Romeo and Juliet Maximum Ride Style

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chapter 1

Max POV

I was staring at the blue strapless dress with hatred. I regretted that one of my best death glares was going to waste on a dress. My dad Jeb Ride was hosting the party of the year and anybody who is an anybody in Hollywood is coming. Basically the party consists of loud music, dancing (more like groping), and alcohol. Dad is one of biggest producers. Probably he would have been the biggest if it wasn't for Joe Venom also known as Dad's worst enemy and biggest nightmare. I don't know how the fight started but whenever I ask Dad starts cursing.

"Max did you put on the dress or are you still glaring at it?" I sighed. My little sister Ella was a total girly girl. She lived for these stupid parties.

"I don't want to go!" I complained like the two year old I am at heart.

"Do want Dad to know your little secret?" I panicked.

"Ella shut up!" I hissed. "I'll put on the stupid dress!" She chuckled. The "big secret" is I gamble. I'm 17 and technically it is illegal. If my dad finds out the last of my worries would be the cops. I have a fake ID and everything. Which isn't that hard to get if you know the right people. Ella caught me sneaking out of the house and found out. Anytime she needs anything from me she threatens to tell dad about my secret. Which is also why I look like a barbie doll half the time.

"I also get to put on your makeup!" she added quickly before I could disagree. Ugh! Why don't just kill me while you are at it.

"Ella it's a masquerade no one will be seeing my face!"

"No arguments!" I swear she was born to annoy me.

Fang POV

"Man you are so whipped!" my best friend Iggy said while we were playing xbox on my 68 inch flat screen TV.

"You don't know what its like to be in love Iggy," I argued while killing a zombie with my controller but my heart was occupied by a certain red head. Iggy paused the game and turned to me.

"Fang, Lissa is an ugly bimbo, you need to get out more and see some Californian chicks to get your mind of off her. Plus you can't be in love you are only 18." He did not just call my

precious Lissa that.

"How am I supposed to do that?" I asked curious. "My dad basically is kidnapping me in this house."

"Jeb Ride is hosting the biggest party of the year, there will tons of girls that will look way better than Lissa." Iggy said looking at me proudly.

"Iggy you idiot. Jeb Ride is like worst enemies with my dad. There is no way we can get into that party." I said looking at him. He looked at me with a maniac expression. Then he pulled out two black masks.

"Are you sure about that?" he asked with one eyebrow raised.

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