Hey guys! This is the updated chapter. I did not do any editing on grammar, but I did edit the layout and the spelling. Just so everyone knows. I have read the book. I am aware that I the layout at the end is HORRIBLE! AND! I could not find the book to help me confirm the spelling.
Sadie POV:
I tumbled out of the portal, into the my Dad's palace. Everything was exactly the same when we say her last. Dark with except with one door lit up. As I expected, Anubis appeared to great me.
"Your Father isn't here." He said sincerely. He walked up and took my hand. Instantly I was in a bliss. His smoldering eyes leering me in drawing towards him. My heart pounding against my chest. I thought it was going to burst right out.
Anubis smiled slowly before saying "Don't you have a question for me?"
'What?' I thought, 'How could he know that? I never even told him I had a question for him.' I looked at him suspiciously.
"How could you know that? I never even told you." I said squinting my eyes at him.
"I've been helping you and Carter find the rest of the pharaohs in the world. I've been watching you. Your quite entertaining." Anubis said this with a little glee in his eyes.
"I see." Was all I was able to muster. I was starting to get nervous.
I knew that if I didn't ask the question now, I probably would miss the opportunity. I gathered up my confidence and looked up at him.
"Did you find the person to court yet?" I asked, looking down at the floor. Refusing to look at him.
"Yes I have." I could feel his eyes borrowing down on my head. I was starting to feel self concision. I turned around looking down at the floor. My throat closing up. Tightening up as if my air was being restricted. I started to hyperventilate.
I felt a strong hand grip my shoulder gently and turn my around. The other hand lifted my head so I was looking into Anubis's face.
"Sadie" he said gently, "It's you. Your the only one I've ever wanted. I love you!'
He took my face in his hands and kissed me. Leaving my shocked as could be.
Anubis P.O.V
I had just walked back in to the room after talking to Sadie's Dad/Orisis (yes this is me years later editing this. you're all welcome to thank me for making all the names right.) He had just given me permission to travel with Sadie, Carter and unfortunately Bast. I was suppose to watch over her and make sure she doesn't hurt. Right as I turned entered the room I noticed a portal pop open and out tumbles Sadie. She quickly picks her self up and brushes off her close.
Looking around, she surveyed the area. By this time, I had slowly started to walk forwards to greet her. I new exactly why she was here. She wanted to ask me and her dad a question. I knew that she wouldn't be asking the question to her dad, because he had left after talking to me.
By this time, I had come close enough for her to see me. I saw her turn and look at me. Her face was fierce. I stepped closer and said
"Your Father isn't here." I kept my face expressionless for the effects. I at least thought it was a cool effect.
"Oh" she says a little stunned.
I hadn't given time to explain why she was here, but on second thoughts I didn't need to. I waited for here to say more but she just continued to stare at me with a stunned look.
Great, I thought to myself, she's in shock. I sighed loudly before continuing.
"Aren't you going to ask me a question?" I said trying to provoke her out of her shock. It seemed to work. I saw her shake her head as if she was snapping herself out of a trance. Her eyes squinted at me as if she was working very hard to attempt to read my mind with no mind reading skills.
"How did you know that? I never told you why I came her for." I smile at her and take her hand in mine. I look deep into her eyes trying to seduce her.
"Why do you think your here? I was the one who helped you think about those things. I want you guys to succeed as much as you want to succeed. I was just helping you from behind the scenes."
I see her nod before I continue, "Now I am able to help you without you not knowing it was me. Your Father has given me permission to travel with you." I see her look down as she comprehends this.
Sadie looks up into my eyes and nods. I can tell that she is still thinking about something because she still had that look in eyes. I saw her again look down at thee ground, before looking up and anywhere else but at me. I hear her whisper with fear in her voice.
"Did you find anyone to court yet?" I smiled at how much fear was in her voice.
The answer to her question was simple for me because I had in fact found someone to court.
I look down at her with glee in my eyes. "yes" I saw softly to her.
All of a sudden her body stiffens and she turns away. I could feel her body quivering.
Woops! I guess I worded that wrong. I quickly grab her bony shoulder and spin her around to face me.
"Sadie" I say holding on to her so she doesn't spin away, "Sadie! It's you!" She stops struggling and looks up at me with shock but with happiness.
"It always has been. Ever since I saw you. I knew it was you. Sadie, I love you!" I tell in the most seductive voice I could manage. I could feel her breath quicken as I reach up and grip her chin softly. I tilt her chin up, and press my lips to hers. Sealing the Godly marriage vow. Binding myself to her. I was hers and she was mine. It would remain that way forever, and all I had to do was kiss the girl of my dreams.
**********Hey everyone! This is my first attempt at writing a story. Sorry that it is only 325 words. Didn't have my time. Will be longer next chapter. Be prepared for major LEMONS! And more LEMONS! LEMONS! LEMONS! LEMONS! Please review! Thanks, WolfLightningOmega***********
UPDATE COMMENT:
Hey everyone! I did update the grammar and layout. Much easier to read. Considering that I wrote this in February and just now updated this, I say the writing structure is okay but not my best work. Please review and tell me if there is anything else that I need to change.
-WolfLightning Omega-