Blood Plus: New Allies and Diva's return Final Mix

Chapter

Team Heroes' Corner

*Diva pinned Michael to the ground*

Diva: Almost three years since you started this little project and now you decided to not only revise it but add better storytelling and scenes. I want to ask you, what goes on in that human head of yours?

Michael *struggles to escape Diva's grasp*: I've been busy and I have grown as a writer and want all my work to reflect it. Now, get off me.

*Diva releases Michael*

Michael *straightens himself up and looks to his readers*: Like I said to Diva, I really want my old work to be good as my new work. So this will fixed up as well. No need to worry, I will keep my humor, but once I get to chapter 11, it'll get a little darker. So please review.

Chapter 3: Park attack! Revival of old foes!

"It is great to be home again. A bed is much more comfortable than a cocoon," Saya thought.

Saya woke up to a nice sunny morning. Saya rose from her bed to hear her brother Riku calling from downstairs.

"Saya, Breakfast is ready, come on down," said Riku from downstairs.

"Okay!" Saya called back.

Saya got up, got dress, and went downstairs to the kitchen. There, Kai, David, Julia, Lewis, Joel, Kandae, and Hibiki were sitting at the table. Also there was a little boy sitting by the twins who Saya didn't see yesterday. He had blond hair, black eyes, and had a smile on his face. He wore a white shirt with light blue shorts and small black shoes on his feet. Saya sat by Kai and look at the little boy.

"Excuse me Ms Julia, who's that little boy?" Saya asked, looking at the kid.

"Oh, this is Christopher, mine and David's child," said Julia. "Christopher, this is Saya,"

Saya felt surprised and a little dumbstruck. She knew before going to sleep that David and Julia were having a baby but she never thought she finally meet the little boy. But she smiled at Chris and replied to him.

"Oh, it's nice to meet you, Christopher," Saya greeted with a smile on her face.

"It's nice to meet you too, mom and dad told me a lot about you," said Christopher.

"All right, here's everyone's food, I hope you all enjoy it," Riku said, passing all of them their plates.

"Thanks Riku," said Kai. "So, if the Chiropterans and Nathan are back, someone must be helping him besides Collins?"

The Red shield members pondered a little more as they ate. Lewis then said, "Might be an outside force, but we must be ready for anything."

Everyone nodded. A half a hour finally passed as the raven haired queen finished her meal.

"I'm going to go wash up." Saya said to everyone and left her seat.

Saya went to the bathroom, while everyone continued eating and talking. Just then, the sound of the front door and a bell was heard. Kai and everyone turn to see who enter and were shocked to see who they were.

"Well, I'll be darn, Saya come downstairs, there's someone at the door," said Kai.

Saya came downstairs to see who came, and she was shock too. There standing in front of the door, were Hagi and Solomon, both smiling up at her. Saya didn't know what to say, so she hugs the two of them.

"I'm so glad to see you two again," said Saya.

"We're happy to see you too," said Solomon, smiling too.

As she let go of both of them, Hagi said, "If it's ok, I would be glad to cut your hair for you,"

Saya smiled and replied, "Sure Hagi,"

While Saya's hair was getting cut, Solomon was talking to David and the others, informing them of what they have seen.

"So anything you two saw? David asked.

"There has been a lot of Chiropterans where ever we went, and we know we saw my former brother, Nathan," said Solomon.

"Where did you see him?" said Joel.

"At the Zoo," Solomon replied.

"The Zoo, isn't it the place where Saya and Diva were found by the first Joel?" asked Riku.

"Yes, and when we spotted him, he was talking to someone wearing a black coat," said Solomon. "The man said something about the bone of Saya's and Diva's mother is needed to for a ritual,"

Saya came back in with her new haircut. Her front bangs remained, but her raven hair now hanged by her neck.

"What's this about my mother's bone?" Saya asked.

"We don't know, but it has something to do with the clocked man," added Hagi.

Let's not ruin the day of quietness we have. Saya, you want to go to park with me, Riku, and the twins?" Kai asked.

"Sure, Hagi, Solomon, you want to come with us?" Saya asked.

"Sure," Both men said.

They said good bye to everyone and headed out the Pub. The park was across town so they walked and talked. The group stood in front a store when Saya asked something.

"So, after five years, no one else knows what happened to me, my school, Kaori, anybody?" Saya asked the boys.

Kai and Riku stopped in place and look nervous at her.

"Well…" they said at once.

Saya placed her hands across her chest and look at her brothers with a stern look, Hagi, Salomon, Kendae, and Hibiki looking worried. "What did you do?"

"Well Saya, we…" Riku tried to explain when a voice called for them across the street. "Hey Saya!"

Saya, Hagi, Solomon, Riku, Kai, and the twins turned to see a familiar face to Saya and the boys. It was a young adult with brunette hair and dark eyes. It was Kaori Kinjo, Saya's friend. She had grown a lot since Saya last saw her now sporting a Japanese College uniform. Saya looked overjoyed as she smiled when Kaori ran up to hug her.

"Saya, it's been so long, how you been?" Kaori said, releasing Saya.

