Okay here come my first Naruto fiction. Now beta read and corrected by chaosordered.
Hope you enjoy it, but first of all, you need to know this is an AU. Where young ninja graduate from the academy when they are fifteen instead of twelve. The sannins are around 40 years old instead of 50. And...well I think that's about it.
I don't speak Japanese, but to obvious popular demand I'll add the Chan, kun hime sama and stuff but don't expect me to put in the long Technique name, sorry.
as for the money ( I don't think I'll be talking about it much but if so, in MY vision since I don't know reality, 20 ryo equal 1 dollars savy?)
Synopsis: Naruto is a hunter-nin who is incredibly gifted, if a bit emotionless and a tad calculating, he now must confront the nightmares of his past after being gravely wounded. miraculously escapes his doom, but the event still leaves him a bit weak on the inside, the Hokage proposes that he slow down his ninja career, and go back to the academy two months before the students graduate to Gennin. Naruto agree but with the promise to quickly become Hokage himself and to finally get his mysterious revenge.
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NARUTO MUST DIE : Prologue
The city of Konaha is at peace. The night was peaceful. There wasn't any sounds that night except the usual animals and the leaves blowing in the leaves.
On top of the tallest tower sat a not so tall young man with shiny blond hair, a light brown long coat, a black wakizashi on the side and a black tanto on the back of his belt.
He was wearing a mask with a leaf symbol on it, identifying him as Hunter-nin.
His name was Uzamaki Naruto, fifteen year old, a one of a kind gifted boy. He wasn't as tall as a healthy fifteen year old though. He was reading a novel from his favorite author, Ian Flemming, titled the Casino royal. he was expecting summons to meet with the Hokage and he expected to die soon after that.
Why? As a ninja he gets he gets missions and as one of the most efficient ninjas he got high ranking mission. Even though 85 of the youth his age wasn't allowed to be one and it was 100 forbidden to be a hunter-nin when he started as one.
He just got done with two S-ranked missions at the same time which he did at the price of enormous effort. But something he didn't expect happen while he was back between Konaha and the fire country border.
FLASHBACK
In a dark forest, during the night, a young girl that appeared to be about twenty years old maybe less, with dark hair, a black mild gray kimono with white border, was performing hand seals and seemed in a lot of pain. Probably the broken blade in her gut had something to do with that, plus the amount of blood she was losing.
A green light appeared on her left hand, her breath was short ragged breaths in expectation of the enormous pain she was about tp receive. And pain she got. She screamed at the top of her lungs when she tool the blade out of her body in one smooth move. She stopped her fall with the same hand she used to pull out the blade, even as weak as she was in that position. She touched her wounded area with the green light.
"Dear god...", she whimpered while a soft smoke escaped the scarring wound, a small tear of pain rolled down her left cheek.
She gasped sharply when she heard a sound she recognized as a repetition of foot steps,
turning her head to the blurry form approaching, she expect the worst but she was quickly half reassured when she recognized who is coming.
"Uzamaki-sama! Tsunade-sama," escaped softly through her mouth even though she probably attempted to scream it.
The beautiful blond woman that should be forty years old but looked barely older than the dark haired girl named Shizune, is in the arm of Naruto who's uniform seemed a bit torn and had two kunai planted in his body, arm and shoulder.
He put the woman down very slowly.
"Is she alright," Shizune asked looking at Tsunade.
"I don't know, she seems petrified," responded Naruto in an aristocratic tone not looking directly at her but in the eyes of a Tsunade who seemed scared to death and was shaking badly.
The girl looked at her at the women covered in blood.
"The blood, her Homophobia causes to be scared to death of it," Shizune stated
"Hn... Any wound," Naruto asked.
"She was looking at her teacher but didn't even seem to hear Naruto's question so he had to bend down slightly in order to be in her hearing range and repeat.
"Are you hurt, Shizune," Naruto asked turning towards her.
"I'm fine, I think,' Shizune responded.
Naruto only nodded in acknowledgement.
"Just stay here while I take care of the problem," Naruto stated
"Wh...WHAT?!", again Shizune's voice was too soft to be a yell but it was still the tone she was aiming when it escape her mouth. "You're crazy, you're already more wounded than her, and they are...I don't know hundreds at least".
"Don't worry," Naruto replied waving the whole situatin off.
"N-NO," escaped Tsunade's mouth as she grabbed Naruto's hand, even though she was still shaking. "You can't go there you'll get killed all by yourself. Leave us, and get help from Konaha."
"As a Shinobi of Konaha I would be shamed for leaving you here to die while I run away. Don't worry about me, I'll be fine," Naruto said.
With that he turned to leave, letting her hand fall down to the grass.
"YOU'RE GOING TO DIE," Tsunade screamed at the top of her lungs.
he stopped and spoke as he turned to face her.
"You're going to die for and old woman who can't defend her rank of sannin or take care of her student?. Do you want that?! " Tsunade said braking down.
