So, I'm taking these two chapters down. PhantomStallionCrazzy, you're right, they absolutely suck. They're terrible and I'm sorry I posted them. Must have been horrible for you guys to have to read. Unfortunately, due to an overflowing homework schedule and hectic life, not to mention my nervous break down, I will NOT be reposting any more. I'm just going to stick with my original story. I am sorry about that.