Saya placed a hand to her hair and said, "Doing well." She eyed her friend's college uniform. "Sorry I didn't see your graduation, I was…" she trailed off, thinking of something to say when Kaori replied with something that make Saya shocked in place.

"Don't worry, Kairi and Riku gave the full detail of what happened." Kaori said with a smile.

Saya's face snapped into focus, her brothers looking more worried.

"They… told you everything?" she said slowly.

"Yeah! I knew something was going on with you when I saw that girl who looked like Riku. Then Kai and Riku told me the truth. That was your twin sister, that you were fighting those monsters and everything?" She said quickly and fast.

Saya then looked to her brothers, who jumped in panic. Her eyes flashed red, and she was pissed.

"Would the two of you follow me so we can IN private?" she said, her voice coated with red hot venom.

"The boys stood there scared as Says took both their collars and dragged them to an alley.

"Mr. Hagi, Mr. Salomon, where is Auntie Saya taking daddy and uncle Kai?" Hibiki asked kindly.

"Saya just want to talk to Kai and Riku in private, we shouldn't bother them." Solomon said kindly as well.

"Her actions have changed, though I hope she doesn't hurt them. It's not like they had a choice." Hagi said as the three siblings disappeared from view.

The raven haired queen slammed the two boys near a wall and pointed a finger at them. They never have seen Saya so mad before, are they sure, she is not going crazy?

"You told her? How, when, why?" Saya yelled in a quiet tone.

"Well to answer your question: She asked us where you were, it was after she graduated from school, and we didn't want to lie to her." Riku explained.

Saya's anger wasn't going down.

"We had to Saya, and she promised not to tell a soul. She read Joel's diary and knows everything. She committed to help us. Please understand." Kai added.

Saya finally calmed down and sighed. "Alright I understand, but tell me these things. We're a family, and we shouldn't keep so many secrets."

"We are sorry Saya, but we promise to tell you anything." Riku said glad Saya is not mad anymore.

Saya chuckled. "Okay, let's get back to the others."

Kai and Riku nodded and followed Saya from the alleyway and back to Kaori, Hagi, Solomon, Kendae, and Hibiki. Saya spoke to her old friend.

"You know everything and want to help us any way you can?" She asked her.

She nodded, hoping Saya won't be mad at here for knowing everything, even the burdens she held in the past. Saya responded by placing hand to her shoulder and smiling, her eyes closed. "Welcome to the team!"

Kaori smiled. With Saya's mood better, Kai and Riku told Kaori that they were heading to the park. Kaori decided to come with the. The continued walk to the park was more peaceful then the big reveal of a new ally but they made it there. Riku guided his daughters to the playground as the others watches them walk away. They sat there on the bench, but Saya's gaze was on Riku. Her little brother now her second Chevalier, now father to her twin sister's children. Although it was her quick thinking that saved Riku's life, but the consequence was Riku getting raped and impregnating Diva. Riku swore during their year disappearance that he'll get stronger to protect everyone. But Saya still felt bad for her brother, but she wondered one thing… Did she really make the right choice?

"Saya, what's wrong?" asked Kai.

Saya snapped back into focus and saw Kai and Kaori were looking at staring into space. Sh3e sighed and spoke to them, Hagi, and Solomon.

"It's just, do you think I made a right choice making Riku my Chevalier?" asked Saya.

"Saya, Riku was going to die. You had no choice," replied Kai.

"And you won't let him to die, so saving him but cursing him was the only options." added Kaori

"I know, but in the end, Diva went after him and we know the rest," replied Saya, remembering the horrible sight on Riku, clothes all loosely off his body and Diva; the expression of pure bliss, savoring Riku's touch.

"True," Kai replied again, Hands clenched his fists anger.

"Yeah and remember what you did for the Sif. If you didn't give them your blood, they would all been dead," said Hagi.

"And you made the right choice letting the girls live with us. Saya, whatever happens, we will help you no matter what comes our way. Not just as allies and Chevaliers, but as a family" added Solomon.

Saya's sprits were lifted even more as she smiled up at each and every one of them.

"Yeah, you're right," said Saya.

But the peacefulness that Saya was feeling now was broken abruptly when she hear the cries of a familiar sounds: Chiropterans and Hibiki's cry. Saya and everyone leaped off the bench and ran up to see 15 fifteen large dark vampire like creatures with little yellow eyes surrounding Riku and the girls. Kendae and Hibiki hid behind Riku as he tried to protect them.

"Chiropterans," growled Saya.

"Here, now?" Kai said taking out a gun filled with bullets packed with Saya's blood.

"Let's not worry about that now, Riku and the girls are in trouble," Saya said dramatically.

Hagi passed Saya her sword and she ran to save Riku and the girls. A Chiropteran was inching its way to Riku and the twins as they cowered into Riku's chest as the Chiropteran was stopped and sliced in half. Blood poured from the now dead Chiropteran as they saw their savior. Saya had rescued them in the nick of time as more Chiropterans were bowled over by Hagi's black and silver cello case. A path was now cleared for Solomon and the others to make it to Riku and the twins.

"Saya!" Riku exclaimed with excitement.

"Kai, Kaori, get Riku and the girls to safety, we'll handle the Chiropterans," Saya instructed.

