Deleted Scenes, Love is more than enough

To be completely honest, not much was changed from the original idea. Sadly I usually make it up as I go along. Sometimes I wanted it to come out differently, but that's what my editing process is for. So I guess the only thing I can say that was left out was the stuff I had to throw away that I never really did write. My head is just crammed packed with this shit.

Deleted Scenes(Sort of)

1. I guess one of the original ideas was that the marriage of Odd and Aelita happened within the story, not before it. The whole thing when Aelita comes back and she picks Odd instead of Jeremie was introduced as part of the story, and not in flash backs.

2. Another thing I changed in mid key stroke was how the affair played out. It was raining like before and they talk about stuff. Yumi is changing in Ulrich's room and Ulrich decides to take his chance. Yumi, not being able to go through with it, stops them halfway through stripping and making out and she leaves. Ulrich then heart broken, takes the promotion like he did.

3. The ending was meant to show them engaged to be married, not married with a daughter two years later. I planned that so I can write a sequel where Ulrich is getting nervous about the wedding some, scared it might repeat from the brideless one, and their jobs force them to push back the date even more, while then Yumi gets more irritated when her cousin Tomoko gets married after only a few months when she figured she should have been married a few years ago.

Eventually they did get married and resolve the problem by just having a private courthouse ceremony, instead of a big church wedding to ease the tension and to just basically get the damn thing over with. During this Odd and Aelita's son is born, and Yumi tells Ulrich on the honeymoon she wants to try for a baby immediately. Sorry, I thought I could make this a fully fledged story, but Love is more than enough 2 will never see the web. Sorry again for getting hopes up.

I guess you can also call this an alternate ending.

4. I also had ideas of Yumi not telling William about the affair, he just finds one of his shirts in their apartment. Couldn't work it in.

5. I've noticed I make Mr. Ishiyama either very understanding or a complete jackass, anyone else notice I have no consistency with his character in my stories? Guess whatever suits the plot.

News from the mind of NotCreativeenoughtomakeone

1. I need beta readers for two CL stories I'll be posting before or around Christmas.

2. The stories are-

Hot Line- While in college, Ulrich needs some extra money so gets a part time job as a suicide hotline operator on the weekends. Everything is going fine till someone he never wanted to speak to again calls. Ulrich/Milly/Yumi

Plans always disappoint- Nothing happened like Ulrich and Aelita thought it would happen when they were kids. Everyone else is married but them, so now they're the only ones they can really talk to. What starts as a better friendship, becomes more than they ever planned. Ulrich/Aeltia, Jeremie/Sissi, Odd/Yumi

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Sorry it took so long, but yeah. And by the way, I'm mass updating all my CL fics on Christmas, happy holidays all.