A Faint Empty Pain

Whinry starred up at the sky, it was a such beautiful day. But Whinry felt an emptyness deep inside her consumed her whole. She couldn't figure out what this monster was, what caused her pain and saddness.

She was as blue as the sky that day. Her grandma Pinoka had sent her to the store for some bolts. They really didn't need any though, and Whinry knew this. Her gradma simply thought that the walk and the fresh air would lighten her up. Indeed the walk was good, she usually enjoyed listening to the quiet but busy village.

She did lighten up a bit, it wasn't really until she passed the hillside that her and the boys used to play on that the emptiness grew in to an ocean drounding her with saddness and pain, not letting her see all the good that was happening around her. A brown paper bag lie squashed next to her with a couple of bolts sneakig out of it, and a few bolts were scattered out in the grass around her. When she finally regained her strenght and was broke from her daze she pick up the bag spilling out more blots clumsly.

'Why do I mess everything up! errr' she thought, shoving the bolts back into the bag.

' Gosh I was never so empty and such a reckless cluts when I was younger and Ed and Al were still around.

maybe it's just me today. tomarrow will be better' she thought trying to reasure herself.

But it was hard to think straight over the thumping, all this crying inside had given her a painful headache. She became a little dizzy, then as she looked a head of her things started to sway and her head became extermly heavy.

"Hey, Whinry is that you? How are you on this beautiful day? Pa said that those auto-mail pieces will be in soon and that"said a voice from behind her. The voice grew louder and louder, she couldn't turn around and look she thought she'd fall over if she did. Her head pounded and the voice became fuzzy. Her ears were ringing louder and louder.

"Whinry you o.k?" said the voice of a young man.

"huh?" Whinry said she couldn't understand him at all.

"You o.k?" asked the boy, he ran infront of her grabbing her at the shoulders to stop her from moving.

"Are you o.k?" the boy anunciated.

Whinry was focused on her five feet that to her were still moving. All of sudden she felt a stillness deep inside her mealting away. She looked up into his eyes that were so amber and deep, And saw his honey blonde hair shining in the sun, and noticed his white-gloved hands on her shoulders.

"Edward?" she whispered before fainting and falling onto the boy who was indeed not Edward.

The boy gave a short disturbed look and his body went tense having Whinry in his arms. So he picked her up and laid her on the grass. After picking up all the bolts that were everywhere including down his shirt and in his shoes, he picked up Whinry and took her home.

There was a knock on the door, 'wonder who that could be' thought Pinoka as she walked calmly over to the door. When she opened the door she saw Whinry in this young boys arms. Pinoka gasped.

"Hello Pinoka!" said the boy in an unusally cheery voice for the situation they were in. "Whinry had an accident..."

"I see that" Pinoka said with a little attuide trying to be sarcastic,"just please lay her on the couch over there."


Hope you liked it! I'll get the second chapter up asap, and hopefully I can make it longer this time!

always--- Edwardsvixen15