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Author: Everyone talks like this.
*Everyone thinks like this.*
(and everyone does stuff like this)
(authors note: except if I do this)
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It was a dark gloomy and rainy night as usual when a Whale King floated over the desert. And inside that Whale King was Dr.Layon,the man who swore revenge on the Blitz team. He was out of the hospital and now was in the sky wondering about all the things he's been doing wrong. He's been waiting to get revenge on them for a long time. There he was in the main control room, sitting in his chair and doing the usual: eating noodles.
Layon: *I don't get it!I has tried battling the damn Blitz team for about 5 or 6 times already. But time after time,I still keep on losing. I remembers every single thing that happened in each defeat. I remembered it all as if it was my birthday! I tried to get them using the Tigers team, the Saber Fangs, the Fuzzy Pandas or whatever the hell their names are. I brought them up to fame and fortune and what did they do for me in return? They lost! For heaven's sake! I had my special weapon backing them up! Next,I used an anti-gravity surge with the addition of an unsancioned battle. But what happened next? They shot that god-forsaken Liger Zero Schider at his me! After that,he joined the Backdraft group and got 4 of the best troops to pilot my custom Stormsworders. But that traitor Pierce betrayed me and ran away with my Stormsworder. It was MINE! But that was nothing compared to what happened to my precious Shadow Fox. (slurp)...That Zoid represented all of my life's work and studies. All that now has been reduced to a common fighting machine,no thanks to that no good Brad. A week passed and I was so desperate that I stole Leena's boyfriend. And what the hell happened in the next battle? My Neo Warsharks were beaten because they have modifyed my Shadowfox! But then at the Royal Cup...I helped the Blitz team...No...I helped Leena from total destruction...(slurp)...Every time I have been defeated,it was because of a different cause..hmmm. *
Just as the obsessed doctor was thinking,the Whale King has found an unidentfied object rolling around the desert.He pressed a few buttons here and another few buttons there and then started to see the object in a closer view.Just from looking at it has gotten him to drop his noodles in amazement.What he saw was the rarest thing...scratch that...was something that has never been seen before any human eye before except for just one.Seeing this has put images of victory and revenge on his face.He could see it all now.The road to victory relied on his genius and what he has seen just right below him.
It was a hot sunny day and the sky was burning like hell. And under that sky stood nothing but tons of sand being blown through by the wind.The only good part about this seems to be the fact that at the end of the trail was Leena laying under the sun in her bikini. (author's note: Now tell me.Who saw that coming?) Well anyway, as she was laying there in the sun, getting a tan, the others, Brad, Bit and Jamie were playing volleyball with a few other people.The Blitz team were still on their vacation at the finest hotel and beach possible with all their prize money.They couldn't really see through the victory of the Royal Cup to know the fact that they needed all that money to pay for all the Liger parts,so I guess they're wasting away good money. Anyway, the game was over in an instant and Bit, Brad and Jamie lost.They were walking down to the Ice cream vendor with Leena, arguing over who made them lose the game.
(author's note: Brad might be a little OOC in the near future)
Bit: I'm telling you! It wasn't me! I was paying full close attention to...
Brad: That girl in the red bikini walk down the net?
Bit: Well what about you, Brad? You didn't go for the ball because of a quarter you found on the ground!?
Ice cream guy: So does anyone want ice cream or what?
Leena: Does anyone have any money?
A few seconds have passed for them to realized while some sand blew through out the beach. Bit and the rest then started to search for any kind of money. They searched their pockets, the sand, they even tried to get take some from the ice cream guy.
Jamie: Hey! Didn't Brad get a quarter just a few minutes ago?
Brad: What quarter?
Bit: Let's jump Brad and get his money!(tries to mug Brad's quarter)
Leena: This is hopeless. Where can we get money?
Harry: My name's Harry Champ! I'm a man destined to be king!(his BG music plays.Yay!)
Harry came out of no where with his 2 companions Benjamin and Sabastian, who happen to be carrying his things.No one was suprised that he would be here in a blink of an eye. So no one jumped, screamed or ran away crying to mommy or anything like that.
