Hey
everyone hope you like this, I came up with the idea after I was
really moved by the father son moments between Benjamin Martin and
his two sons deaths. Anyway enough and on with the story please
review and tell me if you have any ideas or what you think, please no
flames. Also this film is set after the patriot.
Putting things right
Chapter 1: Difficult to bear.
The
sun was high in the sky and the heat was only just manageable.
Crowds
of people dressed in black clothes started to pull up in their horse
and cart carriages. Two boys stood on the porch greeting the people
as they arrived at the home door. Nathan Martin was the eldest of the
Martin boys stood next to his younger brother Samuel Martin.
After
greeting all the guests the boys sat down on the laid out chairs on
the porch. Their sister's death still very evident in their minds.
It had been a shock to the whole family to learn that the youngest
child of Elizabeth Martin had developed a similar disease to her
mother and had passed away as suddenly as her mother. Susan Martin
the boys remembered found it very hard after their mother's death
to express her feelings being so very young at the time. She never
spoke, not a word for years until that day at charlottes plantation
when the pressure of loosing her brother Thomas had become to much to
keep inside and she broke out of her shell onto charlottes welcoming
shoulders.
So many memories since that day, both boys fort
back tears and headed back inside to the rest of the family and
guests. Out back in his shed working on his sixth attempt at a cradle
to house their upcoming child, Benjamin Martin sat down and carefully
examined his ideas of a piece of paper. Slowly but silently he lifted
his head and turned around to see a most beautiful woman stood in a
black dress that frayed over her feet.
"Ben...please come
into the house and be with us at this time" Charlotte almost begged
to her husband. Looking at her then back at the cradle he stood up
and walked over to it placing his hands on the sides carefully making
sure it didn't break at his sudden touch. He didn't say anything
but just looked down into the cradle rolling his hands along the
sides, the tears now drowning his face. He didn't say anything but
then again he didn't have to she knew this was hurting him badly.
Walking across to him she wrapped her arms around him and he turned
into her
"I..." Ben started but couldn't finish as the
tears poured even worse now. Burying his face into her shoulder she
held him until he finally let go and she took his hand leading him
back into the house.
The speeches were long and tough for each
family member and it wasn't long before Benjamin Martin had slipped
out back again and stood looking up at the stars.
"Why?"
He asked not looking for an answer of any kind. Anger began to build
inside his body and he could feel it growing stronger as he clenched
his fists
"WHY?!" He shouted slamming his fists down on
the railings of the porch
"Ben please!!" Charlotte ran
from behind him grabbing his arm at precisely the wrong moment when
his anger left his body through his hands, leaving a very shaken
heavily pregnant woman on the floor of the porch.
Breathing
heavily she looked up at him as he stared in horror at his actions.
Tears forming in his eyes he did the only thing he could think of
...he ran.