This is my second Fanfic so please don't be to harsh!!
HPOV (Heidi)
We can finally go hunting; it should not take this long to find at least 10 humans to feed off of, ah well. A few friends and I had been looking for a few humans to feed off of in the local forest, and I was not having any luck. As I was walking, I smelt one of the most delicious scents I had ever come across. Blood. Hopefully no one has finished the person off yet. It took me about another 5 minutes to find where the humans were. There were five males, 4 females, and 1 child. As I got closer, I noticed that the smell was coming off of the child, who looked to be about 1 year old. I told some of the lesser guards to somehow lure the other humans away and finish them off. The guards either flirted or seduced them into following them, so that I could be left only with the girl.
The child was beautiful, she had big brown eyes and pretty pink lips, and for a human child she seemed awfully pale. I quickly thought how I could have ever wanted to kill the girl, seeing as how she was so innocent. I promised myself that I would not let any harm befall her, as long as she was with me. There was something about her, that made you want to know her better, even though she is only and infant.
By the time I had gotten back to the place I call home, I realized I had been holding my breath. The girl's blood was perfect in every way, it was a miracle I had not killed her. As I rounded the corner to get to my room I saw Jane. I prayed that Jane would not hurt the girl, but my prayers were not answered. Jane started walking over to me, slowly at first with a wicked grin on her face. As she got closer I could see the smile slowly fade from her face, little by little. When she was finally standing face to face with me she screamed "What is wrong with her, my powers are not working!" I gave a sigh of relief knowing that the girl was not going to be harmed.
Jane's question bothered me though. Why wasn't her power working on her? I would definitely have to ask Aro about it later. For now my troubles were over, and all I was thinking about were the many outfits I could by her!!
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