UAF2004: Yay I'm updating! Wednesday morning Spring Break! Wellz as usualz
Review Responses, Disclaimer, a short note from me and then chapter!
Review Responses
feudalfairyfan4ever: Yay you go girl! Man how many people want Hiei's ball? Might as wellz make more of those. ^________________^ When are you going to update your story girl? Oh well thanxs for reviewing!
Soccergirl90: You like to review don't you? Well glad you like! Can I have a piece of that cookie? Like ¾ of it! ^_____________________^
Anime-fangirl1: Yep PFD is such a nice person. Also extremely dangerous. Happyz youz likez!
netai123: Glad you like! Wow the reviews are coming in fast. You're the 72nd reviewer! Thanxs for reviewing! ^______________________^
Inuyasha-fan333: Ooo! Torture is by hitting/throwing it with random objects!
firedemon&fox'sgirl: No I liked you review. There are a lot of Hiei fans reading this so I'm not surprised. Thanxs for reviewing! ^_______________________^
Maya: Glad you like! Thanxs for reviewing! I get that reply a lot. ^___________________^
Yutsuko Yamiwa: Isn't the powers of fairies great? I wish I had one! ^___________________^ Well thanxs for reviewing!
Hieisgirl-90: ^__________________^ Thanxs for reviewing!
Disclaimer: I don't own anything you got that?!
UAF2004: Sry for the wait! Well I hope you like this new episode/chapter! OMG! I have 82 reviews now! ^_____________________^ Well read on! I've been putting a lot of ^_____________________^ around now haven't I? ^_____________________^
Hiei's House [=][=][=][=][=]
Dad: Let's all smile! Smiles make the world go round!
Mom: Chest...hurting can't...breath.
Hiei: *Dusting* Man I could be causing havoc and I'm stuck here doing my stupid chores.
Wanda: Why not just wish all your chores done?
Cosmo: Or you could use the more cooler way! Melt everything with fire vision!
Hiei: Wanda's way is faster but the Idiot's way is more dangerous. I wish I had fire vision!
Cosmo & Wanda: *Grant wish*
Hiei: *Melts Cosmo's crown*
Cosmo: That's not even funny!
Hiei: *Melts Wanda's crown*
Cosmo: Now it's cool!
Hiei: *Melts everything with dust on it* Dusting done. *Melts dishes* Dishes washed. *Melts laundry* Laundry cleaned. *Melts Dad's trophy* Dad's trophy dusted. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
Wanda: You do know that Hiei has turned into a power mad freak?
Cosmo: But he rocks! Ooo! Ooo! Ooo! Melt Wanda next!
Wanda: -_- Idiot...
Dad: Why does it feel like something is wrong with my trophy?! *Runs inside trophy room*
Hiei: There I'm done with my chores can I go now?
Dad: NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO *Deep sigh* NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO *Deep sigh* NNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! Look what you did!
Hiei: What?
Dad: You melted my trophy! How did you do that?!
Hiei: Fire vision
Dad: And how did you get fire vision?!
Hiei: ...The mailman gave it to me.
Dad: You are grounded for melting my trophy! Now go to your room! *Cries*
Hiei: Hn baby. *Walks upstairs in room*
Wanda: Wow your dad was pretty mad.
Hiei: I have to go back in time and stop myself from melting the idiotic trophy.
Cosmo: Or you could go back in time and stop your dad from winning!
Hiei: I feel like that. I wish I had a time machine!
Cosmo & Wanda: *Grant wish*
*A grandfather clock with a portal inside it appeared*
Wanda: Well all we have to do now is think of the time and place of where you want to be in the portal and that's it!\
Hiei: Hn. *Walks inside and thinks of time and place then disappears*
Cosmo & Wanda: *Float inside and disappears*
Everyone: *Appears and steps out of time portal*
Hiei: We're in the 1970's now.
Wanda: Yes the groovy 1970's is what you should say now!
Cosmo: *Liked ride* LET'S GO AGAIN! LET'S GO AGAIN!
