Okay people you might think this is a suicide poem but it is NOT my friend wrote

It and I thought it would be a good poem for vmars anyway before I forget veronica is talking to Lilly but if you read it , it might be obvious and this is the last time to all of you who read and don't review you must review please review even if you don't

Like it review and tell me it might hurt but you are being truth full to me and yourself and it will help me improve my writing.

I would just like to say thanks to KAC14102005 THANK YOU SO MUCH ON LOOKING AT MY POEM AND HELPING ME OUT.

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I wonder how it would feel,

to let the calm and soothing

water take my breath away?

would I feel light as air?

Or heavy as a stone?

I wonder

how desperate I would have to be,

how dim my should would have become,

or even if it has any light left at all.

Would there be tears for me?

enough to make up for all the ones I have cried?

would there be grief and sorrow?

or would I be forgotten

like so many times before?

how would those last seconds feel?

would my life flash before my eyes?

would I feel regret?

I raise my head up

and take a gulp of air

my soul isn't black yet

and so my life will go on

always obedient

always with a smile on my face

but in the soothing cloak of black night

I will cry those secret tears

for things I want, but cannot have

for the life I might lead

but to do so,

I have to find the key

to the gilded cage I'm kept in.

I will carry on a little longer

my soul lit with hope of escape

but when that hope is gone

I will welcome

the cool and soothing waters

to enter my lungs,

and take my breath away.