground before he jumped for the clone.
"Mizuki I am still here you do not have to divert attention for a clone remember who is the one with the parchment" said making Mizuki smile maniacally and sit in the real Naruto
"I see that you are somewhat smart Naruto that is a rank B jutsu and so to speak a kinjutsu I will give you some credit for that now I see what the last dead is capable of" he said starting to take one of his giant shuriken that he had hanging in the back
"Hehe, yeah, well, when things get serious, I can be somewhat smart sometimes," he said, smiling, making Mizuki feel angry for this action, now all I have to do is hold on a little longer before someone comes to help me, he thought.
"No one can help you demon and when I get here the only thing they will see is your corpse full of blood on the ground" next act Mizuki started running towards Naruto who prepared himself in the guard position of the academy waiting for the attack
Suddenly Mizuki while running launched the shuriken that went at full speed towards the group of clones and Naruto who managed to dodge it by jumping, this term embedded in the bark of a tree a few meters from where Naruto was
Focusing on Mizuki they noticed that he was no longer there, but suddenly his body emerged from the earth as if he had plunged into water and quickly killed a clone and thus headed towards another clone with a smile to also kill him, but this did not happen. It turned out the clone ended up blocking his attack and along with another copy and the real Naruto began attacking him with a combination of punches, and kicks but all these attacks were blocked by Mizuki
At one point the blondes managed to intercept him off guard by getting a clone to punch him in the face, while another clone managed to punch him up the jaw and the original naruto managed to punch him in the stomach hard enough. to make him grunt in pain, so after this attack combo the three Naruto tried to take the last giant shuriken from Mizuki succeeding in his task and walk away kicking him away as they jumped back taking distance
"You are a fucking shit you know" said Mizuki spitting a bit of blood as he put himself in a battle position apparently they had broken a tooth or something
"Yes, now why don't we continue" he said grimacing at the pain in his stomach, I hope the clone has already warned Iruka, 5 minutes ago he left here, he thought as he ran towards a clone to retake the match and the third clone was left behind with the shuriken
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With the clone this a few moments ago he had emerged from the depths of the forest and was heading at full speed towards the hokage tower since he thought that most likely someone would be there to warn him, that and because he did not know where he was. Iruka
"El jefe tuvo que haber pensado de que no encontrariamos a Iruka"dijo y como si de un milagro se tratara antes de llegar hacia la torre hokage un grupo de cuatro ninjas junto a Iruka le habían detenido el paso
"The chief must have thought that we would not find Iruka" he said and as if it were a miracle before reaching the hokage tower a group of four ninjas next to Iruka had stopped him
The other was his partner Kotetsu Hagane wearing a white bandage over his nose black hair and eyes of the same color and the standard shinobi outfit of the village, these two shinobi knew Naruto from his pranks and Naruto knew them as they were the guardians of the door
Instead the other two ninjas Naruto did not know who they were: one of them was tall with long brown hair and eyes of the same color, his band carried it back and apparently he wore a senbom in his mouth, he wore the standard jounin outfit. The other was a shinobi a little shorter than the previous one, he had black hair and eyes, he wore a bandana in the shape of a head scarf, he had dark circles under his eyes and on his back he had a sword
"Until we finally found you Naruto now can you explain why you stole the hokage scroll" Iruka said threatening the clone
"There is no time to talk Iruka sensei Mizuki cheated on me to steal the hokage parchment into believing that this was a false test in order to graduate I have to give the parchment to Grandpa and help Naruto san"
"Wait if you are here how can you say that you have to help Naruto" said Kotetsu
"I am just a simple shadow clone, the real Naruto exchanged original parchment and told me to bring him to the hokage, he is currently fighting against Mizuki and they are seriously wounded, he told me to ask for help as quickly as possible"
"Wait how long ago did this happen" asked Izumo
"Izumo 5 minutes ago"
"Shit, Genma could you take the scroll to Lord Hokage" Iruka said so the clone giving the scroll to tokubetsu jounin
"Don't worry, Iruka, I'll take him if this boy tells the truth, hurry up or he could die. Izumo, Kotetsu, Iruka, Hayate, follow the clone," said Genma, "thus starting to jump towards the hokage tower
"Well Naruto true where is your true self" Hayate said starting to cough
"It's in this direction fast before things get worse" so everyone starting to follow the clone in a hurry
"Naruto I had to have found you earlier I'm sorry" thought an Iruka who went at full speed in search of his favorite student
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With Naruto he had blocked a backhand blow using his two arms but it was not expected that he would receive a kick in his right side which would throw him a few meters a little when he got up he felt a pain in that side but he hid it, his clone that he had been helping he had dissipated when defending him from an attack by Mizuki that had launched a pair of shurikens which he could not see and he only had one clone left which was hidden among the trees this was still holding the giant shuriken in his hand waiting for the best time to launch it and maybe end your life
Extending this fight so long made Naruto's wounds take their toll as they began to wear him down more.
