So here is another story I wrote a few months ago. I didn't use a beta for this so it make suck. But whatever. I may go back and fix mistakes later.

This is the story that started my thoughts series. It just came to me one day and the others just followed. You don't have to have read the other to get this but I just thought I would let it be known. SO have fun reading.

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Susan was on a hunt, not for an animal but for a human. King Caspian X to be more exact. She had spent most of her day trying to find the King. Susan was out of options. That was one thing about this place she had no idea where any thing was. She missed Cair Paravel but it was being rebuilt at the moment so she was going to have to wait a bit longer. As she rounded the corner ,to the garden, she spotted him sitting quietly by a fountain. She quickly walked over to him.

"So this is where you've been hiding all day."

"Sorry about that I just needed to think" Caspian said not looking up, still pondering what her answer would be.

" So Mr. King what were we thinking about that took all morning." Caspian looked at Susan .'Now or never, It's not like she'll say no'.

" Well you see..."

"go on"

"Well...um...I." 'Aww he's so cute when he was nervous.' Susan thought . 'You can do just ask her' Caspian thought taking a deep breath. He shakily took out a small black box

"Will You Marry Me?"

So yeah that was it I hope it didn't suck to bad. Please review. Tell me if I should continue this or not.