Hey guys, this is my first fan fiction, so don't get mad at me if its bad. I have a lots of inspiration from others peoples fan fictions. OK, I know that there are many of these out there, but I really like them so I figured I should do one as my own. They really inspired me.

I don't PJO, rick riordan does, I wish I did though.

I was mostly inspired by mypenisoutofink

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Sorry that the chapter is so short

Percy's P.O.V.

Flashback

I was heading towards the beach where I could always clear my head. It was one of my favorite places since I am the son of Poseidon. For people who don't know me I am Percy Jackson and after the second Titan War the heroes were granted immortality.

I saw a figure in the distance sitting in the sand, when I got closer I saw blond hair flying in the wind. I then realized it was my girlfriend, Annabeth. we have been dating for a year now, we started dating when the gods turned us immortal, on my birthday.

When I got closer I realized that there was someone else with her. It was my brother Mark, ever since he came along everyone forgot about me. He did one quest and everybody fell in love. Even Poseidon said that he was his favorite son. It was like I didn't even exist anymore. I was pushed away in the shadows. Only Grover, Nico, Thalia, and Annabeth stayed with me. I zoned in on them, They were kissing, at first I didn't' process what was happening. Annabeth was kissing Mark. Why would she do this? I was completely shock, but then angrier ran through my veins. I heard her say something, but I was way to far away to hear what.

I stormed over to where they were sitting. Anger was talking over my body, my legs were moving on their own. He was leaning back in when I cleared my throat.

"Percy...I," Annabeth started to say

"Save it" I tried to calm down and count to ten, but it wasn't working. I was getting madder by the second. "I saw what you did, you stupid bitch, don't make excuses"

At first she was shocked and didn't know what to say

"Excuse me"

"You heard me, I saw you sucking face"

"Percy, just let me explain" she started to cry, good.

"It's over"

I saw Mark smirking at me, that bastard. He took everything from me. I wiped that smirk of his stupid face. I punched him square in the face, his nose started to bleed profusely.

Annabeth went over to grab for me. I pushed her away, I couldn't even stand to look at her

"Get away from me"

"Per..cry ple..as..e," she barely got out what she was saying, she was crying so much.

I walked away and never looked back. I ran back to my cabin. when I walked in it felt colder and sadder. The sea was reaching out to me, but i was mad at Poseidon and the campers for pushing me away in the shadows. I decided to go, leave this place behind. Leave this place behind in the shadows and everyone in it, like they did to me. Packed all my stuff and was out the door in a matter of minutes. Ran up to the hill and just before I left I touched Thalia's tree

"Goodbye" I whispered

That was 500 years ago. That was when Chaos took me in

Now I am the commander of the Soldiers of Chaos.

End of chapter, please review. Iwant to hear what you think. Constructive criticism is appreciated. No Flames

Should I deleted it and make a new story, or keep going?