A/N: I kinda suck at poetry, so I'm trying to practice as much as possible in order to
improve. I wrote this really short poem because I don't have enough talent to write
a lengthy one. Any suggestions for improvement (other than increasing the length)
will be much appreciated. Enjoy! (Er, try to anyway)
Scene: Hermione has captured Harry's heart. Harry finally decides to reveal his
feelings.
-Hermione-
I have played Quidditch many times
I have endured year after year of double potions
I've been through duels, bullies, rumors, and my first dance at the ball
I've even defeated Voldemort, the most diabolical wizard of all
But as I stare at you
And admire your timeless smile
I wonder how I've survived all this while
For I have not beheld such beauty and grace
When I stare at your dazzling face
A/N: Yeah, I know. That's the shortest poem in history. Or maybe not. I don't
know. My knowledge is limited when it comes to poetry. Anyway, read and
review. While I know this poem sucks, is too sappy, etc, only give me constructive
criticism. Writing a flame will only waste your time since it will be ignored!
improve. I wrote this really short poem because I don't have enough talent to write
a lengthy one. Any suggestions for improvement (other than increasing the length)
will be much appreciated. Enjoy! (Er, try to anyway)
Scene: Hermione has captured Harry's heart. Harry finally decides to reveal his
feelings.
-Hermione-
I have played Quidditch many times
I have endured year after year of double potions
I've been through duels, bullies, rumors, and my first dance at the ball
I've even defeated Voldemort, the most diabolical wizard of all
But as I stare at you
And admire your timeless smile
I wonder how I've survived all this while
For I have not beheld such beauty and grace
When I stare at your dazzling face
A/N: Yeah, I know. That's the shortest poem in history. Or maybe not. I don't
know. My knowledge is limited when it comes to poetry. Anyway, read and
review. While I know this poem sucks, is too sappy, etc, only give me constructive
criticism. Writing a flame will only waste your time since it will be ignored!