Hello guys I took all your advice but I don't know how to get a beta reader to criticize and help me. You see, I am just new here and for those who saw my mistakes about my grammar and spelling. English is our third language.

And about the correction of the word "dobe", I think am right cause almost all the fan fiction I read; they all use Dobe, not dode. Anyway, please do patience on this, I am only 13 year old, so don't expect for golden award novel and thank for the review and the support. Still, I have to suffer in my two math subjects. (Sob)

P.S

Oh, I need reviews for my others stories to criticize me and pity on me.

prove your love

After Sasuke is having a relationship with Sakura, Naruto was broken and a young girl named Hana comforts him then Naruto falls deeply in love with her. But will happen when Sasuke found out that his beloved kitsune is in someone's arms?

Romance and hurt/comfort

Erase

Naruto's family is all messed up his father had unfair, his brother a sex addict. But one day, he transferred to another school as a scholar but his father affair, Hinata is studying in the same school with her brother Sasuke as his classmate.

Romance and drama

Beyond anything

Sasuke, a loner. Is accompanied by a ghost named Naruto because he can't go to heaven if he wouldn't kiss Sasuke as his regret, but what if Sasuke fall in love with a ghost?

Romance and humor

Thank you for all.