Hi...well this is just a short poem I wrote, one of my firsts, that was inspired by a poem I read somewhere on the internet. It's basically about one Blader's suicide...I'll give a cookie to whoever guesses who it is!

I hope you enjoy it!

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Hush Little Baby

Hush little baby, you're almost dead,

You're eyes are lifeless and your pillow is red.

You think people resent you, that they want you to bleed,

You're all alone and that's all that you need.

Hush little baby, what are you thinking?

While you are dying, your friends are drinking.

The friends that have helped break down your walls,

That have always been there whenever you called.

Hush little baby, it's almost time,

Your life will end when the clock strikes nine,

You realise too late that this was all a mistake,

But once in darkness, one never wakes.

Hush little baby, now you are dead,

You see your cold body lie still on the bed,

You cry out your sorrows, the pain you hid well,

As your ultimately dragged, straight down to hell.

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Well how was it??

Please, please review...I don't mind whether it's one letter or one word...I love to know what you thought about this...people are entitled to their own opinion and I'd like to know what your opinion is.

Ja ne!