"I think I have a plan but I hope I don't die trying" he said kneeling just so that Mizuki looked at him funny
"Maybe you give up demon, maybe you already feel death" he said, starting to approach him, taking out the last kunai he had left from his bag
"I can't go on, I'm not too tired"
"In that case I will do you a favor and let you rest" Mizuki said when he was close to Naruto only to end up kicking him in the stomach making him scream in pain and lie on his back holding his wound very tightly, but he was silent when Mizuki approached his face giving him a blow to the nose causing it to start bleeding
"It is only the beginning of your torture demon, you will be here a long time suffering in my hands until I take your life but before I will take what is mine", thus taking the scroll that was tied to Naruto's back with force just to make him dissipate in a column of smoke
"But what the fuck !! Where's the stupid royal scroll" Mizuki said digging the kunai into Naruto's arm for him to speak
"Well the clone that escaped from here had the royal parchment now it is in the hands of the hokage and now in a few minutes the reinforcements will come and help me I think your plan went wrong right Mizuki" he said raising his head only to smile showing his teeth showing that he had won
"Noo !! Damn you son of a bitch demon" he said kneeling on top of the boy hitting Naruto's face causing him to spit out a pair of teeth and start bleeding his gums but he just kept smiling, Mizuki with all the rage that a person started stabbing, cutting, hitting and injuring Naruto while saying "Damn Demon is already dead !!"
"If I die today you will come with me to hell" he said trying to stab Naruto in the heart but a sudden pain arose behind him as he turned back he noticed that there was a giant shuriken stabbing his back
"But how did it happen? I had to win !!" he screamed but was cut off when blood from his neck began to flow quickly staining Naruto's clothes and his, so after a moment he fell back lifeless without knowing that he killed him
"Never let your guard down even if your enemy is weak" Naruto said releasing the blood stained kunai with which he had cut Mizuki's throat clean without remorse, Mizuki forgetting about clone that was hidden and focus on the original Naruto was what killed him, he waited until he was totally focused on him so that his clone launched the shuriken and he could not dodge it. Mizuki's life
Suddenly Naruto began to hear noises approaching which indicated that the support team had arrived, he tried to get up but it was in vain since he instantly fell of knees
"Damn Mizuki all this will leave a mark" he said observing his wounds that went from stabbed in his shoulder, arms, legs, thighs and stomach to cuts in his entire body, bruises in every part of his body and the occasional broken bone but nothing What Naruto couldn't cure himself really?
"Let's go fast, we're close, I don't know what happened to the boss, but apparently he's still alive," said the clone.
"He is right there are shuriken and kunais embedded in the trees" Hayate said confirming the clone's words
Suddenly the clone dropped and began to run on the ground, this act was followed by the ninjas a few moments after the ninjas had managed to reach the battleground too late when they looked around they observed a Naruto apparently bloodied and injured trying standing with the help of a tree, a lifeless body in a pool of apparently recent blood beside him a little far
"Naruto" Iruka shouted starting to run to the aid of the blond ninja being followed by the other shinobi
Before Naruto fell again, he was helped by Iruka taking his right arm and passing it over his neck so that he could walk. This action was also performed by Hayate taking the boy's left arm and passing it over his neck.
"What happened Naruto what happened to Mizuki?" Iruka said worried about Naruto
"Take it easy, Iruka, I took care of it, the village is safe. I murdered Mizuki as a traitor, I am in this state since it was very hard to finish but in the end I ended up winning" he said, coughing up a bit of blood worrying everyone in the place
"I'm fine, I just need to go to the hospital," he said, observing everyone, but he was especially looking at the clone, "a moment later it dissipated, making Naruto smile" so this is how this jutsu works, "he said, drawing Iruka's attention.
"What are you talking about Naruto?"
