this is the rewrite of the previous prologue. if you want to flame do it nicely this is ma first story.

once upon a time a girl with pink hair and brilliant green pairs of orbs ran, ran as fast as her bare foot could take her. Her light pink dress was torn from all the running through the forest. She heard the royal horse's shoe beating the earth loudly. She hid behind a bush. She calms herself until her heart beat is even. The guards pass through without even checking that theirs a pink hair mass over the bush. Then she starts running again for a few hours.

The sky was dark, raindrop fall on to her face signaling her to take shelter. The rain pours down. She cursed her bad luck. She kept walking albeit that her dress cling to her like a second skin. She shivered. She hugged herself try to keep warm as possible.

She collapses on to the ground. Taste like mud….well… it's better than nothing….. . She turned facing the gloomy sky, raindrop washing away her tears and the mud off her face. She didn't know how she fell asleep under the condition.

A thick mysterious mist covers every thing.

Sakura wake from the uncomfortable position. Mud on her face and cloth. She wiped her face smearing the mud. She sat up looked around. The mist started to clear up a bit. A house-mansion. Derelict and old. 'clomp..clomp..' she heard the kingdom horse are nearby. She rushed into the house without a second thought.

'CREAk~…' the door open to her new life….

SAKURA POV.

"achooo…" I wiped my nose with my hand it's so dirty here. Dusts are every where o the covered furniture, walls and the Y-shaped stare. No doubt this place was magnificent and lively centuries ago. The chandelier on the ceiling made a soft 'clank' noise.

I touched the stare wooden rail it made my fingers black due to the thick dust. I walked up the stare it creaked. I looked at the walls curiously beautiful painting was pined up on the wall.

I found a room with a bed like the other room this is dusted too when I looked at the bed I started to feel drowsy.

Sun shine through the rotting blinds of the room. I stretch my arm and legs, feeling the bone crack in relief. A book. An innocent book lay on my lap. The cover is brown with silver twisted around the book. There has no title or any hint that it was opened before. I feel thee cover it was beautiful and mysterious.

I opened the book light pouring from the book to the room. I covered my eyes from the light.

When the light starting to dim away I cautiously remove my hand from my face. 'ooow...shit'

There was without a doubt a male thing inside this room. There are 13 of them. The unlucky number. All 13 are barely even wearing cloth. All looking hot, sexy and intimidating. All with their own fairytale features which by the way are creeping me out. All staring at me with like a piece of meat. All 13 HALF-NAKED and ARE STARING at ME! God help me…. Day-umn …

THE END

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