I'm not a new writer, I just want to see what kind of reaction my stories get with a new audience. I'm hoping it nwill help with my apalling writers block.

This Story will be heavy on the citrus action so I am warning you all now, please be over 16 to read this (I'm british, in England you're legal at 16) Naruto and Hinata are both 19 and the others characters ages fit around as normal.

I do not, nor have I ever owned Naruto and I make no profit from my fanfics.

Chapter 1: Rain sucks

Rain Sucks! Those two eloquent words were currently running through a certain blond ninja's head as he lay thinking about what he had planned to do today.

It wasn't an intricate plan, nor was it of life or death importance but it mattered to him.

He had planned on visiting Hinata.

It had been three weeks since their 'mission' and Naruto and Hinata had barely seen each other. Naruto wasn't sure if she was avoiding him or if it was just a case of conflicting schedules. Whatever it was, he didn't like it. The two of them had been travelling together under guise of a young couple travelling through the area, they hadn't needed to sleep in the same bed but Naruto had teasingly insisted that it 'added to their cover'.

What had happened between them had not been planned in any way shape or form but it had happened and they needed to deal with it.

Sighing Naruto lay back onto his couch wondering when he had turned into such a girl and what Sasuke would say if he found out... not about what had happened, truth is he wanted to boast about that, but about how he was now acting like some lovesick teenager.

He was twenty for christs sake!

Still thinking back to it he had to admit, it was a pretty amazing experience, he wasn't surprised he was so affected!

(NaruHina)

"N-Naruto?" Hinata had watched him terrified as with wild eyes he stared down at her, his prey. She couldn't get out from under him as he pinned her bodily to the bed

"I'm sick of it" he snarled his eyes flashing red "the looks I get, the way they look at me with hate, fear and anger and all for what? Do you know what?"

"The f-fox demon" at the age of 19 Hinata like most other older shinobi now knew what Naruto was, most people accepted it with ease but there had been a couple of people from her age group that had reacted badly. As it was the rookie nine as they had been once known had shrugged it off in a way that surprised Naruto.

"Yes. THE FOX DEMON! Anyone would think I wanted this or asked for it the way they treat me… the way you treat me"

"I don't treat you l-like that" she whimpered as he took hold of her wrists, she was tempted to fight him off but terrified she'd hurt him

"You have fear in your eyes"

"Because you're hurting me" she stared at him almost defiantly

"I will bring Konoha to it's knees everyone shall die"

"Not everyone there hates you, what, what about Iruka? Kakashi? Tsunade?… me?"

"All will die"

Hinata began to cry, he wasn't even aware of her talking anymore, his grip on her wrists tightened. She lay still praying that he would awaken before he really hurt her. His nails were clawing at her skin and she was starting to struggle to breathe when it happened.

The air in the room lightened, the dark oppressing aura surrounding her friend disappeared. His body still above her dropped and the air was forced from her body as Naruto landed full force on her chest.

"Aw man… my head is killin… Oh god no" Naruto's weight left her and Hinata was suddenly but tenderly picked up and cuddled close to the distraught blonde. "Hinata~?" he stood over the bed lying her down and placing a hand to her throat feeling for a pulse "Oh shit, Oh fuck… Hinata please look at me"

Finally the pale lavender eyes opened and Hinata stared up at him, tears were now spilling down her cheeks but as she looked up at the bright blue eyes of her long time crush and friend she breathed a sigh of relief

"You're back."

"I am so, so, so, sorry, I should have warned you… I sometimes have nightmares"

"Oh r-really?" Hinata smiled shyly up at him "I hadn't noticed"

Naruto was stunned as he looked down at her, she giggled softly and relieved he laughed as well. Sitting back against the headboard he brought Hinata up to lie on his chest embracing her and trying to make up for scaring her

"Are you- Are you alright?"

"Mmhm" she nodded happily, he would probably never know how alright she was at this moment in time. "Y-You're comfy!"

"I'm dangerous is what I am" he sighed and looked down at her "I wish I could say it won't happen again but… well it's not a guarantee"

"If it happens, it happens" she moved and knelt in front of him to stare at him directly "Naruto I want you to remember something."

"OK?" he knelt too facing her properly while she spoke

"I have never feared you…, I…, always liked you…, even when we were little kids"

"c'mon Hina-chan no one liked me when we were really little"

"Oh really? Do you remember every valentines day you would get a mini chocolate heart in your desk?" she stared down at the mattress

"Yeah, wait!" he looked at her surprised "That was you?"

She nodded "Every year! You were so inspiring, how could I not like you?"

"I never thought…" he stopped and stared at her wishing she'd look back at him "didn't your father tell you to stay away from me?"

"All the time"

"Oh" he looked disappointed

"But I still watched you, I smiled at every prank you played, I got upset every time I had to stand back and watch you cry, it was rare but it happened. I wanted to be your friend"

"Hina-chan" this time when Naruto said that nickname Hinata looked up and the look in his eyes made her gasp.

