Ya I get that I've haven't updated in months!!!! don't be mad I've had some issues (and that's no an excuse I promise) SOORRY!!!!! But I'm back on my normal schedule now (not that I ever really had one)!!!!! BE HAPPY! because if you are you al get tacos!!!!!!


Couples Get in Free

The group of three were about 1 minute away from the carnival. Raku was as excited as can be about going to the carnival. Naruto was annoyed that his great plan which really wasn't a plan didn't seem to work. But he was happy that Hinata was coming along. Hinata was just happy that she got to spend some time with Naruto.

All of them could hear the sounds of all the people at the carnival. Mostly kids screaming.

"YES we're here finally!" Raku shouted.

"Yup!" Naruto shouted happily too.

"This carnival looks like alot of fun N-naruto-kun." Hinata said.

"Ya I know." Naruto replied.

"YAY I wanna go on the bumper cars and play games!!!!!!! AND EAT LOTS AND LOTS OF FOOD!!!" Raku said over excited.

"Oh and who do you think is going to pay for all this?" Naruto asked Raku.

Raku gave him a strange look. "Well you duh. I swear you're so stupid." Raku said, Hinata giggled.

"STUPID!? Listen I'm not paying for all of your stuff!!!" Naruto shouted.

"Well you better....." Raku said.

"I better or what?" Naruto asked.

"That's for me too know and for you to never find out." Raku said mysteriously.

"What?!"

"Lets just say if you don't you will be blackmailed."

"What aren't you like four?! Didn't your parents ever tell you it's not OK to blackmail people?!" Naruto shouted.

"Well......yes. What's your point?!"

"My point i-" Naruto was cut off by Hinata.

"Um guys....please d-don't fight. And I have money, I can pay for t-things too N-naruto-kun." Hinata said shyly.

Naruto smiled.

"Aw Hinata you're so sweet."

A blush crept it's way up Hinata face.

"Um th-thanks Naruto" Hinata stuttered.

"Ugh! Will you too please stop being so lovey dovey all the time?" Raku asked annoyed. Hinata blushed a bright red. And Naruto blushed a slight pink.

"Shut up! We're are never lovey dovey."

"Whatever lets just play some games!" Raku said.

The three started walking into the plaza where the carnival was being held.

The carnival had lots of things for everyone to do. All sorts of attractions like a huge ferris wheel, Bumper cars,a kissing booth, a tunnel of love(A/N could this tunnel of love have anything too do with the future hmmm?) and lots of stalls with food.

Naruto and Hinata were still taking in everything that was around them, when Raku took off in the direction of the bumper cars.

"HEY STOP RUNNI-....I mean do whatever you want me and Hinata will meet you in 2 ho-" Naruto was cut off by Hinata.

"N-naruto we can't just leave him. H-he is sorta your responsibility...right?" HInata said.

"NO! he isn't my responsibility.....but I guess your right we can't leave him." Naruto said.

They both started walking side by side towards the bumper cars attraction.

There wasn't a line for the bumper cars. Raku had already gotten in a bumper car.

Once they both got there, Naruto hurried and got into a orange bumper car. Hinata followed after him.

"Um Naruto-kun do you mind if I sit in your bumper car?" Hinata asked looking down.

"Of course you can Hinata!" Naruto said scooting a bit so Hinata could get in.

Hinata sat down next to Naruto. It was a very tight fit. Naruto noticed this.

'Wow Hinata-chan has some big hips. Wait don't all girls have huge hips? No I don't think Saku-. Ahhhh what am I thinking!' Naruto thought to himself

Hinata blushed at being so close to Naruto.

Raku was in a red bumper car.

All the other bumper cars were quickly becoming occupied with people, while a guy went around checking to make sure everyones seat-belts were on correctly. Once all the bumper cars were full the guy who worked the control panel presses a green button to start the attraction.

"Ya finally!" Raku shouted excited that the ride was finally starting. Kids in bumper cars instinly kept trying to crash into one another.

Naruto started to bump into the cars around him. All the collisions with others cars were causing him and Hinata to be jerked back and forth and side to side. Naruto was laughing happily because all of the people in bumper cars were little kids and they couldn't control their cars very well. So Naruto was destroying them all. While Hinata was blushing from constantly being knocked into her crush.

Raku was having lots of fun bumping into the other kids cars. He would have tried to bump into Naruto and Hinata's car but they were on different sides.

