Major Notice: This entire story is being gutted, reworked, and rewritten.

First Chapter has been finished. For those that have alerted this story, I'd appreciate it if you'd take the time to reread over it and tell me what you think?

I've come a long way in developing a style in writing.

I couldn't give this story up.

I couldn't delete it, or give it up for adoption. It's my first story I've ever actually gotten anywhere on.

Thank you for taking the time to read it in the first place.

Original story published in 2009: Now being rewritten