REWROTE this part and it's much better then the old one-so please review

Part 13Peter-

"I'm the idiot, I just should've been with her" I mutter passing the moon for the hundredth time as I lowered myself back to Neverland. I saw a figure on the mountain when I was close to the moon but I just thought of it as one of the Indians. But as I got closer the figure didn't disappear. It just got smaller and smaller.

Once I got there, no one was there. The plants leading there were crushed and flattened. I heard something awhile back it was low and miserable.

I walked down the beaten path to find the only person I knew who it could've been. I picked her up swiftly. She didn't move she was unconscious again. Somewhere in me felt like just laying her back done and leaving her, but it was my fault she was like this. She let Rufio do it too her because I wasn't there. But I was, he hurt her and I was watching. She agreed but her continued. She must have asked him to return her back to the tree house and he of course said no.

This was my entire fault. Not able to fly I walked back to the tree house it took hours because she was heavy. I rubbed her scarred arms and kissed her forehead. Would she make it, she needed to wake up so I could be sure.

"Pan?" one of the lost boys was up.

"Go back to sleep" I whispered setting Sarah back on my bed.

"It's almost morning" he complained, "then get ready and go play" I said pulling a blanket over her. I lit a candle nearby so I could see her in the dark hallow. Once almost all were up I left her side to talk with them. As I guessed they all waited for me outside in the small clearing.

"What's wrong Pan, what happened to our new mommy?"

"I tell you once I think it's best for her to stay inside by herself for awhile. But I need you boys to take shifts and watch the tree house"

"Why?"

"Rufio he is not allowed anywhere near this place for a time."

"How long?" they asked again come on what else do you guys do but play soldiers you can do it again.

"Till I say so" I answered as if I was their chief. Which I was but I said it in a more you better do this manner.

"Alright…huddle up!" I watched as they talked to themselves who would take the first shift. When it seemed they liked forever I moved back inside.

Tinker Bell sat by the candle. "He did this to her?" she asked quietly I barely heard it.

"yeah" I replied sitting by them.

"Do you think she'll survive…maybe we should fly back to earth take her to a hospital or something…?"

"They'll ask questions Tink, about parents and stuff"

"But look at her Peter…she needs better care!"

"We can take her to the merpeople…" I said in a whisper unsure of my answer.

"What could they do for us Peter?" she asked me again.

"I don't know Tink, just let her decided when she wakes up"

"She better wake up for your sake Peter…"

"We aren't have this argument Tink!" I yell at her I was already too upset to handle this. It was my entire fault not hers, Sarah didn't dissever this treatment. She didn't reply or I didn't want to hear her. She just sat on Sarah's hair. I looked at Sarah for a long time. She seemed peaceful but in away disturbed. How I wanted to hurt Rufio, return every blow he gave her. I could feel my eyelids going heavy. I checked Sarah's pulse one last time. It was there and it seemed strong.

"Tink please get some rest yourself, I'll be near her for now"

"Okay, please be careful"

I moved to the edge and climbed in. on the other side. Putting my arm over her body I found sleep come easy.