Naruto: His Story
By Rantnrave09
Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto and most concepts used in this story. This is a non-profit fic, if you paid for reading this then you were ripped off!
Summary: After losing everyone he cared for, Naruto finally snapped and unleashed all his pent up fury. In the aftermath, Kyuubi offered Naruto a chance to set things right by sending him to the past. Throwing caution to the wind, he jumped at the chance but something totally unexpected happened.
CHAPTER 1: Requiem of Souls-
It was too late.
He was too late.
All the training he endured during the months he stayed at Mount Myōboku amounted to nothing.
He immediately went to Konoha just after he finally mastered the Sage Mode but when he arrived there everything is already in shambles.
He gathered Nature Chakra and entered Sage Mode to sense the presence of any survivors. There was none. Not even a single soul left alive.
To say that he was broken is like saying Tsunade has a 'tendency' to gamble sometimes. It's a major understatement. No, he was beyond broken. His heart, mind, and soul have been shattered to a billion pieces.
Just when things are starting to turn out for the better and Konoha's people were finally starting to acknowledge him, something like this happened.
Something's not right though. After losing everything, and every precious people in his life, he was strangely calm. He was even calmer than he was during his Sage Arts training.
-Naruto's Mindscape-
"It's over, everyone's gone… I wasn't able to save them, I was too late… I… I'm so useless…" Naruto said, talking to no one in particular.
"So you're just going to mope like a fucking emo?" a dark voice said.
"Kyuubi? No, you're not Kyuubi… I know his voice, you're someone else. Who are you? Show yourself!"
Without warning, a malevolent force came rushing from where the voice came from and then darkness overtook him.
-Outside World – Konoha-
The place was eerily silent. It was so silent that it's almost deafening.
Amidst the rubble, Naruto can be seen standing still as if in a trance, his eyes shut.
Then suddenly his eyes snapped open and all his pent up fury was released simultaneously. Dark energy flared up from within him.
It was so dark, so different from his usual Chakra Flare. It has even more evil feel to it than Kyuubi's demonic Chakra.
The malefic aura he was emanating seems to draw out the forces of nature. Dark clouds began forming atop him, blocking the mid-day sun. The wind blows wild, creating mini tornados. Lightning flashed and thunders roared.
He closed his eyes for a moment, he was concentrating. He let the dark energy spread more until you can only see darkness in the sky wherever you look. He was tracking the ones who are responsible for the destruction of his home and the deaths of his loved ones.
He finally found them, and fortunately for him they seem to be congregating in a particular place. Somewhere in Ame. He opened his eyes slowly and with an evil smirk, they suddenly flashed a blinding white light and in a blink of an eye he was gone. Leaving a dark void where he once was.
-Amegakure Town Square-
The people of Ame didn't stand a chance.
One moment they were carrying on with their normal daily lives, the next thing they know was there's some guy who randomly appeared out of nowhere and started to relentlessly kill everyone in his vicinity.
Naruto has finally lost it, he didn't care if he was killing innocent people.
He didn't spare anyone. Whether they are men, women, children, or elderly people, he didn't give a shit. The way he see it, they were all the same. Ame houses Akatsuki. They even consider Pain, Akatsuki's leader, their 'god'. They should be wiped out along with that wretched organization.
With each people he killed, he noticed his power is gradually increasing. He can see the souls of the people he killed and they were absorbed by his gauntlets that are made of dark energy.
As the body count increases, the dark gauntlets that once formed around his arms slowly covered more of his arms until it reached to his shoulders. His attacks become more ranged and widespread. When before he was only able to manifest a dark pointed stick of some sort and uses it to stab people to their death, now he can manifest it in large quantities and hurl them like a javelin. He can also blast a wide area in front of him with his malefic powers.
Deciding he had enough souls collected, he began chanting in some strange language and does some odd motion with his hands. The souls he previously collected where then released around him. These souls were tainted with the evil force and start to collect the souls of any living thing that they touched or passed through.
By the end of the attack, they went back inside him, feeding him with more souls and caused the dark armor to cover his whole body. He was now completely covered in dark armor, its color is completely black and it's so dark that it seems to absorb light.
The area of effect of the attack was huge. It completely wiped out the entire Ame population save the stronger ones who were able to deflect the soul reapers with their own Chakra. This includes the remaining members of Akatsuki and some high level Ame shinobi and kunoichi.
He looked at the Akatsuki members who finally decided to show up after his display of power.
They were now glaring daggers at him.
"It's about time for you fuckers to finally show your ugly faces," said Naruto, his voice's tone is deep and dark.
