This is my First fan-fiction and I don't expect it to be to long although I just write what I think at the moment, so there may be plot twists at any point :) its HinaXNaru maybe some small love of the others, but that's just their basic love when they pass along
I own nothing of Naruto except the idea of this story...so nothing
i shall input some sort of flashbacks so you understand more of the story like how Hinata found out about the Kyuubi.
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Whispers
!!!! Screaming
The Unfortunate Luck!
Jiraiya and Naruto already spend 2 years of training outside the village and Jiraiya was about to send the monthly report of they're progress to Tsunade.
'Ero-sennin?' Naruto asked
'I told you not to call me that a million times already!' Jiraiya screamed while giving Naruto a small pound on the head
'Where so close to the village, can't we just deliver the report personally?', 'its been 2 years already and I've bin dieing to see everyone' Naruto said while trying to estimate the distance.
'Sorry kid but you know as well as i do that if we go there we'll probably end up meeting all your friends and stay longer then we can afford in this limited time we got'
'Awe come on Ero-sennin' Naruto asked with the cutest face he could come up with.
'You know i won't go' Jiraiya said while trying to find the nearest bath house in the village they just found to go for his afternoon-peeking.
(Transformation-no-jutsu)
'Please Jiraiya-sensei!, please let us go there' Naruto asked while hugging Jiraiya with the result of him being knocked out blood streaming from his nose just before he could say
'For that body everything'.
So they set path for Konoha.
"For the first time in 2 years they were even close to it's grand gate's and now i can finally see my friends and Tsunade Ba-chan again!" Naruto thought as he tried to wake up Jiraiya from his drooling dream.
After a day of normal walking, they found themselves at the gates of Konoha.
The guards where breathless.
'Is that you Naruto?' the first asked being followed by the second who stood amazed to see the legendary Sannin Jiraiya with this mere demon brat, stunned by the fact his fellow guard knew him and greeted him.
'of course this is me!' Naruto shouted while walking past the guards
Jiraiya whispered to the asking 'i recon the fifth is busy with some paperwork?'
the second guard responded saying she was just back from a diplomatic mission but probably was in her office.
Naruto and Jiraiya jumped past rooftops to not bump into anything they know as Jiraiya suggested; when they arrived at the fifth's office window they saw Tsunade sleeping while drooling on some probably ancient and important scrolls with her usual amount of sake bottles around her.
'Ero-sennin?' Naruto asked in a suggestive way, 'we could do it...'Jiraiya said while over thinking how his funeral would be if she woke up.
'alright!, consider this as a part of your training, you have to break in into a rich person's house while the guards are everywhere and it is your duty to set up traps in the room to kill that person only now of course you don't intend to kill but to prank' Jiraiya whispered while he opened the window more to let them trough.
Silently Naruto went trough the window, checked which floor boards where cranking when stepped up, and pulled out a scroll. "Oh god I'm really going to die today" Jiraiya thought while seeing and knowing what Naruto was about to do.
Silently Naruto went trough the entire room putting wire's above, next to and amazingly even around Tsunade's head shoulders and arms.
During this he was also opening the scroll and releasing that what was sealed within...
"Oh shit he's really going to do this!" Jiraiya thought as looking for the fastest way to escape and setting a sleeping gas trap outside so that if awaken he would have a chance to live 5 seconds longer.
Naruto pulled out a large bucked and another one to attach them to the ceiling above the Hokage's head writing a note and putting it in her hand, shouldn't be sleeping during work Ba-chan! he put Jiraiya report on the head of the table where there was a free spot.
'now lets go for she wakes up Naruto said' but, to Jiraiya grief just that bit to loud as Tsunade woke up feeling something was wrong...
2 large buckets both filled with green and blue slime fell down on her as she moved her head and arms to stretch out after a good afternoon sleep...
'NARUTO!!!!!'was all they heard before disappearing into the village as fast as they could.
A moment later Jiraiya looked back almost smacking into a wall by surprise, he saw a great could of dust coming towards them...gaining fast!
He shouted to Naruto 'if you value you live you'll better run or hide kid' but it was to late, Tsunade was next to him giving him a front kick, blowing him back far enough to almost reach her office building, after a second she appeared next to Jiraiya with a smirk that could make a evil demon cry for his mother. He quickly stopped as he was also slammed back a few hundred feet trough the village.
As this was my first ever story written I don't know if it's good or if it was to long, short or whatever
Please read and review(R&R), I am not Asian nor am I English so here and there are error's in my typing and I am not going to start to find all jutsu names because I'll probably end up making some new one's.