Thanks for Reviewing:
Claw1253: Thankies for reviewing! Fight on line… um… my life's been a bit busy, so I forget a lot… What fight on line? Hmm…
KisshuFanGirl: I have this bad habit of looking at the reviews of stories, and after reviewing a story, I almost always look at the other reviews. Well… there's this one story that you reviewed to that's completely copying mine. For example, they copied the 'suicide!' and 'Murderer!' line, said that your little sister bumped into a table and was knocked out cold, you bumped into Ichigo on the way to school and went to school with her, that your brother is pretty cute but you shouldn't be thinking that, and a bunch of other similarities. Seriously… please realize that they're completely and utterly copying my story. Didn't want to leave you in the dust about that; to help you know which story I'm talking about, it's one with the same point of view (you). Thankies so much for reviewing!
Blue Angel101: Glad y' like the story so far! Thankies for reviewing!
Mew Meiko: Thankies so much for reviewing! By the way, there's a story that's completely copying me, just it's much more random, and twists my sentences around… the one that gives you a bazooka… ring a bell? If someone's copying me, please don't just sit back and watch… Well, again, thanks for reviewing! Hope y' like this chappie!
ILoveKisshu: Don't worries, you'll get to be with Kish! Hmm…Kisshu sounds way cuter… NEways, thankies for reviewing!
AnimexLoverxx: Glad you like the story! Thank you for reviewing!
Princess of the High Lands: And I thought my name's long… NEways, thanks for reviewing! Yeps, school is awful! (Sticks tongue out in disgust). I'll try to do a bigger Pie/ Zakuro part in this, but remember, they're both very keep-to-myself people. Hmm…
KisshFanGirl: Me:(Runs for cover) KYAA! HELP ME!NEways- (still running for life. Hear a distant voice) Thanks for reviewing!
OC's I added:
Tomato; Tom: Your brother, Kish's pal, Isha's boyfriend
Fruitcake; Cake: Kish's brother
Rosemary; Rosy: Kish's cousin and pal
Radish; Isha: Tom's girlfriend. She doesn't really like humans, though…
Last Time:
You had found out that Tom (Tomato) is your brother (remember? Kish's pal?). The author also added ten thousand OC's because she's weird (okay- maybe not THAT many…). Zakuro is sleeping in the same bedroom, hear me, not bed, as Pie to make sure Ryou doesn't kill him. Speaking of the blonde, he is now going to Lettuce's house to help her with her over grown fish, Fishy Jr.! Pudding is going to try and make Tart dessert. Hopefully they won't need an ambulance afterwards…
(P.S: Are some of you… retarded? Someone copied my story idea! And I'm talking more than just pairing you with Kish… they REALLY stole my idea, to the point of the same lines, just twisted around. Examine it! You may realize it! Not giving any names, because if you know this, you will. So PUH-LEASE tell someone if they do this kinda thing to stop, or else I'll have to remove this story, along with all my others because I'm mad. So keep that in mind.)
Now Time:
Ryou ran all the way to Lettuce's house, because he was so afraid for the fish girl, he forgot he could drive. Breathless, he knocked on the front door. A red-eyed Lettuce greeted him. "Fishy Jr.'s this way…" she said solemnly.
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"Tar-Tar, what's this gooey green stuff, na no da?" questioned Pudding. "I put trees in the microwave, and they turned into this!" "PUDDING! YOU CAN'T PUT BROCOLI IN THE MICROWAVE!" exclaimed Tart. "Silly Tarry! This isn't broccoli! It's food coloring!" Pudding replied, adding it into the dessert bowl, before digging into the fridge for more food.
She pulled out some carrots and threw them into the bowl, along with some vanilla ice cream and orange juice. "Hmm… Hey, apple juice! Let's add this, too!" "NOOO! THAT'S HOT SAU-," Too late. Pudding put a gallon of hot-sauce in the dessert.
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You look at them (Kish and his buds) thoughtfully. 'Hmmm… Which side should I join? The side I was born with, or the side my brother's on?
"Tom, why didn't you tell us you're human? I would've stayed with Kish!" exclaimed Isha. Tom glared at her, before muttering, "Darn racist…"
When Tom sees your obviously-confused look, he says, "I think I should explain better…" Isha nods. "Definitely!" "Not to you! To Trystell!" said Rosy, smacking Isha. Kish gives his cousin an odd look, when they all jump with a start at the sound of a loud ringing.
"Oh- they called me on another mission. Sorry guys, but I'll be gone for about a year," informed Cake, before disappearing. "That was random…" muttered Kish.
Rosy sighed. "I might as well go now… They always call me to go on the missions with him." She too disappears, leaving you, Tom, Kish, and Isha.
