Hello, this is my first fanfiction, and I just want to say, that if any of you recognize any material in this fanfiction that you saw in others, I just want to say that it's not intentional and kind of hard not to, considering there are 200,000 stories. I'm not sure this is ture, but I'm also going to make the academy start when you're 10, and graduate (if you can) after 2 years.

Also, I accept constructive flaming, but not flaming with absolutely nothing that i could learn from it.

"Hello" character says.

"Hello" character thinks.

"Hello" demon says.

"Hello" demon thinks.

Disclaimer: This will be the first and only time I say this: Does it seriously look like I own Naruto? If I did, why would I write this instead of actually makeing it a reality.

EDIT: I edited this chapter because I saw how many people complained about it's length and I honestly can't disagree. On Friday I'm going to the beach for about two weeks, so I'm not going to be able to update from Friday (next week) to September.


As evening dawns on the people of Konoha, we see a 7 year old child running.

This child is Naruto Uzumaki, and it's his birthday today. Instead of getting birthday cakes, presents, and love from his parents, he is running away from a mob. A mob that want to kill him because of something he has absolutely no control over.

You can see Naruto panting and sweaty as he's running away from the mob of chunnins and jounins, and even civilians armed with sharp pieces of glass, rocks, and even pitchforks

As he runs, he stumbles when a kunai is thrown at his leg and met it's mark.

He tries to get up as all his muscles scream in protest from running for 3 hours straight, but he just doesn't have the energy for it.

"Now we have you DEMON! You'll pay for killing our families!" a jounin yelled, while the others behind him screamed in agreement.

"Please don't hurt me! What did I ever do to you?" Naruto cried out.

"Stop pretending you don't know you demon, NOW DIE!" He yelled out as he threw kunais to his other leg and arms, pinning him in place. Everyone else took this as their cue as they started pelting him with rocks, stabbing him with pitchforks, cutting him with glass and kunais, using Katon justsus on him, etc, etc.

As he lost consciousness, the last thing he remembered was that he would be okay, because Kakashi and Jiji came to save him.

Outside Naruto's mind

As Kakashi came and powered up his chidori, everyone cheered because they all expected that he would kill the demon with it, but what they didn't expect was for him to drive it though 3 of their own.

"HOW DARE YOU TRY TO KILL AN INNOCENT CHILD!" they heard from behind them yell, and they all turned to the sight of a very pissed off Hokage

"We were just finishing off what the Yondaime started" one of the more braver ones told him.

"What you're doing is killing an innocent child! All the ninjas are to be sentenced to Ibiki, I will carry out the civilians death sentence myself" he told to the ANBU that apppeared next to him.

"I want to help out to" Kakashi said as he powered up another chidori.

"No Kakashi I want you to take him to the hospital, he needs immediate medical help.

Kakashi nodded reluctantly and took off to the hospital as fast as he could, carrying naruto in his arms. As he entered, he found one of the only doctors that actuallly agreed to treat him, his old teammate, Rin.

"Rin, they did it again" he said somberly.

"Oh my... What did they do to the poor kid" Rin asked sadly as she took him to hospital room with a couple of doctors that didn't refuse to treat him, and began to heal him.

When the Hokage finished the job and went to the hospital, he cound't help but cry when he saw the condition Naruto was in.

'Forgive me Minato, I have failed you' he thought while crying.

Inside Naruto mind

"Hello?" he wearily asked out as he found himself in a sewer with a couple of rooms on the side walls.

"Hellooooo, anybody there?" he kept asking as he explored the apparantly barren sewer. He saw a red light coming from one of the rooms, and decided to check it out. As he went in, he saw a giant room, but what stood out the most, was the giant gate in front of him, that, at first sight held nothing behind it, that was being held by a puny pice of papper with the kanji for seal on it.

"Helloooooo! Is anybody here?"

