I will rewrite this story .
I can't handle the mistakes i have made :(
I am now currently writing and finishing my other story: 'What The Future holds'
When I finsihed it, i will start rewriting Friend of Foe. I'm terribly sorry . but i can't finish the story if i don't like the way it is written right now.
Hope you understand and if i lose readers because of this, i will know it is my own fault T.T
For those who are planning to stick with me, depsite this all. thanks a lot and hope you will still read the story when i have finished rewriting it :)