Ch. 6: Ending
"We're finally in Central, brother!" Al exclaimed while hopping off the train. "Aren't you excited?"
"Yeah," Ed said glumly.
"You miss Winry already, don't you," Al said while the two brothers were walking out of the train station. "Well, at least you don't have to worry about Robert getting anywhere near Winry. He was band from the village right after we found you and Winry by the river. Plus, you and Winry are going out, so shouldn't you be happy?"
"I'm happy that Winry loves me, but being away from her like this kind of leaves a big gap in my heart," Ed said. "Hey, Al."
"What is it, Ed?"
"Whatever you do, don't tell Mustang about Winry," Ed said. "If he ever found out that I had a girlfriend, then he would find any way to make fun of me."
"Why wouldn't you want to tell him, Edward?" An unknown voice asked.
"Because if that stupid colonel found out that I had a girlfriend, him and Lieutenant Colonel Hawkeye, Major Armstrong, and a bunch of the other people at Central would…"
As soon as Ed turned around, he saw Colonel Mustang, Lieutenant Colonel Hawkeye, Hawkeye, and Major Armstrong. "What the hell are you guys doing here! I thought you all were supposed to be working!" Ed exclaimed in anger.
"We were, but the moment we found out that you were coming back from your GIRLFRIEND'S party, we just simply had to know the details, Fullmetal," Mustang said, then patting Ed on the shoulder. "Congratulations, Ed! You have officially become a man!"
"And I see you've gotten taller, Edward Elric," Major Armstrong said while patting Ed's head. "Drinking you milk, I see!"
"Shaddup!" Ed shouted in anger.
"Well, Ed, I thought you hated milk," Hawkeye said while pulling out a glass bottle of milk from her pocket. "Would you like some?"
"Where in the world did you get that?" Ed shouted.
"Well, anyway, we should get back to HQ," Mustang said while hopping into the military car. "Come on, everyone."
"Today was so frustrating, I thought I was gonna kill myself," Ed said while plopping on his guest bed in HQ. "What do you think, Al?"
"I thought it was nice that everybody congratulated you," Al said while sitting in a chair.
"Well, I think I'll walk around the place and calm myself down," Ed said while leaving the room. "You can do whatever you want, Al."
"I think I'll go see if anybody needs any help around here," Al said while getting up and leaving the room with Ed.
"Well, I'm going this way," Ed said while pointing at the right hallway.
"And I'll go this way," Al said while walking towards the left hallway. "See you later, brother."
"See ya, Alphonse," Ed said while walking down the hallway.
"Hey, Alphonse," Hawkeye greeted once Al entered the colonel's room.
"Hi, Lieutenant Hawkeye," Al greeted while entering the room. "Do you need help with anything?"
"Well, I need help carrying some boxes down the hallway," Hawkeye said while holding a big box.
"Where's Full Metal, Alphonse?" Mustang asked while looking up from his papers.
"He went down the other hallway from our room," Al said. "He said that he was going to take a walk. I have no idea what he's up to."
"HQ phone line. Would you like to make a call?"
"Yeah. Can I make a call to the Rockbell Auto Mail Shop in Resembool?"
"State your name and rank, but if you are a state alchemist, then state your name."
"Edward Elric, Full Metal Alchemist."
"Wait one moment, Mr. Elric."
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"Auto Mail Shop. Winry speaking."
"Hey, Winry," Ed greeted.
"Hi, Ed!" Winry exclaimed. "Are you guys in Central now?"
"Yeah, we arrived around noon," Ed said. "So how many presents did you get from your friends?"
"I got dozens and dozens of presents, but none of them are like the ones that you gave me," Winry said. "I miss you."
"I miss you, too, Winry," Ed said. "I have to go, Winry, but I'll talk to you tomorrow, okay?"
"Okay," Winry said. "Love you, Ed."
"Love you, too, Winry," Ed said while hanging up the phone.
