In case you're confused I changed the last chapter to end the story. I'm making a sequel soon and will hopefully get started on it in a week or so. If you haven't seen my improvements to the last chapter then go back and read it again cos there have been some improvements and changes. If you don't then you will not understand the sequel.
So that's the story. I love all you guys who reviewed my story and all you who read it. It's you who make it all worthwhile. And to have you say such nice things sometime even brings a tear to my eyes. Please read all of this, because I have a whole playlist for you to see and if you reviewed then you will be mentioned below. Here are the names of those who have reviewed!
DayBreakAlchemist (Who I also suspect is the Emma who gave me my first review for this story. And sometimes even made me cry with happiness from writing such nice reviews.)
LouLouFlowerPower. (Who I will always update for, Lolz)
Manuact14 (Who only gave one review but I hope I answered their question.)
DarknessIsForeverFalling (whose profile picture is so cute. Baby tiger is awesome!)
City Bookworm (Loving the name!)
Formetoknowandyoutonot (Whose reviews always made me smile and I sincerely hope she didn't combust anytime during the story.)
Midnightrose (Whose review made me soo happy!)
ClaireShaneEveMichael. (Who has reassured me in my characterisation abilities.)
Emily Angela (Whose guess was so cool I nearly used it but I couldn't cos I needed to get on with the Naomi story. And I couldn't think of a good reason why Shane would be there. AND not to mention that I'm totally with you on the Myrnin thing. Forget Shane, we wanna see Myrnin body! Lolz)
HOAkickinitluver78 (who officialy has the hardest to spell pen name EVER! Yet it's still totally awesome.)
Booklover457 (Whose idea was totally awesome! You should really use that in a story of your own. Maybe you could write your own carry-on for Black Dawn.)
Anon (Who I'm glad enjoyed it.)
GhostxWind (who wrote a brilliant review that made me smile and jump for joy!)
PhantasmagoricalPandemonium (Who I owe a great apology to, and thank you for helping me see the error of my ways.)
PingPong101 (Who even beat me at late night reading.)
Emily Angela (Thank you so much for your review.)
Anonymous (Thank you for your wonderful reviews which made me smile every time read them.)
So that's all the reviewers done. Now I sometimes like to have a playlist at the end of my stories just like Rachel Caine. Well guess what? I'M DOING IT AGAIN! Here's a song for each chapter of the story. Just look them up on youtube. You know you want to.
1. A little help from my friends – The Beatles.
2. Monster – Paramore.
3. Kiss with a Fist – Florence and the Machine.
4. Music of the Night – Phantom of the Opera.
5. Last Resort – Papa roach.
6. Teenagers – My Chemical Romance.
7. Rabbit Heart – Florence and the Machine. (Just realised an ironic moment in the 7th chapter because Myrnin says that he picked Sam's brain because he knew he wouldn't "Try to kill me or himself," and as we all know. Myrnin was wrong.
8. Girl with one eye – Florence and Machine.
9. Dance Dance – Fall Out Boy.
10. The Call – Regina Spektor.
11. Born to be wild – Steppenwolf.
12. Who am I living for – Katy Perry.
13. Cosmic Love – Florence and the Machine.
14. Smoke on Water – Woodstock Mud.
15. The Kill – Thirty Seconds to Mars.
16. You Make Me Feel Brand New – Simply Red.
17. Heaven is a Place on Earth – Belinda Carlisle (If you remember the 17th chapter and what happens in it then you will get why this is ironic.)
18. Breakout – Miley Cyrus.
19. Crying – Aerosmith.
20. Lithium – Evanescence.
21. My heart will go on – Celine Dion.
22. Hear You Me – Jimmy Eat World.
23. Girlfriend – Avril Lavigne.
24. I Want You Back – The Jackson Five.
25. Addicted to Love – Florence and the Machine.
And I have one song that I've chosen as the song of the story. This song is one of my favourites out of the many Florence and the Machine songs I love. And I believe this one suits the story well. It's Howl – Florence and the Machine.
It's an awesome song which includes the lyrics "Drag my teeth across your chest to taste your beating heart." And "Hunting you with bloody feet across the hallowed ground." which I think is awesome and I love singing along to these lyrics.
I'm sorry about the many times I've written people off character. I'll try not to do it again in my next story. If I do I'll personally shot myself in the foot for being so stupid.
I hope you enjoyed this story and thank you for reading. x