Disclaimer: I don't own BLEACH or Yugioh. If I owned Yugioh there would never had been a GX. I despise that series of Yugioh, I like the original and 5D's though. I started redoing them making them look like this. Please review!
Chapter 1
Seto Kaiba was looking through paper work that he had to hand over to other companies so they wouldn't make a duel disk and try to copy his designs. He thought about how it was so quiet without Mokuba who he sent away to summer camp so he could be alone. He was tired of all the complaining and all the whining of from Mokuba about when he's going to spend time with him so to stop the annoyance, he decided to send Mokuba off to a summer camp that started the previous weekend.
Kaiba looked at himself in the mirror and sighed at what he saw; a strand of white hair. He began to worry and wonder if he will become like every other young and rich big time company owners, white hair at 30.
He decided to send the patent papers out to the other companies the next day and try to do something that wasn't stress inducing. Within the next weekend he was all alone. Kaiba's free time he was able to do things that were more suited for his age, like fixing his car or reading a playboy magazine. He enjoyed the time he has alone but he begins to feel something he has never felt before. He feels like somebody is tugging at his heart.
He sheds a tear as he quietly mourns about his brother being at the summer fun camp. He regretted it but then he stopped crying and thought about all the things he can do without being interrupted by Mokuba like sleep. Something he never does nowadays.
He goes to his room and looks at the picture of him and his brother on his nightstand. He laid the picture down face first and gets into his pajamas which consist of no shirt and a pair of Kaiba Corp's very own pants. Laying down and dozing off as soon as he feels the silk sheets against his bare chest. He stared at the white ceiling, listening the cars outside. Peace and quiet, the one thing he never had he now has and doesn't really want it. He lays down on his side and closes his eyes.
Right when he closes them his alarms go off notifying him that there's an intruder. Even though he's angry at the fact that he has to get up out of bed when he just got into bed he gets up anyway. He storms down the hallways and into the main security room where all of his employees are horrified at what they see on the screen; two men making out.
"What is this? I told you porn was not allowed at work! Especially gay porn!" Kaiba shivered. "It's the-the-the intruders!" one of his employees replied. "Capture them and bring them to my office!" He leaves the security office and heads towards his room to get dressed, heading towards his office after he's done.
He was getting tired of the fact that there were so many intruders since Mokuba left. He felt like Mokuba was his own intruder repellant. He sat in his office waiting for his slow guards to bring the intruders to him.
"Mr. Kaiba here are the intruders." The guard said throwing two teenage men in. "You two have some nerve breaking into my company. Ichigo Kurosaki and Renji Abarai."
Noticed any changes? Huh? Huh? Well if you didn't I edited it! Now that my writing is wayyyy better than it was when I first started writing fanfics I decided I would go back and edit my first ones. Especially this one and Who Am I, I find these two really corny! Haha so much for me thinking it was a great yaoi when I wrote it. I was very inexperienced with yaoi at the time when I was writing this so I didn't really know how to write yaoi scene. (I'm ranting now….I should stop..) I began to study by reading yaoi stories but it didn't really help. So I began to practice by writing yaoi scenes. They were okay but I still didn't like them. Since I was hiatus for a while I thought I should practice writing yaoi scenes so I did. I had recently got into K-Pop (Korean Pop) when I began my hiatus so I wrote fanfics with my favorite members of my favorite two bands DBSK, and BigBang. (I'm currently working on a YunJae and Gempo[TOPxGD] fanfic for any of you readers that like K-Pop yaoi pairings.) Well, this is the end of my rant that contained information for you Cherries (I'm going to call you guys that since penname is Sakura Aimi and Sakura means cherry blossoms, just in case you didn't know what Sakura meant…but I bet you did anyway because you guys like Anime and Manga! I'm pathetic I'm sorry… -_-) Anyway, I hope you like the edited version of GC!
Love, SA