Hiei: Where is Dad anyway?
Smaller Dad: *Run past Hiei*
Hiei: *Chases*
Cosmo & Wanda: *Turn into dogs and follow Hiei*
Hiei: Dad get over here!
S. Dad: *Stops and turn to Hiei* Well that's my nickname. My real name is-
*Loud airplane passes by*
S. Dad: But I'm called Dad around here!
Hiei: Why are you running?
S. Dad: Well I'm going to win the annual Race and winning that groovy chick's heart over there. *Points at Mom*
Mom: *Jump roping* Chest...on...fire...can't...breath.
Hiei: Mom as a kid?
S. Dad: Yeah well see ya around! I have to exercise some more!
Hiei: Wait! I can help you train.
S. Dad: How?
Hiei: I'm a fast runner and I can train you.
S. Dad: Okay! What do we do first trainer?
Hiei: Well...
*At Pizza and Ice Cream parlor*
Hiei: *Eating sweet snow* Eat! AS if your life depended on it! Which it does. *Points katana beside S. Dad's head*
S. Dad: How will this help me?!
Hiei: Just eat it okay!
*After eating and inside a tent in S. Dad's backyard*
S. Dad: *Looking all tired and whatever else*
Hiei: 'Now to keep him from getting barely any sleep.' Now I'll say a scary story.
S. Dad: ...*Still looking whatever*
Hiei: In the future you get to have parties.
S. Dad: Wow neat!
Hiei: But your parents bring in...Barney.
S. Dad: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!...
*Morning*
S. Dad: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!
Alarm Clock: *Beep* *Beep* *Beep*
S. Dad: OMG! It's time for the race! *Runs out*
Hiei: *Follows with Cosmo & Wanda but only he can see them*
Cosmo: Wow look! A fairy! *Points at past Cosmo*
Wanda: Look it's my past!
Cosmo & Wanda: *Turn into birds and stand near their past selves*
P. Cosmo: Wow your like us!
Wanda: This will sure be one heck of a race!
P. Wanda: All races are groovy! Judging is so weird.
Cosmo: Where is that guy that said he would make a thing!
P. Cosmo: Like I don't know! I always forget his name!
Forgotten named kid: *Made a computer* I did it! I will call this...the Computer!
Cosmo: Why don't you call it the Hiei?
Forgotten named kid: Sure it works too!
Starting guy person thingy: Okay racers get ready and...GO!
Kids: *Run*
S. Dad: *Falls down while running*
Starting guy person thingy: For being last place you get to go to dictating school!
S. Dad: What?!
Hiei: Huh?
Men: *Put S. Dad in a truck and drive away*
Cosmo, Wanda, P. Cosmo and P. Wanda: *Appear*
Hiei: Dad never said anything about that. Hn let's just get home. *Walks into time portal*
Cosmo, Wanda, P. Cosmo and Wanda: *Follows Hiei*
*In future*
Hiei: Whoa this place seems different.
Wanda: Not winning the race must have altered the future! I wonder what'll happen next.
Cosmo: Ooo! I bet-*Disappears*
Hiei: Dang now their gone.
P. Wanda: Why don't we help you? Your our god child in the future anyway.
?: Who goes there?!
P. Cosmo & P. Wanda: *Disappears*
Hiei: Kurama? Yusuke? What are you doing here?
Kurama: *Smiling* What are you doing here?
Hiei: What are you doing here?
Yusuke: What are you doing here?
Hiei: What are you doing here?
Kurama & Yusuke: What are you dong here?
Hiei: What are you doing here?
Kurama & Yusuke: What are you doing here?
Hiei: Hn I need to see Dad. He's my Dad!
Kurama: We are all Dad's children.
Yusuke: Now come here so we can see your papers.
Hiei: *Runs*
Kurama & Yusuke: *Chases*
Hiei: *Runs into alleyway escaping Kurama and Yusuke* Now where is Dad? *Sees signs leading to a door saying DAD IS HERE! CLOSER...CLOSER...YOUR ON FIRE BABY!* Hn that was easy. *Goes inside door*
Dad: Hello unknown child!
