AN- Hello, ShadowRebirth37 here! I've had this idea floating around for months now, and me writing 'broken' for Of Zoids and Organoids made me want to write it again. This will be canon in the sense that Shadow is really brought to Raven and stuff, but AU in that Shadow reacts differently. You know what, just watch episode 49, "The Distant Stars" and see for yourself. Broken is only a temporary title, so please help me with names!! This will be a short fic, anywhere from 5 to maybe 8 chapters. Not a major fic like The Dark Savior, but a short fic written for fun in between chapters of The Dark Savior.Anyway, I don't know if anyone else reading this thought that Shadow was holding back when he and Raven fought, well I did. In here, however, this is my take on that scene if Shadow hadn't held back. Hehe, bad things are written all over this!!XD Lol. Well, let me know what you guys think of my wild imagination!!XD Without further delay, chapter 1- Forced to Retaliation!! (Ohh… that screams bad things, don't it?XD)


.:Chapter 1- Forced to Retaliation:.

Shadow fought against the two soldiers that were pulling on the rope attached to the collar around his neck. They were leading him into a room, and he didn't want to go inside. With a final, sharp tug, they managed to pull the great Organoid off his feet and drag him inside.

With an enraged snarl, Shadow got to his feet and looked around the dimly lit room, snapping at the two soldiers that had now released the rope. They gasped and jumped back, away from the Organoid's dangerous jaws. He glared at them before he turned and looked at the two people that stood in front of him. One was a young boy, no more than twelve years old, and the other a white-haired man.

The boy was staring at him in shock, and Shadow growled a warning to him. His look of shock faded, even as Shadow continued to growl at him. The dark Organoid turned to the man, looking for any hint as to why he had been dragged in here, but couldn't find any.

Shadow snarled in rage, his normal, docile nature overridden by anger. He narrowed his eyes dangerously and threateningly bared his sharp teeth. The human, Raven, as the white-haired man had called him earlier, didn't react or show even the slightest hint of fear. Silence filled the dimly lit room, and that infuriated Shadow even more.

With a loud snarl, he charged and swung his heavy tail at Raven. He ducked, the Organoid's tail just missing his head by inches. Just as Shadow turned to attack again, Raven struck back, tackling the large Organoid to the ground and pinning him down. Now blinded by rage and shock, Shadow snarled and twisted around in a desperate attempt to escape.

Suddenly, Shadow saw an opening. With an enraged snarl, he lunged with mouth open, his jaws snapping shut on Raven's shoulder, causing him to scream in pain. Raven raised his arm to hit him, but Shadow's clawed hand caught his arm in mid-swing. Shadow growled, biting down harder and digging his claws into his arm, causing Raven to cry out. With a simple flick of his head, he threw Raven into the wall behind him as hard as he could. He heard Raven groan as he fell to the floor and lay on his side, obviously in a lot of pain.

Shadow got to his feet and walked over to Raven, staring down at him with a wicked growl. He opened his jaws and prepared to finish him off, but just before he struck, Raven somehow managed to punch Shadow across the nose, which caused the great Organoid to yelp and snap his head back.

This, however, only succeeded in further angering the already furious Organoid. Snarling in rage, Shadow bit into Raven's outstretched arm, and before the human even had a chance to scream, tossed him effortlessly into the wall at his left. Raven hit his head hard on the metal wall and collapsed to the floor on his side, eyes closed and body still. At first Shadow thought he was dead, but a few seconds later he groaned and opened his eyes slightly.

'He put up a good fight, but now I'm ending this pathetic quarrel…'


Raven watched as the Organoid walked up to him and glared down at him, growling loudly. He looked up at the black Organoid as it leaned down, its jaws now dangerously close to his unprotected and already injured arm.

Before he could react, the Organoid struck, biting into his upper arm with an angry snarl, its teeth sinking deep into him. He cried out weakly in pain and tried to pull free, but he only succeeded in further injuring his arm. Gritting his teeth, he struggled against the Organoid's grasp, but it was useless.

'This isn't helping…' Raven thought, stopping his struggling. '… I'm only making it worse!' The Organoid growled, flicking its tail behind it. Raven looked past the Organoid to the two soldiers, who were frozen with shock and fear. One of them snapped out of it and sharply elbowed the other, pointing towards the large Organoid with his rifle. He motioned to the rope hanging loosely from the Organoid's throat with the barrel of his gun, and his partner nodded.

Very slowly, they fanned out, one walking around the Organoid's left, the other its right. The one on the Organoid's left crouched down and tried to reach the rope while the one to its right held his gun at the ready. While all this was going on, Prozen quietly slipped out of the room to go and get more soldiers to secure the Organoid.