"Well I read that the kage bunshin serves different functions such as espionage or information gathering and I wanted to approve my clone and well now I know everything he saw" he said surprising Iruka
"I see that you managed to learn a forbidden parchment technique and murdered a traitorous chunin from the village, you would be a good ninja and you would protect the village very well from enemies" said Hayate among some coughs
"Thanks Hayate san I see that you don't hate me for having the kiubi" he said surprising everyone again in the place
"Naruto how do you know this?" Iruka said"
Well Iruka sensei Mizuki told me everything that happened that day and well now I know why people despised me" he said as Iruka and Hayate carried him ready to take him
"I'm glad to see that you took it in a good way Naruto, before we go close your eyes I want to give you a surprise" Iruka said and Naruto ignoring, he felt like his glasses were removed from his forehead to be replaced by a metal plate. which was a little cold, a moment later Iruka told him that there would be eyes, when doing it he noticed that Iruka did not have his shinobi band
"Congratulations Naruto you graduated now you are a shinobi from the village of konoha", upon hearing this Naruto just looked up and noticed that now on his forehead he wore a shinobi band making him smile showing the dried blood of his ensias and the teeth that came out of Naruto after this action Naruto put the glasses on his neck so as not to lose them
"Thanks sensei and thanks Hayate, Kotetsu and Izumo for coming to save me" he said smiling as he looked at everyone
"There is no need for Naruto" they all said to then go to the hospital to leave the injured Naruto
(The next day)
Naruto was receiving the very hell inside the hokage's office or at least he felt that way, the previous night he was escorted to the konoha hospital where when seeing him the nurses turned a blind eye and passed from him, only when Iruka told them he told the doctors to help him since he was quite injured, at that moment they brought a stretcher in which they lay down and took Naruto to a room in which they checked him and healed (some of his milder wounds had healed without scarring , but the deepest wounds and cuts will leave a mark)
In the morning Naruto had to contain a gasp that saw that his face had been ruined, Mizuki son of a bitch a little more and left me without an eye and lifeless commented as he began to remove the bandages and gauze from the body to check his wounds, take your things and get away from this stupid place
If there is something that Naruto hated the most in this world it was hospitals, these places were for sick or old people and he did not want to be there since it was boring and had a depressing air to the place
When reviewing his wounds, he noticed several scars throughout his body, but this did not bother the boy, on the contrary, he thought that it was cooler, the most noticeable scars were the one on his face, the one that was on his abdomen. and then all the stabbings he received in total were like 13, the others were cut of all types and sizes that ran through the body of the Uzumaki there were even some on his back that we will never know how they came, in fact if we know when I neglect his blind spot Mizuki attacked from behind launching a shower of shurikens which all hit the Uzumaki.
When Naruto started to change so he could leave the hospital, he heard that there would be the door and in front of him was an Iruka looking at him with a serious expression
"Naruto maybe you thought about escaping from the hospital without anyone noticing"
"Well not really sensei was going to tell the doctors that I was fine and I would go home" he said putting his bandana on his arm while the glasses had been placed on his neck he had to find a way to wear them without they lost
"Well if that's the case Hokage sama asked me to look for you since he wanted to talk to you" he said making Naruto freeze in the place
"The hokage shit you can tell that he shit" he said lowering his head to think what would come
"Take it easy Naruto is just to inform you about your genin status"
"Really? Then what are we waiting for?" He said, starting to walk as if nothing had happened during the previous hours.
When they arrived at the tower, Naruto and Iruka were warned by the receptionist that the hokage was waiting for them with a nod, they went to the office, when they heard they heard an enter entering only to find the stoic Sarutobi smoking his pipe signing some papers
Looking up from the leaves I notice Naruto and Iruka standing in front of him
"Glad to see you in better shape Naruto-kun" he said as he motioned for the shinobi to take a seat
"Glad to see you too Hokage sama" Naruto said pulling out a smile at the old man
"Well, I suppose you know what you're here for, right?"
"If Iruka sensei had told me it was to talk about my genin status"
"If on the one hand, on the other I want to hear from your words that happened the previous hours with the theft of the forbidden parchment"
"Okay, I think I will start with the longest then", thus beginning to relate what had happened a few hours before, surprising Iruzen and Iruka
"Damn Mizuki always looked so calm but when you tell me all about this Naruto now I see how it really was"
"Naruto-kun thanks for saving the village since if the parchment fell into our hands we would be condemned"
"No thanks, old man. I am a ninja from this village. That means I must protect my home at the cost of my life."