Hiei: what are you doing here?
Dad: Being the ruler of earth of course. I lost the love of my life and went to dictating school and took over the world!
Hiei: You can't be ruler of the world.
Dad: Rebellious. That was so 70's! Guards!
Guards: *Appear and chase Hiei*
Hiei: *Running* Past Cosmo! Past Wanda! Get over here!
Both: *Appear*
P. Wanda: What do you wish for?
Hiei: I wish I was back in 1970 before me and Dad woke up!
P. Cosmo & P. Wanda: *Grants wish*
*At tent*
S. Dad: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
Hiei that is not in tent: *Grabs alarm clock and turns it off*
P. Wanda: How are you going to look like your Dad?
Hiei: Hn. *Puts on a nametag with Dad on it*
P. Cosmo: Now your Dad!
Hiei: *Runs to starting line in race*
Starting guy person thingy: GO!
Hiei: *Runs really fast to finish line*
Starting guy person thingy: The winner is Dad!
Hiei: *Takes trophy and hands to Mom* Will you take this trophy, be my wife and have a little boy with tall spiky hair?
Mom: Sure!
Hiei: Groovy! I'll be in the backyard and tell me how I won.
Mom: Okay even though I couldn't see you but sure! *Walks away*
Cosmo & Wanda: *Appear*
Hiei: Hn let's go home. *Walks into time portal*
Cosmo & Wanda: *Follow*
*Future*
Hiei: Hn Dad what are you doing?
Dad: Just using the Hiei to look for a new trophy.
Hiei: Just to let you know I'm not sorry about melting your trophy and I enjoyed doing it.
Dad: Well I guess it is a bit fun. Now run along before I beat you up.
Hiei: *Walks up room*
Mom: Internet come and get your breakfast!
Hiei: Internet? O.o
END
UAF2004: I hope you enjoyed that! It took me forever to type this! Well review please! I'm still aiming for 100 reveiws! Well laterz!
Review Responses
feudalfairyfan4ever: Yay you go girl! Man how many people want Hiei's ball? Might as wellz make more of those. ^________________^ When are you going to update your story girl? Oh well thanxs for reviewing!
Soccergirl90: You like to review don't you? Well glad you like! Can I have a piece of that cookie? Like ¾ of it! ^_____________________^
Anime-fangirl1: Yep PFD is such a nice person. Also extremely dangerous. Happyz youz likez!
netai123: Glad you like! Wow the reviews are coming in fast. You're the 72nd reviewer! Thanxs for reviewing! ^______________________^
Inuyasha-fan333: Ooo! Torture is by hitting/throwing it with random objects!
firedemon&fox'sgirl: No I liked you review. There are a lot of Hiei fans reading this so I'm not surprised. Thanxs for reviewing! ^_______________________^
Maya: Glad you like! Thanxs for reviewing! I get that reply a lot. ^___________________^
Yutsuko Yamiwa: Isn't the powers of fairies great? I wish I had one! ^___________________^ Well thanxs for reviewing!
Hieisgirl-90: ^__________________^ Thanxs for reviewing!
Disclaimer: I don't own anything you got that?!
UAF2004: Sry for the wait! Well I hope you like this new episode/chapter! OMG! I have 82 reviews now! ^_____________________^ Well read on! I've been putting a lot of ^_____________________^ around now haven't I? ^_____________________^
Hiei's House [=][=][=][=][=]
Dad: Let's all smile! Smiles make the world go round!
Mom: Chest...hurting can't...breath.
Hiei: *Dusting* Man I could be causing havoc and I'm stuck here doing my stupid chores.
Wanda: Why not just wish all your chores done?
Cosmo: Or you could use the more cooler way! Melt everything with fire vision!
Hiei: Wanda's way is faster but the Idiot's way is more dangerous. I wish I had fire vision!
