Okay, so before I get to the story I want to thank everyone who reviewed the last one because that was my first attempt at Kuroshitsuji. So, now I hope you enjoy this one, too. Oh, and I am hoping for longer future chapters. Now, on ward to the story.
Ciel's Hidden Nightmare
"Why are you hesitating?"
Sebastian looked at his master, the young Ciel Phantomhive. Today was the day. Today Sebastian would have the soul he waited so long to taste, though he couldn't bring himself to consume it. He watched as his young master tapped his foot impatiently. Sebastian finally gave a smirk at the boy's impatience.
"Ah, so quick to die, Young Master?"
Ciel gave him a blank look.
"My soul is yours. I promised it to you. I'm not quick on dying, but I wish you would just get it over with."
Again Sebastian smirked, though he still hesitated.
"Sebastian, I order you to kill me."
Sebastian's eyes widened, a demonic smirk appeared on his face. Sebastian's body contorted. He was soon a ball of massive blackness. Ciel looked on at Sebastian as his appearance changed into the frightening demon he was. Before Ciel new it Sebastian lunged at him.
Ciel shot up in a cold sweat. His heart was racing. His cloths clung to his small trembling figure, and silent tears ran down his cheeks. The sheets were detached and sprawled about his bed in a haphazard scramble. Ciel took a moment to collect his self, cursing his childish antics, and the tears that constantly streamed down his cheeks.
To be continued
I'd like your opinion for chapter 1. Would you like me to (A) jump into the story using the prologue as the first chapter. Or would you (b) like me get deeply into the story. Let me know in your Review.