"If I died... nobody would miss me, it's not the case for you," said softly naruto turning back toward his goal.
With that said, He left her and Shizune alone...
Tsunade grabbed her wound with her hand, the pain finally reaching her brain. Shizune, seeing this, took her eyes off the young man that was going to his doom to save their lives. Even though it might end up with the three of them getting slaughtered and no-one to warn Konaha that a hundred, maybe even a thousand of ninja were heading for Konaha. They might not have been of high rank but, with the number and the element of surprise they might end up killing a hundred or more in the hidden village of the leaf.
Shizune got up to help her master, at least to sit up properly, and in order for her to take care of her masters wounds. But her Hemophobia seem to have passed now and she was well enough to take care of her own wound.
Naruto pushed past the leaves and ended up in front of a very large field where hundreds of ninja were standing. They looked more like your average large and muscular criminal than your usual shinobi.
"I WANT THEIR HEAD," yelled the leader who seemed to be a missing-nin from the cloud country.
The enemy grouped roared as they charged toward Naruto. Naruto calmly stood and unsheathed his wakizashi and tanto, and then started to run toward the army completely unafraid...
END OF FLASHBACK
Naruto was enjoying the evening sun as he read the slightly heated scene from his book were the main character was slowly undressing his deadly but beautiful enemy.
"Naruto," a soft voice call form behind the blond boy.
Naruto turned his head and saw an ANBU woman. Naruto recognized her as Yugao Uzuki, a highly qualified ally in the ANBU department where Naruto belong.
"Everybody is waiting for you," she said with a soft voice that barely hide her sadness.
"Thanks," Naruto replied using his usual aristocratic voice that didn't hide nor show any emotion.
He stood up as he clapped his book closed and he made a mental note of his current page. Naruto put his book away in his weapon pouch on the right side of his belt as he walked towards her. Yugao, being a tall woman while naruto was barely tall enough to reach kids height his age, looked down at him as he walked past her.
She seemed tense with words burning her tongue, wanting desperately to say them. Finally, when he was about to take the stairs to go down, she managed to say those words.
"Naruto…," she started. "I...I want you to know that...if anything could be done..."
The words were burning her to death wanting desperately to get free but she couldn't seem to be able to say them. Maybe bringing up the fact that one of the most beloved agent of Konaha, not that he knew, was a good idea. He was about to die without reaching his dream, a dream he confessed to a very few people, and she was one of them...
He smiled behind his mask, even if he knew she couldn't see it, he knew she could sense it in his answer.
"I know. Thank you," Naruto said in his usual tone that for once held gratitude.
It only took those words to stop Yugao's burning tongue. She didn't even have to finish her sentence because he already knew the end of it.
He left, leaving her alone. The wind slowly lifting up her long purple hair. The tears didn't want to fall, she was stronger than that, but her heart was desperately trying to let the world know how badly it ached.
End of Prologue.
Pretty short hu? well it's not a PROLOGUE for nothing. The real story will be in chapter one.
I MUST WARN YOU. if I publish chapter one and this prologue at the same time, it's not because I wrote it extra quickly, at the same time. It's because you all know there is a 3 day waiting in order to publish a fanfiction after being register.
DON'T FORGET to check my profil because you'll be able to access the blog and deviant art webpage where My artwork on This fiction is posted, and I remind you that the original attempt of this fiction is to make a Doujinshi(fancomix).
Hope you enjoyed, that you'll read, review.
PAIRING POOL:
There is two pool. NAruto's pairing, and Sasuke's. Post your vote:
(No yaoi, I don't make any critics but I don't like it at all and I would be sicked to make
good old love scene between to block.)
""Pool for Naruto:
-NARUTO/HINATA (My favorite, not because it's the greats, most heated or awsomest of all, but simply because it's the most logical pairing that and NaruSaku
-NARUTO/SHIZUNE (I love the pairing, and it is a shame there isn't enough of it, plus I already love hinata and shizune seem to be some kind of 20 year old version of hinata in her emotion and attitude)
-NARUTO/HINATA/SHIZUNE (I like the idea, it's easier, I like it a lot, even though it wouldn't make the love story an average one like most mange (meaning one guy with one girl) However it would do great with the personality of this Naruto so I encourage this pairing.)
N.B.: there also will be a one sided harem. the girl will like him a lot but without return.
""Pool for Sasuke:
-Sasuke/Hakufemale (A 'why not' pairing I always enjoyed)
-Sasuke/leftover(meaning if NaruShiz is chosen, it will be a SasuHina. If NaruHina is chosen, it will be a SasuShizultra-rare)
-Sasuke/right hand. (Meaning sasuke, being sometimes a real ass, will end up with nobody)
The only other pairing there is but that isn't in a plot vote is ShikaTem, a pairing I love and won't change(sorry) but it's of minor importance in the story.
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