Author Notes: Look, this is my first real story that I put a ton of plot design into. PLEASE TELL ME IF IT SUCKS!!! I hate reviewing and not getting an author to try to work on some things. Naruto is about sixteen, so around Shippuuden time, Sasuke is back, this is rated mature simply because it deals with a lot of concepts and hidden meanings that scare the hell out of my friends. Anyway, onto the story.

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It seemed to be just another ordinary day for Naruto: eating three bowls of ramen for breakfast, getting dark stares from the villagers as he left his house, training for several hours straight with Kakashi and the recently returned Sasuke, getting hateful looks as he headed for Ichiraku's, eating eight bowls of barbequed pork ramen, having mothers pull their children far away from him as he walked down the street, and going to pick up yet another mission at the Hokage mansion; he wasn't prepared for what was going to happen in the next few seconds however.

The cloaked Jounin went over their plan one more time before they moved out. "Now maybe we can get rid of that demon once and for all," the leader said with a devilish grin.

"Shh, he's coming, right on time," said the lookout. The leader held up his hand ready to signal. 3…2…1! His fingers made the signal and all eight of them surrounded Naruto in an instant.

"What the hell?" Naruto exclaimed, terrified of the odds in front of him. He reached for his kunai, only to be stopped by both a genjutsu and physical barbed chains strangling his body. Four of the enemy ninja then proceeded to throw cleansing tags onto his body. "Aaaaarrrrrrgh!!! What the fuck are you doing? Daaaaaaamnit, this huuurts!" Naruto screamed. He was writhing in pain, only causing his physical wounds to worsen, and the Kyuubi's chakra couldn't do a thing under the influence of the tags.

Inside Naruto's mind: "What the hell is happening kid, why can't I hear you?" Kyuubi roared with tenacity while writhing in pain. There was no answer other than tremors and water sloshing around his cage. I can't just let them do this to me! he thought. Kyuubi began exerting all of his effort into forcing his chakra into Naruto's body.

Naruto's body wasn't healing, but red chakra began to pour from him as he shrieked in pain. "Why are you doing this to me?" Naruto squeezed between sobs. The tags were now burning into his body, causing severe damage. The leader of the eight then removed his hood.

"Shut up you vile demon," said Renodan Sensei. Renodan, one of the lesser members of ANBU and a member of the village council, lost his left arm when the Kyuubi attacked and had no sympathy for the jinchuuriki. He then proceeded to fire an intense right hook into Naruto's face. Naruto had taken worse before, but now he was slowly being killed and the red chakra beginning to swirl around him couldn't heal him. The worst part was, he was on his own. Sakura was off learning with Shizune, Sasuke and Kakashi had a mission, and Tsunade was currently assigning missions.

"Damnit," he said through gritted teeth. The eight ninja began to look down upon him with evil and hating eyes. They laughed and stared at his pain and humiliation with no regard for his life. The tags were now causing Naruto to bleed, heavily. Somehow, Naruto had made a mental connection to Kyuubi and could feel his pain resonating now as well.

Inside Naruto's mind maze: Kyuubi was thrashing against his cage, curled up into a ball. "Just let me out kid, let me tear them apart, this isn't a picnic for me either you know," Kuubi said with some empathy for once.

"No! This is what they want, for me to give in so they can get away with killing me," Naruto screamed.

"Forget resistance kid, I can't take this for very much longer and your body is dieing. I'm taking over."

Back in the alleyway with the eight ninja: "No!" Naruto roared, the Kyuubi beginning to influence his voice. His whiskers were beginning to darken and his canines grew into fangs. The eight tightened the chains and added a "fire purge" seal tag to his back, causing excruciating pain. "Stooop pleeeeaaase!" he begged. "This isn't right, what did I aaaah." glowing blue veins were working their way out from the tag. "What did I do to deserve this? This isn't my fault! Why are," Boom. Renodan punched him square in the gut, causing Naruto to double over, opening the wounds from the barbs further as he coughed up blood; he jumped back when the red chakra began seething and seemingly lashing out.

"Hold him down, the demon is taking over, I knew he was evil, I can feel the killing intent," he sneered, believing he had won, the kid was going to die, and he would become the village hero. Not even Tsunade could defend the little wretch with the evidence he had.

"I won't let you do this, you won't kill them," Naruto yelled, his voice back to normal. His eyes were turning red, and his hands were growing claws. Naruto's resistance was strong, but the demonic chakra was thickening, now was the group's chance to show him to the whole village as the demon they portrayed him to be. Naruto's life was going to become a worse Hell than ever.

There you have chapter one. I won't upload chapter two until I have a review. Be truthful, but not outright mean, and explain how to make something better instead of just saying "fix this."