Summary: In response to issues raised by you; CHAPTER THREE HAS BEEN REVISED! Chapter Four will be out either next week or in a fortnight. Please continue to review and give feedback. (For a more complete version of this message, please see below)

Hey guys,

Sorry I haven't updated in a while; a combination of my school trip to Japan, work and end-of-school exams have been taking over my life.

Unfortunately, this notice isn't for a new chapter, though I am firmly dedicated to releasing one in the next two weeks at the longest, more likely one week.

This notice is about a sort-of new chapter. A lot of people expressed very similar issues and comments about the Duelling styles described in Chapter 3, and I kept thinking to myself "they just don't get it!" Having gone back and looked at what I actually wrote (rather than what I thought I wrote), I realized why – I was nowhere near as clear on what I meant as I thought I was.

So, a revised version of Chapter 3 has been released, containing mainly minor changes and clarifications so that it actually expresses what I was thinking (instead of me just believing that it does).

I hope that the revised information contained within gives you enough to think about over the 1 or 2 weeks until the next chapter goes up.

Apologies that this isn't a new chapter yet, but I thought it was important and needed to be done.

Cheers,

Cassiel

P.S. Please continue the constructive criticism and commenting. As a writer I find it very flattering and rewarding that you're giving this story as much thought and attention as you are. So please, feel free to review a second time if I have or haven't cleared up any of your questions/points.