Leena:(in a dull kind of way)Hey Harry.
Harry: When my Leena's in trouble, you can always count on the fact that I'll be right by her side, where I belong!
Jamie:It's no big deal, Harry. We just need money to get some ice cream.
Brad( stops fighting) You heard that Bit?My quarter's no big deal. Now give it back!
Bit: No! I want ice cream! (continues fighting)
Harry: Don't worry Leena! I, the man destined to be king, have all the money you can ever get!
Leena:Then how much do you have?
Harry: Oh you name it!
Leena:...Ok Harry. What's the catch?
Harry: Nothing! I just want my precious Leena to be happy.
Bit: (stops fighting) Ok then. We'll take ten dollars!
Harry: Anything for my sweet Leena!
Well anyway, Harry gave ten dollars to Leena so they can get some ice cream. Brad and Bit got up and then went with the others as well. But when they went to order,the ice cream guy said that they were all sold out.
Leena: What!? Who took the last scoop of ice cream!?
ice cream guy:That guy over there. (points to the guy who took the last scoop)
And without any sign of hesitation, the extremely pissed off girl ran to the boy. She was followed by the others, who were trying to calm her down before she causes a huge riot on the beach.
Leena: HEY, BUDDY! YOU TOOK MY ICE CREAM!!!
???:What are you talking about? I bought this with my own money.
Leena: THAT WAS SUPPOSE TO BE MY ICE CREAM! GIVE IT TO ME NOW OR ELSE I'LL GO WILD ON YOUR ASS!
Bit: (Holds back Leena) Sorry, but she's a really stubborn girl.
Leena: I'M NOT STUBBORN!!!
Bit:...See what I mean?
The person they were all talking to,by the way, was a boy somewhere around sixteen years old. He was wearing black trunks and was wearing matrix-like sunglasses. He was a little bit muscular and stood about 5'5 feet tall. He also had dark hair with spikes coming out the front.
Harry: Don't say that to Leena! How dare you! If I was only in the S class, I'd make your team lose so bad that you'd go all the way down to class C!
???: You're in class S?
Bit: Yeah! Ever heard of the Blitz team?
???: Who hasn't? You're the guy with that Liger Zero.
Bit: That's right!
Leena:(back to normal) Say, do you know me?
???: Of course I do. You the one who keeps wasting ammo!
Leena: WHAT!!!???
???: Well anyway, what are you doing here?
Brad: We're on vacation so we can celebrate our victory from the Royal Cup.
Jamie: And what about you?
???: I just stopped by and thought I'd take a short break.
Harry: Are you going anywhere?
???: Me and my coach are trying to assemble a team and we need the best of the best.
Bit: Well why don't you join us?
???: Nah. I want to have the honors of fighting you one day.
Bit: I could see it all now: the Blitz team vs...
???: We didn't come up with a name yet.
Jamie: Well good luck then...by the way, what's your name?
???: Max.
Brad: In that case, we'll be looking forward to seeing you on TV ,Max.
Max:Thanks.(looks at his watch) Ah hell! I gotta go now.
Bit: Okay then. Later Max!
Max: Nice meeting you.(starts running)
Leena: WHAT ABOUT MY ICE CREAM!!??
And with that, Max departed with his new friends,the Blitz team....and the Champ team I guess...But anyway, somewhere out on the city stood a noodle stand.(author's note:10 bucks says you don't know who this is.)And in that stand was Dr.Layon. He was just sitting looking at the clock as if he was looking for someone. A few minutes later, Max ran into the stand and sat right by the doctor.Max was wearing loose blue jeans and a green large shirt and still with the sunglasses. Layon just stood there and looked at the panting boy.
Layon:...(slurp)...You're late.
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What did Layon mean when he said that Max was late? (author's note: well it's kind of obvious right about now) Who will be on Max's new team? And what's so special about this boy? Well there it is.The first part of my first Zoids fic.Please review.Tell me what you want to see and maybe I'll think it over.(Mainly who you want to be on the team)
*Attention*
I would be very happy if anyone can do this for me:
-what are the names of the Tigers(fuzzy pandas) team?
Thank you for your cooperation.