"I see that you have matured and you have changed Naruto, with what you have told me I see that the will of fire is present in you now changing the subject Naruto that you think about the Fourth Hokage" he said making Naruto clench his fists but instantly relaxing again , this action was witnessed by the two men tensing them for touching a sensitive subject for the boy but when they saw him calm down they breathed relief
"I have no problem with the yondaime I don't hate him, but I no longer consider him one of the best hokages, he did what he did to save the village if he sealed the Kiuby in me it was because he believed he could bear all the hatred of the beast that's all, "he said thus surprising Sarutobi more than anything by the statement
"Well Naruto that is all, you have a week before meeting at the academy for the team election, within that week you will have to complete some tokens and take your photo for the genin template now you can retire Naruto" said the Sandaime
Hearing this, Naruto nodded, when he was about to leave, Iruka told Naruto that he wanted to find him tomorrow at the Ninja Academy. This god told him that he would be there and left the office starting to walk through the halls with his hands in his pockets. as he headed towards the exit of the district, when he left and walked a few meters he turned to look at the tower but especially at the hokage faces reviewing each of them with his eyes until he reached the face of the yondaime who quickly under the look and kept walking heading to eat some ramen at his favorite place
Upon reaching Ichiraku Ramen, he sat on a local bench taking some chopsticks while two cooks looked at him with a smile on their faces
"Good morning Naruto I see that you are very happy today" said a slim girl, with brown hair and black eyes, wearing a white dress with folded sleeves, a blue apron with bow-shaped ribbons on top and a white scarf on his head
"Good morning Ayame-chan if I am very happy since yesterday I was assigned to genin" confirming this by showing him his band which he had on his forehead replacing his glasses, "Good morning to you too Teuchin-san" he said naming second cook an elderly looking man, grayish hair, brown skin and some wrinkles on his face, as his daughter wore a similar chef outfit
"Good morning Naruto I'm glad to hear that you graduated from the academy, congratulations" he said taking a smile from the blond boy
"Naruto-kun what happened to your face" Ayame said approaching worried to check her favorite client
"It is nothing Ayame is just a wound, it happened to me training a few days ago, now you can take my order please I am starving" he said making the father and daughter laugh
"Ok Naruto what you want"
"I want two miso ramen and three meat ramen to start" he said as Ayame wrote down and started cooking with her father
While this was happening a Naruto was playing with his wooden sticks thinking about what Iruka wanted to say but out of nowhere a thought came to him
"I have a week to do whatever I want before I start doing my shinobi service, maybe I will train something during this time but first to enjoy the ramen" and as I think a ramen was served in front of him
"Itadakimasu" he said and then started digging into the noodle plate as if there was no tomorrow
(The next day)
A Naruto was walking through the streets of the Leaf Village heading towards the Shinobi Academy with his hands in his pockets (apparently this act had become a new habit of the boy) when an Iruka arrived waiting for him at the doors of the academy
"Naruto, you arrive early, that's a strange thing to see in you," said Iruka, while he would be at the door, making Naruto pass.
"What can I say sensei had nothing to do so I decided to arrive early" he said as he entered the academy being followed by Iruka in which after this action he closed the doors and began to walk in front of the blond, the only thing he did was follow him until both ninjas met on the academy training grounds
"I felt that was what you wanted when you asked me to come here" he commented observing Iruka
"Well Naruto wanted to teach you a jutsu and talk to you before your graduation," he said, making the boy jump.
"You are going to teach me a new jutsu thanks Iruka sensei"
"Ok Naruto now pay close attention this may help you a lot on your way as a ninja"Naruto instantly fell silent and was only attentive to what Iruka had to say
"This jutsu was created by me and it is a tracking and locating jutsu its name is: Chakura no tsuiseki to basho: chakra tracking and locating: rank C jutsu can get to scale in A if it is called perfectly and it has an immense amount of chakra: to perform this jutsu you have to consent and consent to your chakra to be able to make a field of vision within your mind using chakra, when doing it allows you to see people and objects in an advanced state of jutsu, this is a very good Good tracking and locating jutsu but the bad thing is that it uses a lot of chakra as its range lengthens and it is very difficult to master, but the good thing is that it is easy to perform "
"Wait is it means that you used this jutsu to be able to find me when I made jokes, damn it and I thought it was bad trying to hide and camouflage myself I thought it was not for this"
"Wait then don't you wear that orange outfit just to get attention if not to camouflage yourself"
"If Iruka sensei were to see I would use it to be able to paint the hokage faces during the day but right now this bright Orange would not work for my shinobi career I should change it one of these days"
"Naruto is a genius using orange helped him camouflage himself throughout the morning and midday it is incredible how good he is at camouflaging himself" thought Iruka
"Naruto since when are you so smart"
"Iruka sensei was always smart" he said making Iruka drop an anime-style droplet
"Well changing the subject Naruto now I want to see you try jutsu, I know you will do well"
"Okay Iruka sensei" he said making the sign of the ram making Iruka look at him strangely
"Don't say a word without this seal I don't know another way to concentrate chakra"
"And well Naruto did you do it?"