Naruto was still having fun owning all these little kids, when he felt a bump on the back of their car. He looked back to see a boy who looked around 6 in a green bumper car. The boy had a mohawk and was giving Naruto a smirk. Naruto was extremly shocked. He was doing so well doging and hitting other cars and all of a sudden this little boy comes and bumps into him. Well he wouldn't let this slide by. Naruto was about to step on the back pedal to teach the boy a lesson on how you don't mess with Naruto Uzumaki, when he felt a hand on his.

"Um N-naruto-Kun I think you should l-let it go." Hinata said. "I mean h-he is just a little boy right." Hinata said hoping she could stop this. Naruto thought about it for a moment. He wanted to get back at the boy but he didn't want to upset Hinata.

"Well OK I guess I can let it g-" Naruto was interrupted by another bump by the same boy. He looked back and saw the boy still had that same taunting smirk on his face. "That's it! I'm taking him OUT!" Naruto said mad now. He swerved the car around so that he was facing the boy ready to knock into to him, when his car suddenly stopped.

"W-what!!??" Naruto said confused.

"I think the r-ride is over Naruto-kun." Hinata said.

"NOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! How is it that the great Naruto Uzumaki is defeated????" Naruto shouted in agony. The little boy had already gotten out of his bumper car to go back to his family. Hinata giggled at Naruto's behavior. Naruto stopped and looked at Hinata.

"Hey! You giggled again." Naruto said looking at Hinata. Hinata blushed and looked down.

"U-um ya I g-guess...." Hinata said still looking down. When she felt a hand on her chin lifting her head up.

"Hinata-chan I told you you can look at me when I talk to you. I don't bite. OK"

"U-um ya OK a-arigato Naruto-kun." Hinata said.

"Heh. You don't have to apologize Hinata-chan. Just try to look at me when you talk OK. I like looking at your face." Naruto blushed when he realized what he said. "U-um I mean ummmmm......you should just umm try ummmm ya I'm gonna shut up now." Naruto said still blushing.

'Oh god I'm so stupid why did I say I like looking at her face. I mean I kind do bu-. NO! No Hinata is friend. I hope she doesn't hate me for saying that. I'm such an idiot!'

"I-its ok Naruto-kun. I sorta like looking at your f-face umm too....." She told him blushing. Naruto's head shot up.

"Really? Ummm thanks." He said smiling. Hinata were snapped out of their conversation by a voice.

"Hey if you two are done flirting. Can we go?" Raku said.

"HEY WE WERE NOT FLIRTING!!!!" Naruto shouted.

"Oh really? 'Ohh Hinata I like looking at you face.' 'Oh Naruto-kun I love your face to' Blah blah blah bleh!"

Naruto and Hinata blushed. But, they both realized they did have to go when they realized they were the only one's still in a bumper car. They both got out and walked off the attraction with Raku.

"Sooooo what now?" Naruto asked.

"I'm HUNGRY!!!" Raku said.

"U-um well I am kinda hungry." Hinata said.

"GREAT! Then we'll go find some food."


They all finished eating their food.

"Mmmmmm that was good!!!!" Raku said happily.

"Ya that was pretty good."Naruto said agreeing.

"OH! I know lets go on the roller coaster!" Raku shouted.

"YA!!!!!" Naruto said happy about the idea of going on a roller coaster. Hinata however was not so happy about this.

"U-um actually I don't really want to go on a roller coaster. I'm kinda s-scared." Hinata said hoping she wouldn't disappoint them.

"Oh come on Hinataaa. I'm sure that Naruto-kun will hold your hand in you go on with him. Right Naruto" Raku said. Hinata blushed.

"Ya I guess. If holding your hand would make you feel better Hinata-chan." Naruto said to Hinata.

"Alright!!! It's settled we're going on the roller coaster!!!" Raku shouted.

"U-um ok...." Hinata said still unsure about this, and blushing about the fact that Naruto would be holding her hand.

"Cool lets go."

The roller coaster was called "The Cyclone". It was pretty big for a roller coaster just at a carnival.

As the group got closer to the roller coaster they could start to see it's actual height. And, it was pretty high. Hinata really was having second thoughts about this.

'Well I guess it's worth holding his hand' Hinata thought.

"WOAH! This roller coaster is huge." Naruto said in awe.