The crouched soldier managed to grab the rope, but his movement caught the Organoid's eye. It snarled and released Raven's arm, turning towards the crouched, unarmed soldier. He froze, still clutching the rope tightly with trembling hands. The Organoid stared at the soldier, growling loudly with bloody teeth bared. The other soldier had his gun pointed at the Organoid's throat, ready to pull the trigger at the slightest hint of aggression. With the soldier's gaze focused on his gun-sight, he didn't see the Organoid's tail that was slowly moving towards his leg…

Suddenly, the Organoid's tail wrapped around his ankle, and in a flash pulled it out from under him, causing him to fall to the floor and drop his gun. Just before he dropped the gun, however, his finger slipped and he pulled the trigger. A shot rang out through the room, and was followed by a scream of pain, not from the soldier, not from the Organoid, but from Raven. The bullet had ricocheted off the metal wall and hit him in his lower right leg, leaving a long horizontal gash where it had grazed him.

The Organoid didn't seem to notice his cry of pain, for it was to busy fighting with the two soldiers. The one that had been tripped was unconscious, and the Organoid had knocked the other soldier into the wall, and he too fell unconscious.

Silence filled the room, and the only noise was the Organoid's loud breathing. It stood there, unmoving, staring out the open door, as if it was listening. Suddenly a figure appeared in the doorway, blocking the light. The figure gasped at the scene- a blood-flecked Organoid growling as it stood in the center of the dimly lit room, two unconscious soldiers at its side and feet, and Raven collapsed and bleeding at the base of the far wall.

"Raven! Raven, are you alright?!" the figure shouted to Raven, casting a wary glance at the growling Organoid. Raven looked up the figure, recognizing his voice as Major Karl Schubaltz.

"No…" Raven groaned, coughing up blood.

"What hurts?" Karl shouted, taking a step inside the door, testing the Organoid's reaction.

"Everything…" Raven moaned, closing his eyes. Karl took another step inside, but an irritated growl from the Organoid made him freeze.

"Are the other two alright?" Karl said, loudly enough for him to hear.

"I think they're just unconscious. They're still breathing, so they're still alive." Raven answered, groaning from the effort of talking.

"Hold on, I'm coming to get you…" Major Schubaltz said just loudly enough for Raven to hear. He took another step, but this time the Organoid snarled and snapped at him. Karl jumped back into the doorway, away from its jaws.

"Major, just go get help, you can't get to me without getting killed. Go get help." Raven shouted to him, realizing that he would be unable to reach him with the Organoid standing there. Karl looked at him and nodded, also realizing he was impossible to reach. He turned and disappeared to his left, leaving him and the Organoid alone.

Silence descended on the room, with no noise other than the occupants' breathing. The Organoid turned from the door and looked at him, its eyes narrowing with hatred. It walked over to him and growled lowly, glaring down at him, his own blood dripping from its jaws. Raven looked up at the dark Organoid with pain-filled eyes as it hovered over him, almost as if it was waiting for him to die.

'Well, it won't have to wait much longer…'


Shadow glared down at the suffering human, growling loudly and grinning cruelly. Raven looked up at him, eyes filled with pain. Shadow hardly cared; he just wanted to finish off his wounded prey. Growling loudly, he leaned down with jaws open wide. He snarled loudly, and just as his jaws were going to snap shut on the human's throat, he heard several shouts coming from somewhere outside the doorway. His head snapped up and he glared outside, hearing more shouts.

'Great… that soldier brought back-up… oh well, I guess I won't be able to finish him off in peace here, so I'll just take him somewhere where I can…' Shadow thought with a wicked smirk. He turned back to Raven, who now had lost consciousness. Shadow lifted his head and roared loudly, the panels on his chest opening to reveal the hollow space inside. The countless cords tucked neatly inside shot out in a silver blur, wrapping around Raven's unmoving body and pulling him inside.

The panels closed over Raven, trapping him inside just as the first soldiers ran into the room. Shadow turned around and roared loudly, causing them to stop dead in their tracks. With another loud roar, Shadow spread his blood-colored wings and shot out the door, knocking down several of the soldiers.

A few shots rang out from some of the soldiers, but none of them found their marks. Roaring again in triumph, Shadow flew towards the winding desert hills with his prize tucked away inside himself. And as Shadow's form disappeared over the horizon…

So did Raven's hopes of rescue…

.:End of Chapter 1:.


AN- Wow… I've turned Shadow from an adorable, lovable Organoid to a bloodthirsty demon. My mind is an enigma.XP Remember, this is based off a dream, so that means it doesn't really tie into the anima, meaning that certain important characters could die. Hint hint!! Lol. This fic won't be as major as The Dark Savior or my others, think of it as a side project started by a major band. I want your guys' opinions on this one. I like this fic, but I have an important announcement- all of my fics will be on temporary hold due to vacation starting next week. This is not permanent, and all fics will be resumed as soon as I return home from Yellowstone. Glad you all know that now. Well, please review!! I want to know how I did!!XD

Ibeyla :P