Smiling Naruto moved forward to place his lips on hers, it was a gentle and loving kiss that made Hinata feel happy and loved. It was pure Naruto. Everything he had been to her during her life, the kiss felt safe, dangerous, exciting, scary but most of all it felt like a ray of pure sunshine had entered her life and she wasn't willing to let go.

He didn't really know what he had been thinking when he kissed her, all he had known was that her lips seemed to be drawing him in closer and closer until he finally kissed her and realised that he never wanted to stop. Their tongues seemed to work together, who knew that a tongue could have a perfect partner? The kisses became more intense and Hinata was trembling, hell he was trembling and he liked it! In fact he didn't seem able to stop as he began to toy with the bottom of her nightdress mentally begging her to allow him to continue. She didn't argue as he started to slide it up, his hands touched the bare skin of her thighs as he lifted the soft material.

Hinata knew of Naruto's reputation, he wasn't a chaste man, in fact it was a well known fact that he and Kiba went 'on the pull' together quite regularly. Of course unlike Kiba Naruto had a sort of honour code to it all. Naruto never preyed on a fan girl, his conquests were random hot girls from clubs who knew as much as he did that it was a one night stand. She wasn't sure if she could ever fall under that category, of course she knew that Neji and Tenten were good friends and occasional lovers, maybe

she would be alright if she and Naruto became that. Friends who called on each other in times of heartache and received comfort. With that thought in mind she allowed Naruto to lift her white nightgown over her head moving her arms accommodatingly as he did so.

Dense as he was Naruto had become rather clever when it came to woman and sex…so why was it that this shy woman with no real knowledge or experience of what they were about to do intimidated him more than another partner he had ever had? He grinned as she blushed after the removal of the only item of clothing she wore, her arms immediately crossed over her chest but he took hold of her hands and smiling pulled her arms away.

"So beautiful" he told her and he really meant it. She was pale in the silvery moonlight, a water nymph sent from heaven itself… ok so maybe he was going a little too far but she was different. He didn't know if it was her lack of experience, her naivety or just the fact that she was Hinata but he wanted her and he never wanted any other man to touch her. He began to kiss her neck making her squirm.

"N-Naruto…" her eyes had closed as he began to kiss her pale skin, she was terrified but how to tell him that? This was all she had ever wanted after all, his mouth hot on her body, his touch driving her wild.

Re-opening her eyes Hinata stared at the blonde head, she placed a nipping kiss at his ear making him growl as his lips moved back to hers. She smiled into the kiss sliding her hands under the black t-shirt he wore feeling the toned chest underneath it. That was one thing she had seen before. Naruto's chest, he wasn't afraid to take his top off when sparring and she had never completely outgrown her habit of watching from a distance so she knew how wonderful he looked. Naruto helped her remove the shirt and when he did so she kissed his wonderful muscles like she had wanted to so may times before.

"Hinata?" the nick name was gone but she guessed from his tone that he was going to ask her something serious

"Naruto?" she looked up at him

"If you want me to stop you're going to have to say so now"

"I j-just want you to- to promise me one thing" she whispered wrapping her arms around his neck and moving closer

"W-what?" Naruto tried to ignore the softness of her chest against his and tried to keep his eyes focussed on hers

"Promise me... promise me you won't cut me out of your life after this"

Now he was intrigued and suitably distracted from staring at her chest, Naruto stared at her watching her face. Thinking about it he understood her fear, he had heard of friends who had slept together only to be unable to stand the sight of each other ever again afterwards. Ino and Shikimaru were prime examples and it had gotten really awkward for some time.

"Hinata" she wasn't looking at him no, she was staring down at his chest, he took her chin between his thumb and finger and forced her to look at him "You are part of my life and I will never cut you out of it."

Her eyes searched his and finally satisfied with his answer she nodded moving her arms up around his neck again and kissing him hard.

Naruto kissed her for a while letting her slender fingers caress his chest and run through his hair, he allowed her to become suitably relaxed being naked and with him before making his move. Finally he pulled her close and lifting her up, turned to lie her down his lips still pressed to hers. His hands on either side of her waist he placed himself between her legs staring down at the beautiful picture this presented him. Her body was pale, smooth, there were occasional white lines where scars from battles had left their mark but even with that she was perfect.

Hinata watched him shyly as he moved away, he was sitting between her legs staring down at her. Normally this would be where her blush and a familiar unconsciousness took over but right now she was too dazed from his fierce kisses to even think about being embarrassed. Her eyes focussed on his face as his eyes seemed to view her whole being.

She stared at him dreamily until suddenly she felt his finger at her moist core, her hips moved away instinctively and he brought his other hand to her thigh and pressed her down. It was only one finger and she was really ok with that. It was no different from the size of a large tampon and although his finger was larger, rougher than her own she wasn't uncomfortable. It was when he entered a second finger that it began to feel like a tight fit, she squirmed a little and was about to say something when Naruto moved his hand from her thigh resting it by her head and moved down to kiss her.

