Hiiiiiiiiii! this is my first fan-fic so plz tell me what you think about
it. Flames welcome. Personally I like humor fics but for some reason
romantic fics are easier for me to write. Enjoy!
PS: This part is the present. There will be a flashback in the next chapter and maybe two more chapters after that. The main character's name is Mango.
Chapter 1 - Angel Tears
Why now? Why? Raindrops were falling on my face as I lay on the ground of the park motionless. Is this my fate? Is this how it's going to end? 12 years old and innocent. Not knowing love until it was too late. For the first time, I got up to take glance at my attacker. The one I trusted as my true love. Now that I knew the real side of this traitor, I felt ashamed and confused. Now I would never be able to go back to the one that truely loved me. I staggered as I tried getting up, but was failing miserably due to the wounds which now had blood gushing out on to the ground below me.
"Do you feel it? The poison flowing in to your veins and slowly inching you towards your death?" the traitor said smugly with a smirk on his face.
Once again I asked this question. "Why?"
"Oh you know why. The one you loved so deeply, he was just a mere object. He is no use to me now. His purpose was to keep me hidden while I was healing and searching for the one that had the power to destroy me. He never existed, never loved you and never knew you. You are so easy to fool Mango. If I wasn't so near you, I would had never found out you were the One."
These words were forced in to my head, each little word, one by one stabbing my confidence while I was just kneeling there in disbelief. I knew that I had lost everything. The four figures around me, my friends, lost to me forever. Soon I would lose myself. But more importantly, I will have lost the one that loved me from the bottom of his heart. I had broke his heart by loving this traitor. Him. I would never see him again.
I know that was really short. I'm not used to writing extra long chappys. Plz review. Or even flame to tell what's wrong with it. I know I put this in Tokyo Mew Mew section but it doesn't seem like a TMM fan-fic at the moment. --; It resemble the TMM more in the next chapter!!
-dream-cloudstar
PS: This part is the present. There will be a flashback in the next chapter and maybe two more chapters after that. The main character's name is Mango.
Chapter 1 - Angel Tears
Why now? Why? Raindrops were falling on my face as I lay on the ground of the park motionless. Is this my fate? Is this how it's going to end? 12 years old and innocent. Not knowing love until it was too late. For the first time, I got up to take glance at my attacker. The one I trusted as my true love. Now that I knew the real side of this traitor, I felt ashamed and confused. Now I would never be able to go back to the one that truely loved me. I staggered as I tried getting up, but was failing miserably due to the wounds which now had blood gushing out on to the ground below me.
"Do you feel it? The poison flowing in to your veins and slowly inching you towards your death?" the traitor said smugly with a smirk on his face.
Once again I asked this question. "Why?"
"Oh you know why. The one you loved so deeply, he was just a mere object. He is no use to me now. His purpose was to keep me hidden while I was healing and searching for the one that had the power to destroy me. He never existed, never loved you and never knew you. You are so easy to fool Mango. If I wasn't so near you, I would had never found out you were the One."
These words were forced in to my head, each little word, one by one stabbing my confidence while I was just kneeling there in disbelief. I knew that I had lost everything. The four figures around me, my friends, lost to me forever. Soon I would lose myself. But more importantly, I will have lost the one that loved me from the bottom of his heart. I had broke his heart by loving this traitor. Him. I would never see him again.
I know that was really short. I'm not used to writing extra long chappys. Plz review. Or even flame to tell what's wrong with it. I know I put this in Tokyo Mew Mew section but it doesn't seem like a TMM fan-fic at the moment. --; It resemble the TMM more in the next chapter!!
-dream-cloudstar