Dark Secrets & Surprises
I am so sorry everyone! I would have posted another story sooner, but life got in the way.
Anyway, this fic is a lot darker than my last one, dont like, dont read. Also any feedback would be much appreciated.
Rated t for mature themes and a few swear words.
Dont own Five-0, if I did I wouldnt have to work!
Enjoy!
Lieutenant Commander Steve McGarrett stared at the scene before him in disbelief. A suicide bomb had just gone off at Ala Moana Centre, killing at least a dozen innocent shoppers as well as the suicide bomber. Steve worked his way through the charred remains shops, people and merchandise. Sure, Steve had seen his fair share of bombings, but that was in Iraq, not in Hawaii. "Steve", someone yelled, jolting Steve out of his musings. He looked around and saw Lieutenant Chin Ho Kelly waving to him.
"Chin, did you find the bastard who did this"? Steve asked as he joined his old friend and colleague, next to the remnants of an escalator. "Sorry Steve, Max is still trying to identify the bodies" Chin somberly told the head of Five-0. Steve rubbed a hand over his face in frustration, "I hope Danny gets here soon, he's good at talking to the families of victims". "Speaking of which, where is our favourite haole" Chin asked in an attempt to calm Steve down.
"He had Grace this weekend", a new, feminine voice joined the conversation. Both men turned and saw the youngest member of Five-0, and Chins cousin, Officer Kono Kalakaua walking towards them. "Hey cuz, how is it going" Chin greeted Kono warmly. "Hey cuz", Kono returned the greeting. "Like I said, Danny had Grace this weekend", she said, referring to Detective Danny "Danno" Williams and his nine year old daughter Grace. "Oh, now I remember" Chin groaned. "Danny did call, he said he was dropping Grace off home then coming straight out here", Kono informed her boss. "Fine, Kono go and see if Max has anything yet. "Sure boss", Kono said and walked over to the quirky medical examiner, Max Bergman, who was just about having a ball with all the bodies at his disposal.
"Boss wants to know if you found anything yet", Kono told him. Max frowned at her and said "Well then Officer Kalakaua, you can tell the Commander that my answer is the same as it was five minutes ago, and my being constantly interrupted is not going make anything go any faster!". Kono stared at him for a moment, then said "okay then, I'll go and tell him that." "Thank you", Max snapped then bent back over the body he was performing and autopsy on. Kono shook her head then hurried back over to Chin and Steve. "Well, what did he say?" Steve demanded. "He said to tell you that he doesn't like being interrupted every five minutes, and that he is still working on it".
Rachel's Place:
Danny Williams pulled up in front of Rachel and Step-Stan's mansion, and braced himself for the hurricane that was about to come his way. "Rachel is not going to be happy about this" he thought glumly. Pregnancy could do that to you; send all your hormones in a whirlwind. Oh well, better go face the music. He got out of the car, and then opened the other door for his little princess. "Come on Monkey lets go and say hi to mommy, and then Danno's got to go work". He grabbed his daughter's hand, and then walked up to the front porch. The door was opened by Danny's ex-wife Rachel, who looked surprised to see them standing there.
"Of course she's surprised, we were supposed to go to the zoo today, she wasn't expecting Grace back until next Monday", Danny snorted in his head. "Hey Monkey why don't you go upstairs and unpack your things". "Okay. Bye Daddy, be careful". Rachel stood back to let Grace go past, then she turned to her ex-husband. "I'm really sorry about this Rachel, but there was a suicide bombing at Ala Moana Centre. I have to go there". "Are you going to be okay doing that, I mean, wont it bring back some memories?", Rachel asked worriedly. "If I had a choice, then, no, I wouldn't be going. But the Governor has ordered us to go. I can't refuse an order from him". "But if you explain the reasons to him, I'm sure he'll understand", Rachel pressed. "I appreciate your concern Rachel, but I have to do this", Danny said. "Thanks for not ripping me a new one". No problem Daniel but promise me you will take care of yourself". "I will Rachel, and forget to tell Grace that I promise we will go to the zoo next time. I will" Rachel promised. "Bye Rachel". "Goodbye Daniel" Rachel whispered as she watched the man she loved drive away. Rachel sighed, even though she still loved him, she wasn't strong enough to be married to a cop.
Ala Moana Centre:
"Commander, I have just identified the bomber", Max stated proudly. Steve sighed and turned to face the ME. "What have you got Max", Steve asked. "Thank you, the culprits name is Foo Chen. He was born on the islands, but his father is from Asia. Foo Chen's father had a lot of brothers, one of whom is very infamous around Oahu". "Who is Foo Chen's uncle, Max", Steve asked. "Wo Fat".