"As I was saying… our dad is an alien, and had gotten together with a human- our mom. Then she had twins- us. Somehow they broke up, and Dad took me while Mom took you. Then each of them got married, and I think that your mom must've pretended her husband is your real dad. There was no hiding the truth from me because I looked so much like a human…" Tom informs.
"How come I don't have powers than?" you demand. "It takes practice to learn how to use your abilities. I'm sure you do have powers." You grin. "Does that mean I can teleport?" "If someone teaches you," Tom replies. You look at Kish. "Why're you looking at me? I'm not a teacher!" he exclaims nervously. You give him puppy dog eyes. "Please Kish! I wanna be able to fly!" "Fine… Great going, Tom. Now I have to be a teacher!" Kish exclaimed. Tom shrugs, not phased in the least. "She's your girlfriend."
"Hey, where's Isha?" you question. Kish and Tom look around, just realizing her absence. "One minute she was here, telling us how she dislikes hu-," Kish starts, before both his and Tom's eyes grow wide. "NO!" they shout in unison. "What?" you question, feeling oddly left out. "I'm sure she told the people that you and Tom are both part human! And that I'm dating a human, but…" Kish says, trailing off.
"What's so bad about that?" you question. "They can't all be racists like Isha, can they? I mean, Kish obviously isn't a human hater- he fell for TWO earth girls." Kish slightly blushes. "Hey! You and Ichigo were both hot! Who could blame me? Besides- you're half alien," Kish reasons. "But I LOOK all human," you reply. Tom rolls his eyes.
"Let's just go outside and see what's happening," your brother suggests. Having nothing better to do, the three of you walk outside the door, you and Tom still in human form (since Isha told everyone, it really doesn't matter, does it?).
When you get around the middle of the city, people stop what they're doing to look at the three of you. Tom steps up so people- eh… aliens- can see him better. "I was born on your side, so stop staring. My sister (he gestures to you) is also half alien, so you shouldn't have any problems." Most of the crowd went back to what they were doing, but a few remained silent, thinking.
That's when Isha appeared before your little group. "Oh, so (talking to Kish) your girlfriend and her brother got away with being half human? Pht… Dumb humans." With that said, she disappeared. "SQUEE!" shouted Rosy. You all give her an odd look. "What? She's finally gone!"
"You guys have any idea of what to do?" questioned Tom, starting to get bored. You think for a second before exclaiming, "I know!" Everyone stares at you expectantly, and starts to get annoyed when you don't continue (T.G: I do this to my friends all the time- and randomly shout 'AH HAH!' when they say something). "Well?" demands Tom. "We can go to a beach on earth!" you suggest, before adding, "One with an Ocean!"
Tom and Rosy stare blankly, so Kish informs, "It's a place earthling's love," before teleporting you all to one. "Hmm… this is sandy…" mumbles Rosy, before plopping onto the sandy beach ground.
Kish grins at you, causing you to rethink your option. "This is much more romantic!" he exclaims cheerfully. Doing some quick thinking, you suggest, "Why don't we show Tom and Rosy the ocean?" "Why? They can see it from here," replies Kish, before pulling you into his lap. You give Tom a pleading look, but he simply shrugs before being dragged to the ocean by Rosy, who was starting to get bored.
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Lettuce led Ryou to Fishy Jr., and what he saw caused him to gasp. The guppy fish was two feet long! "What happened?" he questioned.
"W-well, Fishy Jr. was sick, so I said some words that came into my head, and h-he grew!" Lettuce sobbed into her hands. "Turn on the bath tub," ordered Ryou. Lettuce gave him an odd look. "For the fish." "Oh," replied the porpoise girl, before hurrying to the bath tub.
It was filling up SO slowly… Ryou pulled Masha out of his pocket. "Good thing I sto- borrowed you from Ichigo today." Masha spit out what looked like an oxygen tank, yet had water instead, before putting it on the fish. Whether it worked or not, he had no clue.
He heard thunder, and the lights went out. "Masha, flash light," he ordered, only to see that Masha was cowering in fear under the sofa. The blond genius sighed. There was no way he'd be able to get back to the café. Knowing the storms at this time of year, it'd be a flash flood, and lightning would strike the ground. This was going to be a long night…
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"All done, na no da!" exclaimed Pudding, revealing her desert- 'rainbow surprise'. The reason for the name? It simply looked like a bunch of squashed up colors. Tart tried a bite, before fainting. "Tar-Tar? I know it's getting late, but don't you want to eat your dessert? I know! You can eat some more for breakfast. More for me tonight, na no da!" exclaimed the monkey girl, before happily munching on the dessert.
"YUMMY, na no da!"