"Ya." Raku agreed.

"Oh gosh...." Hinata said to herself.

"Cool there isn't even a line!" Raku said running up the path to the roller coaster.

Naruto took Hinata's hand and followed after Raku. Hinata was blushing from the fact that her hand was in Naruto's.

When Naruto and Hinata got to the roller coaster they saw that Raku had already gotten in a seat.

Naruto dragged Hinata to the front of the roller coaster. They got the front seat.

"Ya! We got the front seat!" Naruto said happily.

"Um y-ya....." Hinata said still blushing from her and Naruto's hands touching.

"You know you don't have to ride Hinata-chan if you don't want to."

"No Naruto-kun It's O-Ok."

"Are you sure?"

"Yes I'm s-sure Naruto-kun."

"OK. If you need to sqeeze my hand it's fine."

"O-Ok thanks Naruto-kun." Hinata said feeling relieved.

The man who ran the roller coaster checked to make sure everyone was in properly. And told them to keep all hands and legs inside the vehicle at all times. He then went to the control panel.

"Before I start the ride does anyone want to get off?" He asked. Hinata badly wanted to say yes but didn't. She wanted to show Naruto she was brave kinda. "OK." The guy said. Then he pressed the green button for the ride to start.

"WAHOOOO!!!!" Raku shouted.

The roller coaster started to move slowly. Hinata squeezed Naruto's hand tighter. The roller coaster started to move a little faster. They turned a corner and they you could see just how high it was. They started to inch their way up to the top of the roller coaster. They were getting pretty high. Hinata looked down and started to breathe a little faster when she saw how small the people looked. Hinata squeezed Naruto's hand even tighter. Naruto looked over at Hinata to see she looked pretty terrified.

"Hinata-chan are you OK?" Naruto asked.

"U-um y-ya."

"You don't seem OK. Listen if you want to hold on to me it's o-." Naruto was inturrupted by the feeling of his stomach leaving his body.

"AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!" The whole roller coaster screamed. Hinata instantly grabbed on to Naruto, wrapping her arms around him. She buried her face into his jacket and continued screaming along with the rest of the roller coaster. Hinata was scared out of her life. Not only because of the roller coaster but because of the fact she was also holding on to her love.

"WHOOOOOHOOOOOO!!!" Naruto screamed. "I THINK WE'RE GOING UPSIDE DOWN!!!!!!"

"WHAT!!????" Hinata screamed afraid to look ahead of her. And sure enough they were going upside down. Hinata tightened her grip on Naruto as they went upside down. After they went upside down the roller coaster started to slow down.

"WHAT IT"S OVER!!!???" Raku shouted.

"Thank god." Hinata whispered. She started to let go of Naruto only to grab back on as she felt the roller coaster start moving again. Accept this time it was moving backwards.

"The whole roller coaster was screaming as they relived everything that just happened except backwards. Then finally the roller coaster came to a stop.

"Whooooo that was awesome right Hinata-chan? Huh? Hinata? Hinata-chan????" Naruto asked Hinata, who seemed to be in some state of shock still holding on to Naruto. "Ummmm....maybe it wasn't such a good idea to ride the roller coaster. heh heh." Naruto picked up Hinata who still seemed to be in a state of shock off the roller coaster and put her down only for her to fall from dizziness.

"I think your girlfriend is broken." Raku said.

"Ya I think she is to-. HEY SHE IS NOT MY GIRLFRIEND!!!!!" Naruto shouted.

"Whatever." Raku said.

Naruto helped Hinata up.

"You OK Hinata-chan?" Naruto asked her.

"U-um ya just dizzy. I don't think I ever wanna do that again."


Hinata, Naruto, and Raku walked away from the roller coaster.

"I Wanna play games!" Raku said running away from them.

"Hey wait where are you going!" Naruto yelled after him. Naruto was about to chase after him when he felt a hand on his shoulder but it wasn't Hinata's it was a man's.

Hinata turned around to looks at the man. He looked to be in his mid thirties. And was smiling at them.

"Ano is there something you need?" Hinata asked.

"Yes. you two look like a happy pair. How would you like to take a trip down our tunnel of love???" Hinata and Naruto blushed.

"Um n-no we're not a co-."

"Oh come on!!! couples get in free." The man said.

"OK but we're no-." Naruto was interrupted by the man dragging him and Hinata towards to attraction. The attraction was attached to a river with boats in it the shape of swans. They were both seated on a boat.

