ok i kno i already wrote this, but i changed it and im going to make it a story so here is the new version.

Max P.O.V.

I rolled over on a soft comfortable bed, instead of a tree branch or rock from a cave. What an upgrade.

The flock and I are currently at my mom's house with Ella and…my mom. Obviously it's her house. We decided (that being me and Fang) that the flock deserves a little break. So consider this our mini vacation.

"Max wake up!" Ella said shaking my shoulder. I groaned but got out of bed and followed the amazing pancake smell that led me to the kitchen. Iggy was standing at the stove as Ella watched him in amazement as he cooked without seeing.

Once again obviously he's blind you know.

"Morning guys," I said greeting my flock as I grabbed a glass of orange juice out of Fang's hand. I smiled at him and gulped it down.

Fang frowned at me and took the glass back and filled it back up with orange juice...again.

I sat down at the table next to Angel and Gazzy. Iggy passed out the plates and put the pancakes, bacon, toast, and eggs on the table. Everyone dug in.

"Oh Iggy this is so good! I love it! It's almost as good as chocolate and cookies. I like homemade cookies better than like cookies you buy in a package you know. And like I think we should go do something today! We always go shopping even though that is fun and we get new clothes. Like the…" Nudge stopped as Iggy stuck a piece of toast in her mouth.

"Nudge sweetie, please get to the point," I said as kindly as I could at nine in the morning.

"Ok I want to go Putt-Putting! And go-carting! I saw a sign on the way here like twenty minutes away and I really want to go! I've never been Putt-Putting," then she gave me the Bambi Eyes.

I looked at mom who nodded and so I slowly agreed. I went upstairs to change and came out in a pair of short jean shorts and a yellow and white zebra striped tank top.

When I walked out the door I ran into Fang who was wearing a black shirt and a pair of black, grey and white plaid shorts.

"Since when do you like color?" I asked amused at his glum expression, yet breathless on the inside. He looked really hot!

"Angel, Nudge and Ella got a hold of me and decided they were going to give me a makeover,"

"Hmm, they did a good job," I said. "You look good in some color." Then I walked downstairs and got into my mom's van. Everyone got in and mom started driving to the…amusement park.

So on the forty minute drive there the girls decided that we should play a game. So I pretended to be asleep. I really didn't want to play Would You Rather with the whole flock.

I can already imagine some of the ideas Iggy has for me and or Fang. So I leaned my head on Fang's shoulder and slowed my breathing. It must have been realistic, because they kept on with their game just skipping me.

See the thing is, is that when we play Would You Rather, they have to be somewhat realistic because we usually have to do the option we choose, hence the fake sleeping.

"Fang would you rather eat two bottles of ketchup or kiss Max right now?" Iggy said. I could just hear the smirk on his face.

"How do you eat ketchup?" Fang asked stalling.

"Answer the question dude, then do it!" Iggy persisted.

"Fine I'd rather kiss Max," then I felt him kiss the top of my head.

"That's not what I meant!" Iggy said glumly, after Ella told him what he did. i tried not to giggle. Well then I actually did fall asleep.

I felt someone shaking my shoulder and whispering,

"Wake up Max we are here," I opened my eyes to see Fang's dark ones looking into mine.

I grimaced, but followed him out of the car. Mom paid for all of us to Putt-Putt.

My mom, Angel, Gazzy and Nudge were all on one team, while Iggy, Fang, Ella and I were on the other. Mom's team went first and then the rest of us.

Fang got a hole-in-one! On the first hole! He smirked at me and wrote down his score. Iggy got a four and Ella a three. I got a…6. On the first hole. Fang was chuckling so I just smacked his arm and followed Ella to the next hole.

Well I kept getting 5's and 6's so on the 5th hole Fang decided he needed to show me how to golf. Seriously that boy has a huge ego.

I wanted to just golf myself, but I do have competitive bones so I decided that if I let Fang show me how than I could catch up to his score. Genius right?

All that genius left me when Fang got behind me and took a hold of the club placing his large, strong hands over my smaller ones. My breath caught.