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Pie woke up once more, and looked around the room. He noticed that Zakuro was awake, dully staring at the ceiling. When Zakuro switched her gaze to him, he realized that he had been staring, and if he was any one else, would be bright red. "How's your head?" questioned Zakuro. "My head? Fine… what happened?" he asked. "You fell head first into something or other."
They both jumped with a start at the sound of thunder. Pie gave Zakuro a what-the-heck-was-that look. "This is a thunder storm. They're not really dang-," she started, before yelping as a bolt of lighting hit two feet from where she was sitting. Pie was starting to get nervous. Sure, he makes lightning with his powers, but he has control over that lightning, unlike this lightning. That's when they noticed that Zakuro's bed had caught fire from the lightning, and was spreading fast.
Only having one idea, Pie teleported next to her, picked her up, and teleported them outside- into the rain? Zakuro glared at him. He quickly teleported them to the kitchen of his ship, but obviously not quickly enough because they were both soaked by then.
He almost dropped the wolf mew in his arms at the sight before him. Pudding was laying on the floor, staring at the ceiling, and eating goo, but next to her was Tart- tied to a chair with marshmallows in his mouth. He was sleeping quite soundly, too…
Ignoring this, Pie set Zakuro down. Pudding was too busy staring at the ceiling (she was actually thinking of what to make for breakfast) to notice them.
"Thank you for not letting Ryou kill me, but have you seen Kisshu?" he questioned, breaking the silence. "If he's not here, then he's probably in the middle of a storm," she pointed out.
"I can't go home, because all the electricity would be out. That means all my fans will come to see what's happened…" Zakuro said. That's when a fact hit them. There was no way Zakuro'd sleep in Kish's or Tart's bed, and the jail beds- now who suggested that? Zakuro looked at him with a what-now look.
"You could… sleep in my bed with me," he suggested, saying the first thing that came to his mind, before mentally slapping himself. Why the heck did he say have to say that? With a roll of the eyes, the wolf girl nodded. Pie teleported them to his room. It was mostly black and dark purple.
Still wet, they climbed into the bed. Sadly, it was only meant for one person, so they were kinda squashed, and… well, it wasn't working out. The only option? If they hug each other, there'd be plenty of space. When that realization hit them both, neither could fight down the blush this time. So they both embarrassingly fell asleep in each others arms, both trying to deny t he fact that they were quite happy…
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Kish had just pulled you into his lap, when it started to pour- and when I say pour, I mean a complete downpour. You jump with a start when you hear a roar. "I think that's… thunder," informed Kish, still learning about earth weather. Tom and Rosy appear beside you and Kish.
"Should we leave?" questioned Rosy, floating because she doesn't want to get muddy. Kish helps you up. "No way! This is awesome. Seriously, how many times do you get to stand outside in the middle of a storm?" questioned Kish. "I've always wondered what it'd be like…" replied Tom.
You stare at them all like they're crazy, when lightning strikes a few feet away from your group, causing you all to fall to the ground with surprise. "Normally I wouldn't be afraid of lightning, but that was right next to us… well, lightning doesn't strike the same place twice," informed Tom.
You cling onto Kish's shirt with a death grip. "You're all maniacs… that thing almost hit us!" "Don't worry, Kitten! You're safe with me," replied Kish, wrapping his arms around you. "I know! To avoid the rain, we can stand under a tree!" suggested Rosy. You give her an are-you-insane look. "What?" she questioned, before seeing the tree she was talking about be struck by lightning. "Eh heh… what about a cave?" she added.
Tom shrugs the best he can threw the rain before he and Rosy teleport to the cave, Kish teleporting you there along with him.
It was slightly dark, and quite chilly. The lightning caused shadows to flash in and out of the cave. "Now what?" questioned Rosy. "I could kiss my Kitten!" suggested Kish with a grin, earning a smack from you. "What about you teach me how to use my powers?" "Too hard. I'll teach you tomorrow," replied Kish.
"Tom, can you help put up my hair? It got all frizzy because of the rain," informed Rosy. Having nothing better to do, your brother obliged.
Kish grins at you. "What?-!" you question nervously, trying to get out of his lap, which just makes his grip tighten. "You are my girlfriend," he says, before continuing, "So you probably want a kiss!" Before you even knew what was happening, he had turned you around so you're completely facing him before pressing his lips firmly against yours.
You wrapped your arms around his neck, deepening the kiss. When you each reached you air limits, the two of you pulled back from lack of air. He was about to kiss you again when there was a rather violent roar of thunder, causing you to cling to him. He himself was pretty shaken up, but ignored that fact and held you to his chest, gently stroking your hair. "Don't worry Kitten- I'll keep you safe," he whispered into your ear.
It was pretty late, and you fell asleep in his arms.
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T.G: Well? How'd y' like it? Too short? Too much fluff? Not enough fluff? Dumb? Awesome? Gimme your opinion with a review!