Cosmo & Wanda: *Grant wish*
Hiei: *Melts Cosmo's crown*
Cosmo: That's not even funny!
Hiei: *Melts Wanda's crown*
Cosmo: Now it's cool!
Hiei: *Melts everything with dust on it* Dusting done. *Melts dishes* Dishes washed. *Melts laundry* Laundry cleaned. *Melts Dad's trophy* Dad's trophy dusted. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
Wanda: You do know that Hiei has turned into a power mad freak?
Cosmo: But he rocks! Ooo! Ooo! Ooo! Melt Wanda next!
Wanda: -_- Idiot...
Dad: Why does it feel like something is wrong with my trophy?! *Runs inside trophy room*
Hiei: There I'm done with my chores can I go now?
Dad: NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO *Deep sigh* NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO *Deep sigh* NNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! Look what you did!
Hiei: What?
Dad: You melted my trophy! How did you do that?!
Hiei: Fire vision
Dad: And how did you get fire vision?!
Hiei: ...The mailman gave it to me.
Dad: You are grounded for melting my trophy! Now go to your room! *Cries*
Hiei: Hn baby. *Walks upstairs in room*
Wanda: Wow your dad was pretty mad.
Hiei: I have to go back in time and stop myself from melting the idiotic trophy.
Cosmo: Or you could go back in time and stop your dad from winning!
Hiei: I feel like that. I wish I had a time machine!
Cosmo & Wanda: *Grant wish*
*A grandfather clock with a portal inside it appeared*
Wanda: Well all we have to do now is think of the time and place of where you want to be in the portal and that's it!\
Hiei: Hn. *Walks inside and thinks of time and place then disappears*
Cosmo & Wanda: *Float inside and disappears*
Everyone: *Appears and steps out of time portal*
Hiei: We're in the 1970's now.
Wanda: Yes the groovy 1970's is what you should say now!
Cosmo: *Liked ride* LET'S GO AGAIN! LET'S GO AGAIN!
Hiei: Where is Dad anyway?
Smaller Dad: *Run past Hiei*
Hiei: *Chases*
Cosmo & Wanda: *Turn into dogs and follow Hiei*
Hiei: Dad get over here!
S. Dad: *Stops and turn to Hiei* Well that's my nickname. My real name is-
*Loud airplane passes by*
S. Dad: But I'm called Dad around here!
Hiei: Why are you running?
S. Dad: Well I'm going to win the annual Race and winning that groovy chick's heart over there. *Points at Mom*
Mom: *Jump roping* Chest...on...fire...can't...breath.
Hiei: Mom as a kid?
S. Dad: Yeah well see ya around! I have to exercise some more!
Hiei: Wait! I can help you train.
S. Dad: How?
Hiei: I'm a fast runner and I can train you.
S. Dad: Okay! What do we do first trainer?
Hiei: Well...
*At Pizza and Ice Cream parlor*
Hiei: *Eating sweet snow* Eat! AS if your life depended on it! Which it does. *Points katana beside S. Dad's head*
S. Dad: How will this help me?!
Hiei: Just eat it okay!
*After eating and inside a tent in S. Dad's backyard*
S. Dad: *Looking all tired and whatever else*
Hiei: 'Now to keep him from getting barely any sleep.' Now I'll say a scary story.
S. Dad: ...*Still looking whatever*
Hiei: In the future you get to have parties.
S. Dad: Wow neat!
Hiei: But your parents bring in...Barney.
S. Dad: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!...
*Morning*
S. Dad: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!
Alarm Clock: *Beep* *Beep* *Beep*
S. Dad: OMG! It's time for the race! *Runs out*
Hiei: *Follows with Cosmo & Wanda but only he can see them*
Cosmo: Wow look! A fairy! *Points at past Cosmo*
Wanda: Look it's my past!
Cosmo & Wanda: *Turn into birds and stand near their past selves*
P. Cosmo: Wow your like us!
Wanda: This will sure be one heck of a race!