"Hello Naruto, I've been expecting you." a female voice called out as a drop-dead gorgeous girl about three years his senior appeared on the other side of the gate. She had red eyes, with slits instad of pupils, long red hair, and wore an elegant red kimono with white flowers. What really stood out though, was the fact that she had fox ears insead of normal ones, and nine tails moving gently behind her.

"Are you going to hurt me too? Naruto asked as he looked at her, while at the same time going closer to the cage.

The woman visibly got sadder while at the same time responding "No, why would I hurt you?"

"Well, because everyone else does and they call me a demon, so I guess I am one" he said, now touching the bars on the gate.

"You are not a demon, you are just it's jailor" she said sadly

"What do you mean?"

"Tell me what you know about the Kyuubi no Kitsune"

"Well, I know that he-"

"She"

"What do you mean she?"

"The Kyuubi is a she"

"Oh, well, she came to Konoha a couple of years ago, and the Yondaime managed to kill him, but ended up dying too"

"That's partly true. They Kyuubi did come, but the Yondaime didn't manage to kill her, so he did the next best thing, he sealed her in a newborn baby."

"Me... so that means you're they Kyuubi aren't you? The villagers were right... I am a demon... I just have a question? Why did you attack Konoha?"

"Yes I am, but I told you, you are NOT a demon, you are just it's jailor. As for why, a man named Madara Uchiha who had the Eternal Mangekyou Sharingan managed to control me, and make me attack Konoha. I'm so sorry, it's my fault that hte villagers always attack you and try to kill you. Not even demons would hurt younglings as much as those people do"

"It's okay, besides, it's like you said, you were controlled to attack Konoha, you didn't want to"

"How can you forgive me after everything that happened to you because of me"

"If I don't i'll be just like a villager, blaming someone because of something they had no control over"

"I can't thank you enough for the kindness you have shown me, but I will try. Tell me, what is your dream"

"MY DREAM IS TO BECOME HOKAGE, BELIEVE IT!"

Kyuubi sweat-dropped at how loud he suddenly became was. "Well, I'll help you. Tell you what, I'll train you, and give you two Kekkei Genkai"

"Really! That's so cool! So, which ones are you going to give me?"

"You know what they are?"

"Yeah, I heard some shinobi talking about it"

"Okay... Well I'll give you an original dojutsu that i've been thinking about, and another one of your choice, such as: Mokuton, Hyouton, being able to use your bones as weapons, etc."

"I'll take Mokuton, I always wanted to control wood! Also, when do we beging the training?"

"When you're sleeping, I'll give you both bloodlines, but we'll have to go out of the village for the training"

"I understand, but I have a question, where are we?"

"We're in your mindscape, and at night, we'll be training here"

"How?"

"It's because every 24 hours out there, is about 1 year here, so every night, you'll have half a month of training at your disposition, but since it's only your mind, you can't physically train here, only learn jutsus, seals, history, etc. Every day however, you will be training your body. Since you're supposed to enter the academy in three years, we'll be leaving today and coming back in three years. You better go tell the Hokage about this though, so you don't get pegged as a missing-nin."

"What's a missing-nin?"

"We'll worry about that later, but for now, I'll teach you a jutsu that will probably allow me to speak with the Hokage directly. It's called Kage Bunshin. It makes solid copies of the user that can do whatever the user does, but its drawback is that it gets dispelled after getting hit once. If you use my chakra, you might be able to make me in a shadow clone. You just use a cross seal" she shows him a seal in which the first and middle fingers on both hands are pointing outwards with one hand going horizontal, and the other vertically, making a cross shape "put in a lot of chakra, and say the name. Try it out now"

"Kage Bunshin no Jutsu!"

An exact replica of Naruto appeared next to him.

"Good job! Just so you know, I made a mental connection between us so that we can talk even when you're not here. You're waking up now, see you later."

And with that, Naruto woke up finding himself in a hospital.

"Hi Jiji! I have to ask you something..."


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