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Man, i wanna thank everybody for readin my first fanfic! i'm hopin to get more reviews after i post this chapter. Well, here're the awesome people who first R&R my fanfic the first few weeks i put it out on this site:
Nicki003 God bless you!
The Moonlight Shadow Alchem... aznskatermel BUT I LOVED THIS CHAPTER!
Poetry-In-Motion-XXX CorruptionGlare Poetry-In-Motion-XXX I would definetly say that Robert's chance has gone up in flames like the Hindenburg. lol, Update soon!
Canadain-Girl Srry if i cudn't fit everybody on the last chap, but these r the first ppl dat reviewed this fanfic for the first five chapters. if any of u guys kno how to eidt chapters while they're on this site, please tell me n i'll b able to add ur names. thanx a bunch n eat lots of korean food, ppl! We made ur cell phones! Lotsa luv nkim bap, Toppyoushimonai06 xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo
2006-08-08
ch 1, reply
HUH? You went from Robert to Mark. What? Is it the same person or is it two people?
Good story though?
Poetry-In-Motion-XXX
2006-08-03
ch 1, reply
This was not bad at all, it's really great actually. I can't wait for things to start heating up. Good Start! Update Soon!
x0x0Shadowgirlx0xo
2006-08-03
ch 1, reply
UPDATE SON PLZ -spazz attack over- update soon i like it alot
Fullmetal59
2006-08-03
ch 1, reply
This is good so far! Hope i'll see your update soon.
The Moonlight Shadow Alchem...
2006-08-03
ch 1, reply
Aw...poor Ed. Oh, well, he s going to win at the end...isnt he?( gives an evil death glare) Anyway, I like the story.. and...umm...I hope Robert dies! Yeah, thats the word!
Heidi C.
2006-08-05
ch 2, reply
Wow. This is quite nice. Some funny humour too. :D I love Edward's word diversion in chapter one. By the way, in form of suggestion, perhaps put at least a paragraph of description or transition for a chapter so the setting can be clearer and I'm slightly confused... is this Robert... or Mark? -le gasp- OR ARE THEY THE SAME PEOPLE BUT LIKE... ROBERT IS MARK UNDERCOVER? XDD
2006-08-05
ch 2, reply
Valentein sounds familiar...hmm...as in..Jill Valentein? (I´m sorry, I play to much video games for my own good) Anyway, please, please make Ed end up with Win. Dont make Mark the winner cause´that isn´t fair! Anyway, good story, and If u ever need more help, dont hesitate 2 ask!
Fullmetal59
2006-08-05
ch 2, reply
Hmm.. Another good chapter! Nicely done! It was a pretty funny too!
2006-08-06
ch 3, reply
im confussed... sometimes you put robert and then some other times you put mark. is mark, robert?
2006-08-05
ch 3, reply
o DRAMA! Now things are really starting to get interesting! Keep up the good work!
fullmetal-flame-lover
2006-08-05
ch 3, reply
love it!
Fullmetal59
2006-08-05
ch 3, reply
I wonder what they're going to do in the next chapter! You sure this is your first fic? Yours is better than my first! Well Update soon plz!
2006-08-08
ch 4, reply
Robert-Mark shall DIE! WHO'S WITH ME?
inuyasha133030
2006-08-06
ch 4, reply
Coll but I do hope it gets to be more intresting and why did you make robert a nut case keep writing
aznskatermel
2006-08-06
ch 4, reply
OHH! I CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!
Fullmetal59
2006-08-06
ch 4, reply
Awesome chapter! Can't wait to see what's going to happen next! Go Ed for saving Winry! Update SOON!
2006-08-08
ch 5, reply
AW! So sweet! I am such a sucker for EdWin!
2006-08-08
ch 5, reply
hey kick ass chapter, i really do enjoy your stry, and i hope you keep writting!
Fullmetal59
2006-08-08
ch 5, reply
Aw... That was sweet. Great Chapter! Can't wait for the next! As Usual!