P. Wanda: All races are groovy! Judging is so weird.
Cosmo: Where is that guy that said he would make a thing!
P. Cosmo: Like I don't know! I always forget his name!
Forgotten named kid: *Made a computer* I did it! I will call this...the Computer!
Cosmo: Why don't you call it the Hiei?
Forgotten named kid: Sure it works too!
Starting guy person thingy: Okay racers get ready and...GO!
Kids: *Run*
S. Dad: *Falls down while running*
Starting guy person thingy: For being last place you get to go to dictating school!
S. Dad: What?!
Hiei: Huh?
Men: *Put S. Dad in a truck and drive away*
Cosmo, Wanda, P. Cosmo and P. Wanda: *Appear*
Hiei: Dad never said anything about that. Hn let's just get home. *Walks into time portal*
Cosmo, Wanda, P. Cosmo and Wanda: *Follows Hiei*
*In future*
Hiei: Whoa this place seems different.
Wanda: Not winning the race must have altered the future! I wonder what'll happen next.
Cosmo: Ooo! I bet-*Disappears*
Hiei: Dang now their gone.
P. Wanda: Why don't we help you? Your our god child in the future anyway.
?: Who goes there?!
P. Cosmo & P. Wanda: *Disappears*
Hiei: Kurama? Yusuke? What are you doing here?
Kurama: *Smiling* What are you doing here?
Hiei: What are you doing here?
Yusuke: What are you doing here?
Hiei: What are you doing here?
Kurama & Yusuke: What are you dong here?
Hiei: What are you doing here?
Kurama & Yusuke: What are you doing here?
Hiei: Hn I need to see Dad. He's my Dad!
Kurama: We are all Dad's children.
Yusuke: Now come here so we can see your papers.
Hiei: *Runs*
Kurama & Yusuke: *Chases*
Hiei: *Runs into alleyway escaping Kurama and Yusuke* Now where is Dad? *Sees signs leading to a door saying DAD IS HERE! CLOSER...CLOSER...YOUR ON FIRE BABY!* Hn that was easy. *Goes inside door*
Dad: Hello unknown child!
Hiei: what are you doing here?
Dad: Being the ruler of earth of course. I lost the love of my life and went to dictating school and took over the world!
Hiei: You can't be ruler of the world.
Dad: Rebellious. That was so 70's! Guards!
Guards: *Appear and chase Hiei*
Hiei: *Running* Past Cosmo! Past Wanda! Get over here!
Both: *Appear*
P. Wanda: What do you wish for?
Hiei: I wish I was back in 1970 before me and Dad woke up!
P. Cosmo & P. Wanda: *Grants wish*
*At tent*
S. Dad: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
Hiei that is not in tent: *Grabs alarm clock and turns it off*
P. Wanda: How are you going to look like your Dad?
Hiei: Hn. *Puts on a nametag with Dad on it*
P. Cosmo: Now your Dad!
Hiei: *Runs to starting line in race*
Starting guy person thingy: GO!
Hiei: *Runs really fast to finish line*
Starting guy person thingy: The winner is Dad!
Hiei: *Takes trophy and hands to Mom* Will you take this trophy, be my wife and have a little boy with tall spiky hair?
Mom: Sure!
Hiei: Groovy! I'll be in the backyard and tell me how I won.
Mom: Okay even though I couldn't see you but sure! *Walks away*
Cosmo & Wanda: *Appear*
Hiei: Hn let's go home. *Walks into time portal*
Cosmo & Wanda: *Follow*
*Future*
Hiei: Hn Dad what are you doing?
Dad: Just using the Hiei to look for a new trophy.
Hiei: Just to let you know I'm not sorry about melting your trophy and I enjoyed doing it.
Dad: Well I guess it is a bit fun. Now run along before I beat you up.
Hiei: *Walks up room*
Mom: Internet come and get your breakfast!
Hiei: Internet? O.o
END
UAF2004: I hope you enjoyed that! It took me forever to type this! Well review please! I'm still aiming for 100 reveiws! Well laterz!