Madara was about to say something to distract him while the others made their move but Naruto was far from his old stupid self. He took notice of the others who were about to start doing hands signs and beat them with his own move.
"Too slow!" he casually said, while the dark javelins instantly manifested out of nowhere and in breakneck speed launched to their intended targets.
Not a single javelin missed its target, and each of the remaining members of Akatsuki were slowly dying from having their vital organs stabbed and bleeding profusely while the remaining Ame forces are all dead.
Not one to give his enemies a chance to recover, Naruto finally decided to unleash his trump card. He released a huge wave of his malevolent aura layered with killing intent which effectively immobilizes them with a bone-chilling sensation that can only be described by one word – fear.
"Answer my call, Dark Spear!"
The wind blew wildly, causing twisters around him while gradually collecting dark thunder clouds above him. A black lightning struck him, accompanied by a deafening roar of thunder. Strangely enough, it didn't hurt him but instead began to slowly manifest to his hands into a spear made of condensed dark energy with blade-like shape on both ends.
The Akatsuki are sweating bullets now, they can feel it, the feeling of death slowly creeping towards them. They can feel the very essence of it, seeping from the Dark Spear.
Naruto slowly walked forward towards them. He then suddenly stopped and did the last thing they expected him to do – he cut himself with weapon he is holding. As his blood dripped to the ground from the deep cut on his hands, he closed his eyes and began chanting some weird prayer-like words in a strange language.
When he was finished, he then called out once again, this time in a much louder volume. "Come forth, Ancient Ancestor, I summon thee!"
The souls of the recently dead Ame ninjas that are yet to be collected by his armor slowly turned into a dark energy then into a shape of a vampire bat. The rest of his body armor except for the gauntlets and the javelins that impaled the Akatsuki members also turned into a bat-shaped form. The little fuckers even made bat-like sound while converging into a slowly growing black orb of concentrated malevolent energy that hovers over some distance above the village.
When the last of the bat-shaped creatures completed the orb, its lower most part began to ripple and suddenly a figure started to emerge from within it. The figure has large black gargoyle wings, its head is black with extended eyebrows shaped like horns and its chin is long and pointy. It also has long, whip-like tail and some most of its body slim body is black and the rest is dark crimson.
It flapped its wings a few times then raised its hands to the orb of dark energy. Golden sparks began to form in its arm connecting it to the orb. With a great deal of effort, the figure looked like it's barely able to move the orb but managed somehow and launched it to the ground below.
When it hit the ground, the orb grew bigger and bigger until it swallowed the entire village into complete darkness. The force behind it was so strong that after the attack, the only one left standing was Naruto who seem to be unaffected by the figure's attack. The Akatsuki members, the dead Ame ninjas and civilians and even the building rubbles were all disintegrated by the attack.
Madara, however, managed to get his bearings straight and was able to avoid the attack just before it hit by activating his Sharingan and escaped by using his Space-Time Ninjutsu.
Unfortunately for him, the figure followed him to his sanctuary which shocked the ancient Uchiha.
-Madara's Dimensional Sanctuary-
"H-how did you get here? Only I can enter this place! This is impossible!" Madara exclaimed, stuttering a little.
"Ahahahaha! You feeble human think your parlor tricks can help you to escape from my clutches? You're so naïve!" the figure said in a casual manner.
"You think this is funny? You think you're funny? Let's see if you can still laugh after this!" he said while activating his Eternal Mangekyō Sharingan.
He didn't even manage to finish making the first hand seal for the jutsu he was planning to use.
The figure already made its move, its eyes flashed for such a brief moment that it can't be detected by the normal eye. But with the Sharingan, Madara saw it all. He saw the energy emitted just as the figure's eyes turned golden. It all happened in a flash but he saw it in slow motion thanks to his dōjutsu kekkei genkai.
Time slowed down to a standstill, and the figure leisurely moved towards the helpless Uchiha. It raised its right hand and ever so gently touched Madara's chest then it just left just as the energy field it created dissipated.
Madara was confused, one moment he saw the figure's eyes change in color like it activated some kind of dōjutsu and emitted this strange golden chakra and the next thing he know is that the figure was gone.
He was starting to feel some kind of relief when suddenly he felt mind-numbing pain coming from his chest. Then he found out what it was; the thing that caused the pain. It was so small yet so powerful, so powerful that even light cannot escape it. It was a mini black hole and it's inside him!