"I don't know what my mind should look like"
"You should see blue dots at the beginning, hiras improving until at some point you can define people" "I think I'm starting to define things" he said, turning off the jutsu to observe his sensei
"Well that is a good first step now try again I will walk away and try to attack you you will have to find me as fast as you can so that I cannot get to you you heard"
Naruto nodded and started channeling chakra while Iruka was hiding in a tree 300 meters away to test Naruto's abilities instantly Naruto started to observe with his eyes closed his outline, suddenly a colored figure was running stealthily towards Naruto quickly He turned and pointed forward, after this action he deactivated the jutsu giving Iruka a smile "I found you sensei" he said causing Iruka to be surprised Naruto had found him much earlier than he had imagined, 300 meters that was something incredible , this boy was better than him in the beginning using jutsu
"I see that you are right Naruto, very well done, you are much better than me when I use jutsu for the first time", he commented, giving the genin a big smile "thanks Iruka sensei"
An hour later, Naruto and Iruka were sitting under a tree that was nearby, they had been training until Iruka said that they had finished for today that he trained this jutsu every day so that he could quickly improve and manage to master it as soon as possible During that hour, Naruto and Iruka chatted about the first thing that crossed their minds since anecdotes when Iruka was a genin, remembering Naruto's antics in the academy, all went wonderfully until out of nowhere a bomb question fell silent and hit Iruka
"Iruka sensei could you tell me my flaws about my ninja skills please be the most critical"
"Naruto why do you want to know this you are a very good ninja"
"I know sensei it's just that I have to improve my weaknesses to be stronger and better as a ninja, the fight against Mizuki showed me how weak he was and what a ninja and the shinobi world is capable of and if I want to live I have to improve not only learning new jutsus if not improving what I'm bad at, that's why I decided to change to stop making jokes and be serious "he said giving a Naruto Uzumaki smile
"Ok Naruto to start you are bad in Taijutsu, you have to improve this as soon as possible, you are null in genjutsu so you will have to learn to make and dispel genjutsu"
"Hey my Taijutsu is not so bad" he said before looking and refracting his words when looking at Iruka with a serious face
"I continue you have to learn to better use your shinobi tools like shurikens, kunais and other objects, you have to perfect the jutsus of the academy and you have to study too much as your notes show that you only knew about topics related to yondaime"
Hearing this Naruto was disappointed lowering his head
"Don't worry Naruto remember that a ninja takes a long time to become strong" he commented as he started to get up
"I know but how should I start, what should I do first sensei"
"Well, I would recommend you to reread the scrolls of the academy, especially those of Taijutsu and if you need information to study or to train, you can ask the Sandaime that he could help you with that topic"
"Thanks Iruka sensei for everything I'm sorry if I don't have a way to pay you"
"I don't need money Naruto just promise me one thing that someday you will be a strong shinobi"
"Rest assured Iruka sensei I will be the strongest ninja in the village that is my new dream to be strong to protect my insane people"
"I thought your dream was to be a hokage"
"Well dreams sometimes change, right" he said running a hand through his hair
"Well Naruto you can go tomorrow you can start your training" "Okay Iruka sensei see you" he said getting up and starting to run until Iruka lost sight of him completely "I know you will be strong Naruto but with time Konoha did not believe in a day" he thought as he slowly left the field of the academy to head towards his home
And well guys, that was the first chapter of this story, what did you think ?, I hope you liked it.
As they could see Naruto in this theory is different since when he almost died at the hands of Mizuki he decided to take his career seriously and not think that he was very strong, if you wonder why Naruto seems very intelligent in this theory it is because in reality He is somewhat intelligent although he is still stupid as they observed.
Very soon I will bring chapter 2 just look forward to it.
PS: It took me 3 days to finish writing the first chapter since I had homework and work to do.(。•́‿•̀。)
