Hiya peeps! I know this isn't a strictly HP story, but I need some one to
proof read this for me. Very thankful, Jaunvive.
Introduction.
The sun rises red over the horizon. The cascade of mountains littering the land splits the light into deep fractions spilling forth in daggers of scarlet and ruby. Light hits a steeple spire and slowly spreads down, illuminating a vast collection of polished limestone terraces and high-rise buildings. The dark streets are quite. The usual hubbub of activity is missing, and the avenues are un-earthly silent. Windows are smashed, and rubbish litters. This town is desolate. Abandoned in moments of terror and panic. It will not be the last.
Prologue.
A girl with long black hair runs towards the end of an alley. She halts, and turns around. The fear in her eyes and the thumping of her heart is a beacon for death. Desperately seeking for something to defend herself with, the girl doesn't notice the looming figure appear at the edge pf the narrow passage. Only the sound of scraping metal alerts her. "Please, please! Spare me!" she chokes out, sobbing furiously. She begins to cry but the salty do not bring pity upon her hunter. The mass moves forward, and the girl sees it's dark, ferocious eyes gleaming out from titanium sockets. It stretches one spider like had forward and grabs the victims neck. Slowly, she is drawn into the air, issuing a last gurgling scream of terror. The machine drops the body once it hears a loud snap. Slowly, and precisely, the killer removes the limbs and head from the torso, careful not to damage the chest. Heaving it cargo onto its back, it turns to leave, but a flash alerts it. Glancing at the grisly remains, it notices a fine silver and gold chain with an amber talisman attached around the remaining neck. Bending over, the chain is obtained and the terrifying slaughterer moves on.
Introduction.
The sun rises red over the horizon. The cascade of mountains littering the land splits the light into deep fractions spilling forth in daggers of scarlet and ruby. Light hits a steeple spire and slowly spreads down, illuminating a vast collection of polished limestone terraces and high-rise buildings. The dark streets are quite. The usual hubbub of activity is missing, and the avenues are un-earthly silent. Windows are smashed, and rubbish litters. This town is desolate. Abandoned in moments of terror and panic. It will not be the last.
Prologue.
A girl with long black hair runs towards the end of an alley. She halts, and turns around. The fear in her eyes and the thumping of her heart is a beacon for death. Desperately seeking for something to defend herself with, the girl doesn't notice the looming figure appear at the edge pf the narrow passage. Only the sound of scraping metal alerts her. "Please, please! Spare me!" she chokes out, sobbing furiously. She begins to cry but the salty do not bring pity upon her hunter. The mass moves forward, and the girl sees it's dark, ferocious eyes gleaming out from titanium sockets. It stretches one spider like had forward and grabs the victims neck. Slowly, she is drawn into the air, issuing a last gurgling scream of terror. The machine drops the body once it hears a loud snap. Slowly, and precisely, the killer removes the limbs and head from the torso, careful not to damage the chest. Heaving it cargo onto its back, it turns to leave, but a flash alerts it. Glancing at the grisly remains, it notices a fine silver and gold chain with an amber talisman attached around the remaining neck. Bending over, the chain is obtained and the terrifying slaughterer moves on.