Well, well, well, what have we here?

Just a few things I wanna say first: Kyuubinaubi3, BXV and like 8 other people who will remain nameless (nameless because I cleared out my emails and can't remember them) you guys either faved me or my story or both, which I love you for, BUT! If you can favourite me, surely you can take the time to review. All I ask is a simple thanks :]

Big thanks to my regular reviewers, legend of Zelda 4 life, lady Zayriah, 7Nayru and anyone else.

Oh and big thanks to the 'shadowy anonymous reviewer' Mitch, that review gave some great pointers which I will work on ;]

"How long do you think he's gonna be?" Hylia sighed; the group had been waiting for some kind of signal for ages now.

"He has a name" The group all turned to face the anonymous voice.

"The coast is clear but there's no place for you guys to hide if someone comes, it's completely open." The group all sighed at once.

"But we wanna kill some minions of darkness..." Muto groaned in a childish drawl.

"Go on Link, we'll start walking in ten minutes. If you spot something just run back and tell us." Gorak said, facing towards the mouth of the cave ahead.

"Im over here..." Links voice came from behind Gorak.

"Idiots..." Hylia muttered. Link began racing down the tunnel as fast as he could. He passed the protruding rock that landmarked as far as he got last time within a few minutes. After another couple of minutes, Link stopped. He stooped to his knees and took long gasping breathes. He didn't know someone could run so long without breathing. He sat down in the path and he realised something was different. The braziers were all gone.

He looked around nervously, he could barely see a foot ahead of him, directly behind him the braziers were still burning brightly, but where he sat was pitch black. He slowly stood up and pressed his back up against the cave wall, he felt a lot more secure with his back up against something warm and fleshy. Link froze. Walls weren't warm and fleshy...Link jerked forward and turned around to face what he had just been leaning on. He prayed whatever it was wasn't aware of him. Suddenly the thing let out a large snort, he a puff of warm air hit Link directly in the face. Deciding it best not to panic, Link slowly backed off, daring not to make a sound. He heard shuffling ahead of him; something clinked and rattled inches away from his face. Whatever it was, it was certainly prepared. The clinking was the distinct sound of thick armour banging together. Was this one of Ganon's guards? Link heard it shuffle about a bit more and suddenly a faint lit illuminated the inky blackness. Directly in front of Link was large...Pig? The creature was a cross between a man and a pig, except it was around twice the size of Gorak. It was wearing a thick armour plate and holding a halberd so big it nearly scraped along the top of the cave, its face was mostly blocked by two huge tusks protruding from its bottom lip. Link stood frozen, he could only pray the creature couldn't see him.

AN: Basically the creature is a less cartoony, bigger version of the pig guard-thingies from Wind waker.

"Can we go now?!" Rok bawled, he banged his large fist on the ground beneath him making bits of sediment and rock shake from the tunnel roof.

"Stop that!" Hylia hissed at the large Goron. The stoic Zora stood up and began walking down the cave, moodily kicking bits of rock along the tunnel. The others could vaguely hear him muttering the words 'primitive' and 'imbecile.' Gorak stood up and shrugged the others.

"I guess were following moody..."

Five minutes down the tunnel the group were still at a slow jog to keep up with Hylia. With the exception of Rok who was rolling along at his own ease. Eventually Hylia stopped and turned to face the others.

"Keep up..." He smirked in a snide manner. All the men behind him were puffing tiredly.

"No, don't worry about us..." Sayo puffed. "You go ahead...By yourself...I mean we wouldn't want you to get ambushed or anything like that..." Muto turned to smirk at Sayo. The disgruntled Zora shot them all an angry glare; he turned to begin walking again but froze where he stood. The men behind him looked at each other. Gorak slowly approached Hylia, he tapped his back. No reply.

"Hylia?" Muto asked tentatively.

"Look at his eyes..." Rok grunted.

"He's looking at something..." Sayo asserted, the old mage was peering over his crooked nose at Hylia's face. The men all stopped and looked at each other, they all slowly turned around and froze.

"That's what he's staring at!" Rok exclaimed happily. He pointed his large stubby finger at the large pig like thing standing a mere metre away from the group.

"Hey wait..." The large Goron said slowly. The pig creature blinked stupidly. For a few more seconds everyone stood there motionless. Suddenly the pig creature let began roaring, the noise was unbearable, it was like a painful scream being intensified by the echo of the cave. Before anyone could do anything there was a dull thud and the creature stopped. It dropped its weapon and its upper body drooped lifelessly. It swayed from side to side before collapsing in a heap on the floor.

Directly behind where the creature was standing was a large rock, simply floating. It had blood splattered on it where it had apparently just hit the creature. The rock fell on the floor and there was a small sigh.

"Link?!" Gorak said. The visible outline of Link approached the group.

"Im guessing that's what guarding the cave..." He puffed.

"Do you think that's it?" Hylia said. He had moved to where the creature was lying motionless on the floor and was prodding it with his toe.

"Maybe I don't kno-" Link was cut short by a violent rumbling, Bits of rock began falling from the tunnel roof, far in the distance a small flicker of what appeared to be torches storming down the tunnel, as they drew nearer the sound of what could only be described as horrific oinking could be heard.

"Im guessing he was just a scout..." Hylia said, slowly backing away as the mob drew closer.

"Probably best if we run!" Links voice could be heard a good few metres behind them already headed towards where they came from.

"...I agree..." Sayo said curtly, the old man slowly turned and began striding away, before he burst into an incoherent, run, flailing his arms around.

"Women and mages first!"

Im not gonna lie...to me that chapter seemed crap.

Now for more rambling!!!

If you bother to read the reviews, the recent reviewer Mitch rightfully pointed out that a big flaw with this story is that the progression is very slow.

Now, I have no real solution to that, I literally have one hour a night spare with all my schoolwork, and tons of other things waiting for me when I get home after spending two maybe one hours (if i lucky) after school, studying up for various subjects.

So basically with the little time I have, I can either do what im doing now, write a decent story that progresses slowly, OR write a rubbish story that progresses to fast.

BUT, due to recent events im going up to the country with my Nan and Granddad to effectively dos for three days which should give me enough time to pump out an extra decent chapter, il either write several chapters or one really long one. Whatever.

PEACE!