"Ok sit down and relax you two love birds and enjoy the tunnel of love." The man told them. Hinata face was extremely red.

"Um I'm sorry about this Hinata-chan."

"I-it's OK N-naruto-kun." Hinata said still not getting over the fact that she was in the tunnel of love with her Naruto-kun.

The boat started to move down the tunnel. The tunnel was glowing with pink lights all around. With heart's hanging by strings from the roof of the tunnel.

"I-it's very pretty in here." Hinata said wanting to break the awkward silence surrounding them.

"Ummm ya....like...you." Naruto said. Hinata's face got red.

"W-what do y-you mean?"

"I mean I t-think you're pretty..." Naruto said awkwardly.

"O-oh...u-um...o-oh..." Hinata said not really knowing what to say.

'Wow this is awkward....' Naruto thought to himself. 'I really do think she's pretty...'

'I think she's pretty too kit." Naruto heard a voice growl.

"Ahhhh who the hell keeps talking to me?!!" Naruto shouted.

"W-what? I don't hear anyone.

'Jeeze you're stupid it's me the Kyuubi. And stop talking out loud. People are gonna think you're crazier than you already are."

'Ohhhhhh so it's been you. You've never talked to me like this before. It was usually only during battle you talked to me. And I'm not crazy. I'm different. Now leave me alone you stupid fox!!!!'

'Fine have fun with your mate heheheheheh....."

'WHAT!???? MATE! Is that like that thing they say in Australia'

'I really can't believe I'm inside of you...." (A/N hahahahahahah perverted moment.......)

"N-naruto is everything OK?" Hinata asked him.

"U-um ya I'm fine."

"OK good. Ummmm Naruto-kun do you really think I'm p-pretty?" Hinata asked shyly looking down. Only to feel a hand on her chin again lifting her head up.

"Yes I did mean it. But I can't see your pretty face when you're looking down." Naruto said smiling. Hinata blushed.

"S-sorry Naruto-kun."

"Stop apologizing Hinata-chan." Naruto told her.

It got silent again.

'I can't believe Naruto-kun actually thinks I'm pretty. ME.'

'What's a mate....'

It was quiet but a nice quiet

They finally started getting to the end of the tunnel. Though they both kinda wanted to stay and enjoy each other company. They got to the end of the tunnel and saw a man with a camera.

"Would you two like to take a photo? It's free." The man asked.

"Umm sure why not." Naruto said helping Hinata get out of the boat. They both stood side by side not really knowing what to do waiting for the man to take the picture.

"Oh come on don't just stand next to each other. Put your arm around her." The man told Naruto.

"Um Hinata-chan?"

"I-it's fine...."

Naruto put his arm around Hinata shoulder leaving a bit of space between the two.

"Aw you guys can show more love then that. Get CLOSER." The man pushing the two together. Now their sides were touching. Naruto and Hinata were blushing at the contact. The man took the photo of the two. "Well that's adorable." The man said handing them the picture. It came out nice with the river as the back-round.

"You can keep the photo Hinata-chan!" Naruto said.

"N-no you can have it if you want to N-naruto-kun.

"Nope no arguments. It's yours." He said handing the picture to Hinata.

"T-thanks Naruto-kun."

"Ya no prob-. OH NO!!!!! We almost forgot about Raku!" Naruto shouted. "I really don't feel like looking for him but he's kind of our responsibility now I guess.... But how are we gonna find him?"

"I could u-use my Byakugan Naruto-kun." Hinata said.

"Oh ya good thinking Hinata-chan. You're so smart!" Hinata blushed at a praise.

"Byakugan!" Hinata said. She then used her enhanced vision to look for Raku. She found him being carried away by what looked like a hobo.

"Naruto-kun! Raku being kidnapped by a H-hobo I think!"

"Ummmm what a hob-?" Naruto was interrupted by Hinata dragging him by his hand towards Raku.


Yay it's a cliffhanger. Wow it's been a while eh? Well I'm very sorry. But I promise I'm gonna make it up to you guys kay. I hope nobody found that too rushed. Because, I didn't!!!!!!!!!! Next chapter is gonna be pretty weird I think.

Next chapter-I Just Wanted Cable!

(Lol ^^^^^^^ I know the chapter sounds random. But you'll see.)