All throughout the kiss Naruto was careful to keep his fingers moving, he was pretty sure from something Kiba once said that Hinata was not only a virgin but relatively innocent so he could imagine that she had never really tried masturbation. He was right, as he entered a third finger her eyes went wide and she gasped, her back arched up and her chest crushed up against his. He moved from her lips kissing her neck and gently moving down between the valley of her breasts as a wetness surged around his fingers and she tightened around him convulsing a little. He continued to move his fingers watching amazed as her head now thrashed against the pillow and she let loose a keening sound from the back of her throat.

She looked stunning, her dark hair splayed across the pillow, her face flushed, her lips redder than usual and an overcome look in her eyes that gave him a sense of masculine pride as he drew his fingers out. She watched him and he slowly raised his fingers to his mouth to lick them.

Flushed and embarrassed Hinata closed her eyes, had he really just done that? For the first time ever she wished she had received more advice about this kind of thing. After all she had no mother and her only female relative that she was close to was Hanabi five years younger than herself. Sakura and Ino had talked about sex and orgasms more than once but she had never really listened, TenTen had given her some sisterly advice, but on the whole she had not wanted to talk about it and so had never realised how her body could react. One arm went up her eyes covering them

"Hina-chan?" Naruto sounded concerned again "Did I hurt you?"

She stared at him and shook her head, he inclined his own head to one side disbelievingly and so she nodded "A little"

"You want me to stop?"

"I… no" she didn't look or sound convinced but Naruto understood, he leant over her kissing her gently

"Do you have any idea how amazing you just looked?" There was that blush again, she felt it creeping over her face "No seriously" he moved down to kiss her gently, she found it strangely erotic the taste on his lips was different. She realised with a strange perverse sense of pleasure that she could taste herself. "That was the most beautiful thing I've ever seen"

"Naruto I… I " she wanted to say 'I love you' but it just wouldn't some instead she raised her hands up to his chest stroking his taut skin down lower and lower until she reached his pyjama trousers. She slowly untied the drawstring her eyes concentrating on her fingers. Finally she had untied the tight knot and running her fingers along the edge of the material she pushed them down. He was large but then what could she compare him to? Still she wondered how he would fit, his fingers had seemed tight this would be something else. She bit her lip shyly before taking hold of him with one hand.

He'd had some restraint up until now, he had been able to think clearly all through their activities but the moment her small shaking fingers took a firm hold of him that was it. With a feral growl he pushed her hand away a moving himself properly into position he yanked Hinata up into his arms. Her legs tightened around his waist, her arms went about his shoulders and she stared at him afraid.

"Hold tight" he whispered before gently guiding himself into her delicious warmth,

It hurt more than his fingers, she remembered that was normal but she was a ninja and pain was second nature to her so when the pain became worse she didn't make a sound, she merely took to biting her lip harder.

"I'm sorry I hurt you" he whispered slowly drawing himself out "but trust me, it's worth it" and then suddenly she was down on her back again and he plunged into her hard and deep. She cried out into his shoulder but not from pain, God she had never felt so much bliss. anything she's considered the height of pleasure prior to this paled in comparison. He was pushing in and out at a pace she couldn't keep up to, she screamed as he thrust into her faster and harder each time getting more ferocious.

As he continued to pump into her Naruto was stunned, she was tight, that was expected but somehow he knew he was coming to the most spectacular climax of his life. Was it the noises she made? Was it her beauty? Was it the way she gripped him? Was it the was she held him, her nails clawing at his back? Was it knowing he was taking away her innocence? Setting a seal on her that no one else would ever be able to? Or was it just her?

It came upon him like a blinding light as he plunged into her one final time yelling her name and spilling into her. Never before had he been so affected, even the exhaustion he felt was more this time. He collapsed on top of her, he rolled apologetically away only to be stopped by the fact that they were still connected. He smiled and was about to pull out when she rolled onto him properly moving her pelvis to keep a grip on him.

"Stay" she murmured tiredly before dropping off to sleep

Amused Naruto looked down to make sure she was sleeping before he made another move. Truth be told he like the idea of remaining inside her but he slowly pulled out. He was surprised to find himself becoming aroused just by that action she was tight and he loved it. Kissing her gently on the forehead he covered her up before walking over to their bags and looking through their medical packs. After a quick search through her things he found her first aid kit and pulled out a tiny bottle. It was a birth control potion carried by all kunoichi in case of rape. Moving back to the bed he shook her gently

"Hina-hime? Wake up for a second"

She mumbled something and then opened her eyes "Wh-what's wrong?"

"Nothing just drink this"

Hinata opened her mouth obediently and Naruto poured the mixture down her throat. She coughed a little but once the potion was gone Naruto placed the bottle on the bedside table and climbed in beside her.

"Naruto-kun" she murmured gently and immediately wrapped herself around him in an embrace making him grin "so happy!"

"Me too Hinata, me too!" and Naruto was stunned to realise he meant it.

'I promised her that I wouldn't cut her out of my life' Naruto thought to himself 'I didn't realise that it could go both ways.'

(NaruHina)

A knock at the door interrupted his thoughts, frowning Naruto looked towards the window, it was still pelting it down with rain, who would be dumb enough to go outside in this weather?

Please R&R