Hello again! I'm making a naruhina story and this time it's happy! Yay! Well, anyway I need people to review and to tell me how I can improve on my stories. Hopefully I can make my stories longer. So enjoy!!!! 'thinking' 'inner'

It was a beautiful, sunny, SCORCHING HOT day in the village of Konoha, and our favorite ninjas are hanging out at the park under a big tree. "It's hoooooooooot out here!" complained our favorite knucklehead ninja. (You all should know who I'm talking about).

"Oh stop complaining Naruto! Man, you can be so annoying sometimes!" exclaimed Sakura. You are probably wondering who is all here so I'll tell you! Well, there is naruto, Sakura, Sasuke, Hinata, Tenten, Neji, lee, Shikamaru, and Ino. THAT my friends is a lot of people.

"Um, how about we have a party at my house! A pool party to be specific," said Ino. Everyone agreed, even Shikamaru agreed without saying "troublesome" or "what a drag"! "Ok! We will have a party and have a sleepover afterwards! It will start at 3:30. Come on girls let's go get ready!" all the girls followed ino leaving the boys alone. They decided to get ready too.

The girls went shopping for swimsuits. "Hey Hinata! This bikini so fits you!" Sakura said.

"I was hoping to get a one piece bathing suit. I don't look good in a bikini," Hinata said in her soft quiet voice. (Hinata doesn't stutter in my story. The only time she will stutter is if she's embarrassed).

"Come on Hinata. You will look great in it. I bet even naruto will think so, but if you don't want him to notice you then you don't have to…" Tenten was interrupted by Hinata quietly agreeing to buy the bikini. Tenten smiled a victory smile towards Sakura and Sakura knew that Tenten was teasing her about her not being able to convince Hinata to buy the bikini but she could. Hinata's bikini was silver with little black polka dots on it. Ino's was a light purple bikini with dark purple vertical stripes in it. Sakura's was a light green bikini and she had to tie this thick string around the neck to keep her top on (hopefully you guys know what I'm talking about). Tenten's was a bright red bikini (there was a lot of arguing to convince her to buy that). When they were done it was 2:30.

"Oh no!" Ino suddenly exclaimed.

"what is it ino," the girls asked in unison.

"we still have to get food, drinks, and music all in an hour!"

"don't worry ino, I called the guys to bring some food and drinks with them. Also I have some music at my house," tenten said.

"Awesome Tennie! You're a lifesaver!" Ino said, or yelled if you'd prefer a thank-you. So they said their good-byes and went their separate ways to pack up for the sleepover after the party.

With Hinata

"Which outfit would Naruto like me in the best?" Hinata asked herself. She was trying to choose from a light blue shirt that says "Angel" and a pair of jean caprice, or a purple T-shirt and jean pants. Hinata chose the first choice (the clothes that the girls are choosing is the clothes they are wearing the next day since they're sleeping over, for anyone who didn't know). She packed it in her small green and white duffel bag then put on a little makeup, brushed her hair and went out of her room towards neji's room. She politely knocked and he answered.

"what do you want?" Neji asked impatiently.

"I, um, wanted to see if you're ready yet," hinata replied nervously.

"not yet. I'll be down shortly to drive us," Neji then shut his door. Hinata obeyed and waited and not long after Neji came down and they left.

With Ino

Ino is getting the house ready for the guest so she doesn't have to pack anything.

With Sakura

"Let's see what can I wear tomorrow?" she asked herself. "This one is perfect!" Sakura ended up going with a red and black tank top, and dark jean caprice. She stuffed it in her small, dark pink duffel bag, put on some makeup, fixed her hair in a side pony tail and left. (Her hair is longer in this story).

With Tenten

"I think I'll wear this tomorrow," Tenten said to herself. She chose to wear a semi-tight black and white tank top that Sakura gave her and baggy, dark jean pants stuffed it in her small, brown duffel bag, re-fixed her hair in her usual twin buns hairstyle and left.

The first to arrive was hinata and Neji. "Hey Neji! Hey hinata! Glad you could come!" ino greeted. "you can both change in the 2 bathrooms down the hall. You both should get done just in time for naruto and tenten to get here!" ino said the last part in a teasing voice. Neji had a teeny blush while hinata had a big bright blush. Ino giggled. They both went to get changed. the next to arrive was sasuke, naruto, and sakura. ino noticed that sasuke and sakura were walking hand in hand, and they were standing closer together than usual. Ino didn't say anything though.

Hinata walked out of the bathroom with her clothes over her bathing suit. She saw naruto and she cautiously walked over to naruto. "um, h-hi naruto," she blushed and fiddled with her fingers.

"Oh, hey hinata! Can you make me some ramen please? I'm hungry!"

"sure. Is it alright ino?"

"huh? Oh yea sure!" ino replied and then went back to talking to shikamaru who just recently arrived. Tenten arrived to and was talking to neji, naruto was talking to hinata while she was making ramen, sakura and sasuke was talking to eachother while holding hands (makes you wonder does it?). ino then announced that everyone need to go in the pool so the party can get started!

PLEASE READ!!!

What's gonna happen at the party? Well find out next chapter. Tell me if the story is good enough for me to continue. PLEASE R&R!!! tell mje nicely how I can improve on the story and tell me positive stuff about it too. I hope you enjoyed!!