I could feel his strong muscled arms around me and his hard, chiseled chest behind me.

"Ok see the line on the end," he asked. I nodded and he continued, "Ok line that up with the ball and the hole."

Then he hit the ball lightly and…it went into the hole. I refrained from growling. How is he good at everything?

Ella and Iggy were laughing off to the side. I thanked Fang and we went to the next hole. My bad luck streak is back. I was at a three and like two feet from the hole so once again Fang took pity on me.

The first shot, and the ball went in. I frowned and said,

"This isn't fair! Why am I so bad at this?" I admit it sounded like I was whining, but I couldn't help it I was losing…bad.

"Well with Fang's help you might beat us, or at least me…and I'm blind," then he started laughing I growled.

Fang just smirked. And so that is why at the end of the game, (the eighteenth hole) I was losing.

My score was like 100 or something like that. Fang got a kick out of that and to top it all off there were like 7 giggly, flirty girls giggling and whispering around Fang.

I was cross. Even Angel beat me. Sad right. At least I know I should NEVER become a professional golfer.

Oh and to top it off I don't know if you know this, but it gets HOT in Arizona. So not only did I lose horribly I was all hot and sweaty too.

"Hey I heard you got a near perfect score," a red head said grinning like an idiot at Fang and batting her eyelashes.

Fang nodded and the girl continued,

"So I'm Elaine and me and my friends want to take you out to get something to eat,"

"Is that natural?" Ella asked snidely pointing to the girls strawberry blonde head.

"I don't think that concerns you!"

"Don't talk to my sister like that!" Fang said sharply before rejecting the girl and joining us over by the ticket counter.

"You think of me as a sister?" Ella asked shocked. I was too, but I wasn't going to show it. Most of the flock called mom, mom except for Fang and Iggy, so I was surprised at this sudden emotion.

He nodded and mom walked us over to the go-carts, because Nudge said she just had to go go-carting. I just hoped that I would actually be good at that, because if Fang beat me I was never going to hear the end of it.

Ever.

"Let's make this more interesting," Iggy said.

"How?" I asked trying to think of some of the juvenile things Iggy would think of.

"Whoever loses has to buy everyone else ice cream,"

We all agreed and got in the go-carts. I lapped Fang…twice and actually beat everyone else. Ahh winning.

Iggy lost.

When we got out of the go-carts Fang was scowling.

"How did you do that?" he asked.

"Come on I'll show you," so we went back and got in line again, but this time, we only got one cart.

I got in the drivers side, Fang was on the other. Now just so you know these seats were tiny and Fang and I are both tall for our age so we were really close in a miniature car.

The light thing turned green and I floored it. So once again I beat everyone. When we were done Fang was grinning. He hopped out of the cart and offered me his hand.

I took it and he pulled me out of the cart, into his arms. Then…he leaned forward so our faces were really close. My eyes fluttered and they shut most of the way.

I watched Fang's face as it got closer and closer, just as I started to lean up he moved to the side and whispered in my ear,

"You drive like a maniac," I tried to keep the frown off of my face as a worker person came up behind us and told us to exit.

Fang smiled his dazzling smile and we hurried up the ramp to the rest of our family.

"What took you guys so long? Did you get in trouble? Everyone else left way before you did. Was it fun? I liked it the first time, but I mean was it boring the second,"

"Nudge!" Fang and I both yelled. Iggy was grinning like the perverted boy he is, Ella was smiling to herself (though that might have had something to do with the fact that Iggy had his arm around her) and my mom looked at us disapprovingly. I know what they think happened, but it didn't.

I frowned at her as we walked back to the parking lot, before we got in Fang pulled me close and whispered,

"We should go to amusement parks more often,"

I have to agree with him, if Fang would open up this time, just once, maybe sometime he actually would kiss me with those amazing soft lips. Yeah I just thought that.

yea see totally random. anyway if you read the first A/N then you know that this is going to be a story.

im going to try to update later today maybe in an hour or so, but i NEED other activity ideas please!

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