Alo, first story I ever wrote...at my own free will...hehe. I read some fics like this, but i never got how Sasuke got back...well other than being beaten. Mmmyeah...i got nothing up here other than enjoy the ficcy. (this is one of those "naruto brings sasuke back, then is punished for hurting him" fics)

Btw, naruto's description is found on deviantart, look for tubenose and for naruhina pic (it won't let me post the link)

in case me description isn't good enough (i was never good at stories) an I'm gunna make hinata look the same way in here.

DICLAIMER: I do not Own Naruto or any of the characters. The link above shows a picture which i Did not make, so it's not mine either.

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Konoha's #1 Unpredictable

Prologue

Sleeping in a bed wrapped in bandages was Konoha's Number One Unpredictable ninja.In the white bed of a off white/grey room with tiled floors and corked board tiled ceilings. Everything was so white in the hospital, even the air smelled like white and pure...aside from the medical alcohol smell making the entire building smell sterile and give the feeling of you going there to get shots.

His eyes was moving under the eyelids showing he was dreaming,he was dreaming of what happened two days before.

-------Dream-------

In a dark room, seemingly like a tomb with it's mud bricks and pillars, torches were lit ominously giving the effect that the room was filled with a low light of torches. In the center of the room was more brightly lit giving an arena like atmosphere with craters and damages objects in the area. Two shinobi were fighting and anyone can tell that this has been going on for hours. Both of them were panting with heavy signs of fatigue, but neither showed signs of wanting to take a knee to rest.

One had dark, raven hair that had a small pony-tail in the back and a lot of it standing up on the front with a few strands covering his right eye. He wore a loose off white dojo robe with black gi-pants and a purple belt-rope tide at a bow at his back. His clothes had numerous tears and cuts and were bloody like the bruises, cuts, and gashes on his body. The most noted one would be a swirling bruise on his right shoulder with the same swirling tear on the shirt. It seemed to be newly formed, seeing it was still bleeding a bit and him clutching it staring at the one who gave it to him. On his forehead was a Sound village forehead protector.

His opponent had spiky blond hair and azure eyes with whisker marks on each of his cheeks. He is wearing an orange jumpsuit but is altered a bit. Instead of it being long sleeved, it's now sleeveless with black short sleeves, athletic-style, showing off his muscular arms. On the back was a red whirlpool on a blue stripe crossing his shoulder down to the sleeves. He wore the jacket zipper down showing a black T-shirt with a crystal necklace on a leather string around his neck. His pants were like his jacket, the same orange primary color and blue secondary. The cuffs of his pants were folded so that he wouldn't trip on them with the heels of his ninja shoes. He wore black, fingerless gloves with arm weights at the wrists. Nice shoes were like his gloves, toeless, navy-blue to almost black, and also had training weights on his boots. On his forehead was a Konoha forehead protector.

His face was now scathed, scratched, and beaten, his mouth was bleeding also. His clothes were torn, but his necklace was still there. He had numerous minor and major cuts on his arms and legs. He had two large woulds that misses his vital spots. One's on his left shoulder, large as a fist and burned, but not bleeding as severely as it should be thanks to his little friend. The other would be on his side, just below the ribs, with the same texture as the wound on his shoulder, but seemed to be a third of it's full effect seeing that it looked like a third of the wound on his shoulder.

The two teens, no matter how tired they were, began to make ready for their final duel. They both knew this would be the last attack before they both collapse.

The Raven haired boy began to gather chakra into his hand, but had difficulty doing so seeing he be so fatigued and handed trained for endurance for a battle like this for so long. He eventually succeeded in making a glowing ball of chakra that looked like a Chidori, but where was the rand spikes of electricity and chirping? He hadn't been training for nothing. He refined the Chidori until it was nothing more but a glowing ball of chakra that engulfed his hand, but still concentrating more into it until small flames started to appear around the ball. Now, He would be using even more chakra to give it an exploding effect. He trained so hard to make this move into his own signature move.

The blond shinobi concentrated and molded chakra, the more the better. He would make this the Grand Finale of the fight, determined to not fail his promise a second time. He used his ungodly chakra supply that lasted for so long and was almost diminished. He made a cross figure with his fingers as he was molding chakra.

