Alright, here's the time for Pudin's notifications and news corner! Where Pudin fills you in on the story updates! Yay! 3
Now, let's get to busy. First things first: I'd like to thank a certain user (cough1angelettecough) for pointing out some things in my story that even I cringed at when I read over. Ha. Ha-ha. She (or he? orz;;) let me know, and I would like to, once again, thank her (him? orz;;), and let you guys know the changes.
Alright, well, I got Neru and Nero's names screwed up and called Nero "Neru" a couple'a times. Ha. Ha-ha-ha. Oops. I cringed terribly when I went back through my long-ass chapter and caught it. I feel so embarrassed now. Thanks for making me feel that way, (cought1angelettecough).
And, that fellow review also let me know that Len called Kaito "Kaito-san," even though he disliked using those Japanese terms. I only saw it once, though, so I fixed it (I was my own Beta for the day! Ha-ha).
The reviewer also let me know that who likes who was getting super confusing (and even offered putting up a little diagram to help), so I'll put this up for everybody to go back to when they forget who Meiko hates, or who Dell is obsessed with (-insert "Obsessed" by Mariah Carey here-). Here it is, folks!
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Ted Kasane:
-Appreciates Miku Hatsune for giving his sister, Teto Kasane, a place to fit into.
Meiko
-Hates both Miku and Rin because they get all of that attention. (Jealousy, much?)
Dell
-Hates Miku Hatsune; thinks she's a slut.
-Is obsessed with Len Kagamine. (Who isn't?)
-Hates Rin because of rumor that she likes Len.
Gackupo Kamui
-Likes Rin as a friend.
-Hates Miku Hatsune; thinks she's a slut.
Aku Yamine
-Is Miku's little follower.
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Want to suggest more for me to add? Then review and ask! I love, love, love reviews!
And, don't worry, folks; I'll add more as soon as I finish 25 pages of it (omgsomuchwork), and I'll try to add more SPICE! (LolLenjokelol) so people won't think my story is prose TT_TT.
Until then, peace! 3