Author: Everyone talks like this.
*Everyone thinks like this.*
(and everyone does stuff like this)
(authors note: except if I do this)
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It was a dark gloomy and rainy night as usual when a Whale King floated over the desert. And inside that Whale King was Dr.Layon,the man who swore revenge on the Blitz team. He was out of the hospital and now was in the sky wondering about all the things he's been doing wrong. He's been waiting to get revenge on them for a long time. There he was in the main control room, sitting in his chair and doing the usual: eating noodles.
Layon: *I don't get it!I has tried battling the damn Blitz team for about 5 or 6 times already. But time after time,I still keep on losing. I remembers every single thing that happened in each defeat. I remembered it all as if it was my birthday! I tried to get them using the Tigers team, the Saber Fangs, the Fuzzy Pandas or whatever the hell their names are. I brought them up to fame and fortune and what did they do for me in return? They lost! For heaven's sake! I had my special weapon backing them up! Next,I used an anti-gravity surge with the addition of an unsancioned battle. But what happened next? They shot that god-forsaken Liger Zero Schider at his me! After that,he joined the Backdraft group and got 4 of the best troops to pilot my custom Stormsworders. But that traitor Pierce betrayed me and ran away with my Stormsworder. It was MINE! But that was nothing compared to what happened to my precious Shadow Fox. (slurp)...That Zoid represented all of my life's work and studies. All that now has been reduced to a common fighting machine,no thanks to that no good Brad. A week passed and I was so desperate that I stole Leena's boyfriend. And what the hell happened in the next battle? My Neo Warsharks were beaten because they have modifyed my Shadowfox! But then at the Royal Cup...I helped the Blitz team...No...I helped Leena from total destruction...(slurp)...Every time I have been defeated,it was because of a different cause..hmmm. *
Just as the obsessed doctor was thinking,the Whale King has found an unidentfied object rolling around the desert.He pressed a few buttons here and another few buttons there and then started to see the object in a closer view.Just from looking at it has gotten him to drop his noodles in amazement.What he saw was the rarest thing...scratch that...was something that has never been seen before any human eye before except for just one.Seeing this has put images of victory and revenge on his face.He could see it all now.The road to victory relied on his genius and what he has seen just right below him.
It was a hot sunny day and the sky was burning like hell. And under that sky stood nothing but tons of sand being blown through by the wind.The only good part about this seems to be the fact that at the end of the trail was Leena laying under the sun in her bikini. (author's note: Now tell me.Who saw that coming?) Well anyway, as she was laying there in the sun, getting a tan, the others, Brad, Bit and Jamie were playing volleyball with a few other people.The Blitz team were still on their vacation at the finest hotel and beach possible with all their prize money.They couldn't really see through the victory of the Royal Cup to know the fact that they needed all that money to pay for all the Liger parts,so I guess they're wasting away good money. Anyway, the game was over in an instant and Bit, Brad and Jamie lost.They were walking down to the Ice cream vendor with Leena, arguing over who made them lose the game.
(author's note: Brad might be a little OOC in the near future)
Bit: I'm telling you! It wasn't me! I was paying full close attention to...
Brad: That girl in the red bikini walk down the net?
Bit: Well what about you, Brad? You didn't go for the ball because of a quarter you found on the ground!?
Ice cream guy: So does anyone want ice cream or what?
Leena: Does anyone have any money?
A few seconds have passed for them to realized while some sand blew through out the beach. Bit and the rest then started to search for any kind of money. They searched their pockets, the sand, they even tried to get take some from the ice cream guy.
Jamie: Hey! Didn't Brad get a quarter just a few minutes ago?
Brad: What quarter?
Bit: Let's jump Brad and get his money!(tries to mug Brad's quarter)
Leena: This is hopeless. Where can we get money?
Harry: My name's Harry Champ! I'm a man destined to be king!(his BG music plays.Yay!)
Harry came out of no where with his 2 companions Benjamin and Sabastian, who happen to be carrying his things.No one was suprised that he would be here in a blink of an eye. So no one jumped, screamed or ran away crying to mommy or anything like that.