'I won't fail you again Sakura-chan...'

As he finally felt like he reached his chakra goal, he yelled out, "Tajuu Kage Bunshin No Justsu!" Multiple clones of him surround the raven haired bow, but was hiding in the shadows preparing for the last attack. In all of the blonde's training, he can finally to his trump card move without any help. In an experiment, he found out he can have his shadow clones do the same too. Blue swirling orbs surround the raven haired shinobi making it seem like fairy-light in the darkness.

Also in an experiement, the blond found out that all of this combined only multiplied the damage by ten, no matter how much bunshins he made. With this though, he can ensure at least 90 of these can hit.

The two smirked at each others training before they charged at each other. They charged at each other with what stamina they had left.

The clone Rasengans vs. one exploding Chidori of Electricity and Fire.

As the blonde-haired clones charged at the raven-haired one closing the gap, the dark haired shinobi stopped and pullback his chakra engulfed hand ready to strike as the nine clones and the real one comes. As the clones came within arm's reach, the sound nin turned on a dime on his heel and punched the blonde behind him as the other nine hit his back, side, and face with Rasengans unisonly.

On impact, the refined Chidori exploded on the orange clad shinobi which poofed before he could hit the sound, but was made up with the other nine. The splash damage of the move hit the rest of the clones and original as they did full damage to the sound-nin. The pony-tailed nin couldn't concentrate on moving the blast that he got hit as well unlike the other two times. This aftermath of this was two near dead nins in a crater of their making.

They both were unconcious.

-------Dream End-------

As the blonde opened his eyes, which would be the only thing that wasn't under bandages, he saw he was in a hospital, in a bed, next to a window showing Konoha with a sunset. With this view, he was guessing he's in the third floor of Konoha hospital. As he looked around somemore without moving his neck, as it was casted. He found he was alone in the room with a curtain on his left and the said window on his right. He was wondering some things in his mind...

' How'd I get here? Did I keep my promise? How long was I out? Will the village finally acknowledge me? Is there some good ramen I can eat? Can I even eat ramen right now?'

His thoughts was disrupted by someone walking in on him for a check-up on his status. In came a brown haired nurse that seemed like she's a few years older than himself. Her hair was down to her lower back, just above her bottom. I was in twin pony-tails like Tsunade's hair. She had brown eyes and in a nurse's uniform. A small beret with a red cross on the front, a buttoned, short-sleeved jacket, and a skirt, they were all very, very light pink, almost white. She was also wearing white heels and stockings. She came in looking at a clipboard with the end of a pin in her mouth chewing on it lightly showing she was thinking.

When the brunette looked up at her patient, she gaped at him and ran out,dropping the pen and clipboard, screaming, "TSUNADE-SAMA!!! HE'S AWAKE!! SOMEONE GET TSUNADE-SAMA!!"

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Like teh prologue? hope ya did oO i made it in a few hours...hehe...which is prolly nuttin...I DID make it with my bestness i could Oo

Anyway, please review, i don't care if ur fastidious or what not :P just hit me with anything you can come up with. Even the minutiae(small things) stuff. i need ideas oO (after the next chapter) I dunno whether to have naruto make a new village like orochimaru did (it would be more fun to me but a lil hard for the forehead protectors...) or have it be like the rest when he becomes kage of one of the existing, weaker hidden village. I hope it was a good read 3

New village name: Hidden Village of the Guardians Kage: Shugokage (i know this from runaways:P) Guardian Shadow (someone tell me the jap name for the hidden village oO)

I have a goal..of making 40 pages instead of 4...like opposingforce :P Btw: I need help w/ the jap names of the jutsus as i don't know em oO it sounds cooler than english :P

NEXT CHAPTER!: The recovery, The council, The memories, The Loss.

btw, ur prolly thinking "Why dosen't sasuke use his curse seal? Naruto his kyuubi?" They're both on overtime and only have enough chakra for one last power duel. kyuubi already came out and is exhausted since sasuke was a better fighter than naruto oO (naru has bad chakra control, so he burns it a lot) and sasuke...he's just on overtime like i said

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