The black hole slowly ate him from the inside. His screaming was so loud it would have caused deafness to any person nearby who could have heard it, good thing he was inside his dimensional sanctuary where no one else is around. Then there was silence.
It can only be described as the epitome of a 'clean kill'. It was so clean not even a speck of blood can be seen. Madara's existence has been totally erased as if he never existed at all in the first place.
-Back in Ame with Naruto-
He didn't sense it before but after the attack made by the figure he sensed two more chakra signature not too far from where he was. He immediately sprung to action and teleported to the location.
He saw a fair-skinned man with chin-length red hair (a colour which is a trademark of the Uzumaki clan) with his most noticeable trait being his Rinnegan eyes. He looks withered, and has what looks to be chakra receivers implanted into his back, one in each of his shoulder joints and smaller ones in his forearms. He was trembling; the very presence of Naruto in front of him is enough to cause him to soil his pants.
"I guess you are the 'god' that your people so vehemently call," Naruto said, in a matter of fact way.
"…" Nagato tried his best to reply but can't move his jaw. He was really terrified, so terrified he can't even twitch if he wanted.
"What's the matter? Cat got your tongue? "
"…"
"It seems like you're not up for a small chat. I will cut to the chase then and just be done with it. Good riddance!"
"!"
In one fell swoop, Nagato's head rolled on the floor. Satisfied with the outcome of his actions and the demise of his enemies, Naruto walked towards the direction of the remaining chakra signature. He suspected it to be a civilian because it was weak, almost non-existent. But something is strangely familiar with it; like it belongs to someone he knew (or once knew).
When he got inside the room however, he was shocked to the core of his being at what he saw.
-END CHAPTER 1-
Next time on Naruto:His Story…
Naruto finds one of his precious people in Akatsuki's destroyed underground laboratory but the person is dying. Will Kyuubi finally show up and offer him a chance to set things right? Will he finally meet and get to know the person who attacked him in his mindscape and the mysterious summoned figure? Find out next time on Naruto: His Story!
A/N: I finally did it, my first ever fanfic! All kinds of reviews are welcomed and appreciated, even flames and rants! It would be nice to have some objective criticism though. Also, English is my 3rd language and I barely passed my English subjects so expect some errors here and there. But I'm trying the best that I can to minimize them to have at least a reasonably readable material.
Now on to some explanations: This fic is a major AU and has multiple themes and concepts from different sources. I will eventually disclose some information about the elements I imported but most of them I will just keep for now to have some element of surprise ;). Also, this is a time-travel fic but *SPOILER ALERT!* I have a different concept of time travel, something I haven't seen any author has done before (or maybe someone already came up with this concept like me so if you know of someone who has the same idea as mine, kindly tell me ok? So I'd stop claiming I'm the first to think of it this way). Most of you may not like the Naruto of this story because he is overpowered but it's only for this chapter. In the following chapters he will lose all his abilities and starts from scratch. The reason why? Well you just have to stick around for a while to find out. ;p *END SPOILER*.
Also I think I need to explain more about how Konoha got destroyed and everyone got killed. When Akatsuki attacked, Madara abducted a key person who would have saved the lives of many by using a certain technique when Nagato destroyed the village with his Shinra Tensei skill.
Techniques List:
-Uzumaki Naruto-
Farsight – Using dark energy to affect nature, enables the user to detect and locate beings with energy.
Dark Rift v1 – Bending the space-time, teleports the user to the desired location.
Necromastery – The user absorbs the soul of the slain creature, increasing his own powers.
Dark Javelin – A javelin made of dark energy, can be use for melee or as a projectile. Disables enhanced regeneration.
Shadow Raze – Blasts an area in front of the user with dark energy. Has a fairly large area of effect.
Presence of the Dark Lord – The user releases a blast of dark energy, inflicting fear status and effectively immobilizes enemies for a short duration.
Requiem of Souls – Releases souls accumulated through Necromastery. Released souls instantly kills lesser beings.
Dark Summoning – Summons a mighty creature through a dark ritual.
-Ancient Ancestor/The Figure-
Darkness Messenger – Hurls a massive ball of dark energy that disintegrates all matter it comes in contact with. Affects everything except other Gravity users.
Dark Rift v2 – An improved version of Dark Rift.
Chronosphere – Creates a rip in spacetime in an area effectively slowing down all activities within to a standstill. User and beings with similar genetic code are immune.
Gravija – Gravity based attack, creates a black hole that varies in size depending on the amount of energy used to fuel it.
-Uchiha Madara-
Space-Time Migration – Similar to Dark Rift but only usable if the user has a Sharingan.