Leena:(in a dull kind of way)Hey Harry.
Harry: When my Leena's in trouble, you can always count on the fact that I'll be right by her side, where I belong!
Jamie:It's no big deal, Harry. We just need money to get some ice cream.
Brad( stops fighting) You heard that Bit?My quarter's no big deal. Now give it back!
Bit: No! I want ice cream! (continues fighting)
Harry: Don't worry Leena! I, the man destined to be king, have all the money you can ever get!
Leena:Then how much do you have?
Harry: Oh you name it!
Leena:...Ok Harry. What's the catch?
Harry: Nothing! I just want my precious Leena to be happy.
Bit: (stops fighting) Ok then. We'll take ten dollars!
Harry: Anything for my sweet Leena!
Well anyway, Harry gave ten dollars to Leena so they can get some ice cream. Brad and Bit got up and then went with the others as well. But when they went to order,the ice cream guy said that they were all sold out.
Leena: What!? Who took the last scoop of ice cream!?
ice cream guy:That guy over there. (points to the guy who took the last scoop)
And without any sign of hesitation, the extremely pissed off girl ran to the boy. She was followed by the others, who were trying to calm her down before she causes a huge riot on the beach.
Leena: HEY, BUDDY! YOU TOOK MY ICE CREAM!!!
???:What are you talking about? I bought this with my own money.
Leena: THAT WAS SUPPOSE TO BE MY ICE CREAM! GIVE IT TO ME NOW OR ELSE I'LL GO WILD ON YOUR ASS!
Bit: (Holds back Leena) Sorry, but she's a really stubborn girl.
Leena: I'M NOT STUBBORN!!!
Bit:...See what I mean?
The person they were all talking to,by the way, was a boy somewhere around sixteen years old. He was wearing black trunks and was wearing matrix-like sunglasses. He was a little bit muscular and stood about 5'5 feet tall. He also had dark hair with spikes coming out the front.
Harry: Don't say that to Leena! How dare you! If I was only in the S class, I'd make your team lose so bad that you'd go all the way down to class C!
???: You're in class S?
Bit: Yeah! Ever heard of the Blitz team?
???: Who hasn't? You're the guy with that Liger Zero.
Bit: That's right!
Leena:(back to normal) Say, do you know me?
???: Of course I do. You the one who keeps wasting ammo!
Leena: WHAT!!!???
???: Well anyway, what are you doing here?
Brad: We're on vacation so we can celebrate our victory from the Royal Cup.
Jamie: And what about you?
???: I just stopped by and thought I'd take a short break.
Harry: Are you going anywhere?
???: Me and my coach are trying to assemble a team and we need the best of the best.
Bit: Well why don't you join us?
???: Nah. I want to have the honors of fighting you one day.
Bit: I could see it all now: the Blitz team vs...
???: We didn't come up with a name yet.
Jamie: Well good luck then...by the way, what's your name?
???: Max.
Brad: In that case, we'll be looking forward to seeing you on TV ,Max.
Max:Thanks.(looks at his watch) Ah hell! I gotta go now.
Bit: Okay then. Later Max!
Max: Nice meeting you.(starts running)
Leena: WHAT ABOUT MY ICE CREAM!!??
And with that, Max departed with his new friends,the Blitz team....and the Champ team I guess...But anyway, somewhere out on the city stood a noodle stand.(author's note:10 bucks says you don't know who this is.)And in that stand was Dr.Layon. He was just sitting looking at the clock as if he was looking for someone. A few minutes later, Max ran into the stand and sat right by the doctor.Max was wearing loose blue jeans and a green large shirt and still with the sunglasses. Layon just stood there and looked at the panting boy.
Layon:...(slurp)...You're late.
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What did Layon mean when he said that Max was late? (author's note: well it's kind of obvious right about now) Who will be on Max's new team? And what's so special about this boy? Well there it is.The first part of my first Zoids fic.Please review.Tell me what you want to see and maybe I'll think it over.(Mainly who you want to be on the team)
*Attention*
I would be very happy if anyone can do this for me:
-what are the names of the Tigers(fuzzy pandas) team?
Thank you for your cooperation.