Hey guys! So this is a little excerpt for my story. Please don't copy my idea, but I really need your help. So, should I continue with this story? I really want to know! :D So, basically this is after crescendo, but Rixon isn't bad in my story because I like me some nice Rixon. I don't think there will be any spoilers so please read it. What happened is Nora and Patch had a baby, but a year after the baby was born Nora sacrificed her life to save her baby, Elizabeth. Now Patch is a wreak, but doesn't show it on the outside. SOOOOOO here goes nothing:
Patch's POV:
" NO! Nora stop! You can't do this! Please don't leave me." ,I sobbed on the floor .
The archangel was standing there. He told us he would kill Elizabeth if we didn't stop loving each other. But how could I stop loving the only person who made me whole. The only person who made me smile, love, and want to be human just for her. She was my love and nobody else could take her from me. I needed her like a dehydrated man needed water. I wouldn't live life without her…I couldn't.
"Kill me instead. Don't take her from me. Please. Please please." I ran my hands through my hair and pinched the bridge of my nose. I punched the wall.
"GODAMMIT! KILL ME NOW! NOT HER!" ,I screamed at him.
I pushed Nora away so the archangel would kill me instead.
"I can't kill you and you know it" , he said, "if she is giving up her life then she will die. Or do you want me to kill your precious little baby?"
Nora pushed me away slowly and she looked into my eyes.
"I will always love you, Patch. Never forget me. Never give up on Elizabeth. Take care of her. I must do this", she turned away from me, but I pulled her towards me.
"You have to let me go, Patch, Stop it. Just let me do this for Elizabeth", she was crying now.
I watched her walk away from me forever. The archangel walk toward her and grabbed a dark knife from his coat. He encompassed her in darkness and slashed the knife through her body. Her scream echoed in my head.
*end of dream*
I woke to a small tugging on my hair. I blinked my eyes open to look straight into the eyes of our Elizabeth. Her short curly brown hair was just like Nora's. Her deep blue eyes were mine and her lips were mine as well. Everything else was pure Nora. My stomach ached with longing. Longing to touch Nora. Longing to feel her and kiss the sweet lips of her face. Elizabeth looked at me expectantly and climbed on top of me. I scooted onto the back of the bed and just looked at her.
"Daddy, can I sleep with you? I had a nightmare." She said while sucking on her thumb and holding her blanket and teddy bear.
I chuckled softly which made her fall backwards. I scooped her up and laid her next to me and tucked her into the covers.
"I would sleep, but I need to make us some breakfast." , I said as I got out of bed and kissed her forehead softly. "You can sleep some more or do you wanna watch TV?."
"Watch Doodles! Watch Doodles!" she tried to jump on the bed, but fell onto her side.
"Okay." ,I chuckled while searching for the remote. I spotted it and flipped it to the channel she wanted. She quickly sat down again and watched the TV intently.
I padded down the hallway into the kitchen. Our house wasn't huge, but it wasn't small either. 4 bedrooms 3 baths was not a bad house. The kitchen was pretty big and had a large island. I started to make pancakes and eggs when the doorbell rang. I went to the door and opened it to find Rixon.
"Hey Patch", he looked me up and down. "You don't look so good. What hap"-
"UNCLE RIXXXY" , Elizabeth screamed. She started to run towards Rixon when she fell. I quickly went to her and scooped her up. I looked at her to make sure there were no bruises, but she was a tough girl. She only cried a little. Her crocodile tears were gone as I carried her to Rixon.
"Hey little munchkin" , Rixon smiled. He poked her nose and took her from me. I lead him to the kitchen to put Elizabeth in her high-chair.
"Well, its been tough. I just had a dream. It was nothing. I was just reliving the day that…" , I looked down, "I promised her I wouldn't break down. I have to take care of Elizabeth. I can't fall apart."
"Patch, your emotions are all inside. One day you're going to snap. It's just a fact" ,Rixon said.
"I know. I keep telling myself it didn't happen. I mean, why didn't I do anything?" I could feel the anger bubbling up inside me. I threw the knife in my hands at the wall and pushed myself away from Elizabeth. I ran my hands through my hair and held my head in my hands, trying to stop the anger from coming out. I calmed myself and when I was ready to face Rixon I came back up from the floor.
"See what I mean?" Rixon stated.
"Shut up" ,I mumered quiet enough so only Rixon could here.
"Daddy! I'm hungryyy!" Elizabeth screamed.
Rixon laughed and I handed her the plate of pancakes and the fruit, I cut up in small pieces.
I looked up and saw someone. She had brown hair and was standing right outside the kitchen window. Her brown eyes and curve of her head made me look at her twice, but as soon as I blinked, she was gone.
"Nora" , I said as quiet as the wind.