"Right," nodded Kai. Kai and Kaori grabbed Riku, Kendae and Hibiki and got them to safety. After Saya saw them safe, she turned her attention to the Chiropterans. Saya press her thumb on the groove of the sword, clip her thumb, and blood flowed though the sword, her eyes turning crimson red. Behind her, Solomon hand turn into a blade and Hagi unwrap his hand from the white bandages reveling his chiropteran claw. The Chiropterans returned to their feet and headed foreword to Saya, Hagi, and Solomon. The three of them took quick haste in defeating the Chiropterans; all that was left was crystallizing parts and pieces on the ground. Kai, Riku, and the Twins walk back to them as Saya still held her unsheathed sword in her hand. Solomon was examining the Chiropteran remains. The sun was setting behind them as Kai asked, "We should be fine now, I don't see any more Chiropterans nearby."

Kai look to Solomon. "What's up?" he asked.

"These Chiropterans that attacked us, why would a small number come for us, unless…" he paused.

"Unless what?" Kai asked.

"…unless someone ordered them to attack us at this point in time." Solomon finished.

"What?" everyone gasped.

Behind them, someone was clapping. Saya and her friends turned to see a man wearing a black coat, his hood covering his face.

"Ok, what are you doing here?" Saya demanded, clutching her sword.

The man opened a corridor of darkness and made a "follow me" gesture and entered the corridor. The group looked at the corridor waiting for them as

"Does he want us to follow him?" Kai asked his sister and everyone.

"From how he wants all of us to go with him, I guess so. Hagi, Solomon, Kai, Riku, Keep Kaori and the girls close to you at all times. We don't know where this portal will take us and why he wants us to follow, but we must be ready for anything." Saya said to them.

The boys nodded. Saya sheathed her and the group walks into the portal. Where the portal sent them was graveyard, it felt like someone wanted them here.

"Is this a really a graveyard?" questioned Kai.

Kendae and Hibiki were huddled close to Riku as Kaori added, "It's like something out of a horror movie."

"But this is not horror movie, this is real and we're just walking into the climax of the movie." Riku added as well.

"I see you made it," said the unknown man.

The man removed his hood, revealed to be… Nathan. But her face wasn't the same flamboyant look he had when Saya first met him, but now serious, the look that wrote 'he wasn't playing games anymore'.

"You!" yelled Saya.

Nathan said nothing and walk to a cauldron. The cauldron was heated by 25 candles and something was in the blanket that looks like bones. Nathan picks up the bundle and dumps the bones into the cauldron.

"Bone of the mother, you will revive your daughter," said Nathan.

The contents on the cauldron began to turn blue and bubble. Saya, Hagi, Solomon, and Kai kept their hands on their weapons, worrying what will come out of that cauldron. Nathan turned back to Saya, Kai, Hagi, and Solomon and sent a large ball of darkness at the four, sending them flying and spread across the graveyard.

"Saya, Kai!" said Riku. Riku was about to run to his brother and sister but Nathan said, "Don't move. You will be first to see their return."

Riku stayed by the twins and Kaori, keeping both arms in front of them. Kaori stood there as well, scared of what might come.

Then Nathan took out a knife sliced a piece of his arm. The wound healed within seconds, as if it never was there to begin with. Riku stood there with Kaori and the girls, wondering what was Nathan planning? With a smirk on his face, he walked back to the cauldron and dropped the piece of flesh into the contents.

"Flesh of the former servant… You will awaken your daughter once again." Nathan chanted once again.

The contents turned purple, now stream rose from the contents.

Then Nathan walks up to Solomon and slit his arm, blood flow out of the cut. Nathan took out a veil and fills the veil with the blood. The wound healed in seconds. Nathan returned to the cauldron, and placed the final ingredient into it.

"Blood of the Chevalier, you resurrect your queen," said Nathan.

Then the contents of the cauldron began to bubble and shake, and sparks began to fly. Saya and the boys finally woke up to see what's going on. The sky was now pitch black, the stars were the light source was given as dark wisps and wind formed all over the graveyards as four figures began to shot out at the same time. The four figures each took forms, three men and a young woman. When Saya and her friends saw who they were, there was nothing to say.

Diva…

Amshel…

James…

Karl…

They were alive. The raven/blue haired queen spoke to Saya and only Saya… "It's been a long time, dear sister."

Michael: Wow, after finishing this revise of the chapter, I really should have focused on the characters, not humor. But I think this chapter is a lot better, even involving Kaori then just her little cameo in Saya's dream. Next chapter will be a better version of Saya and Diva's battle and little flashback with Amshel and Solomon. I hope this is better, and then chapter 11 will be worked on.

And you might be wondering why I am fixing up my old work? Well for starters like I meationed before, I want my work to reflect my new work and get ready for a long reason.

Most writers I know non't improve their work and still do the same things. One writer still is a sexist furry and his plots are way too similar and another has nostagia for brians. I don't want to be that guy, I like writing but I like showing a good plot with Character Development, pacing, anf even and plan out endings. So what I am saying is...

Writer, put more heart in your work, long or short, depends on your style.