I decided that begining was too weak so this is a rewrite to the first chapter also expect updates to be random as all hell

also im gonnna try to write in first person tell me how it goes

disclaimer:dont own naruto nor any series that appear all my references belong to the internet

The valley of the end the place who bore witness to the betrayal of madara uchiha on the village hidden in the leaves and his subsequent battle against his friend senju hashirama now bears witness once again to a betrayal of two friends

naruto pov

as I roar the name of my teamate visions of the past swim in my head , the time just after the massacre (not that i knew) i saw a little kid crying in the river. naturally i approached him and made him play with me only later i learned his whole family got killed and (guilty as i felt) i felt more kinship with him than with any other of my friends nor shikamaru nor kiba not chouji. he was so like me that one time

i found him later changed at the clasroom his smile became a scowl, his eyes sad but pure became hate filled and dark. i got scared and when i tried to approach him he snarled I being the idiot i am took that as a challenge i tried to coax a smile out of him even a smirk was a welcomed he became my rival when everyone else laughed he didnt . he didnt even saw me with disgust nor fear when i looked at him after getting beaten up in the ring i saw just one message in his eyes

get up you are better than this arent you my rival?

that acknowledgment was all it took for me to make him a precious person

when the teams were decided i was giddy not only would i be in a team with sakura-chan i could show him i was a ninja that i would no longer live in his shadow

trought fire we became brothers

haku was our greatest challenge yet, sure zabuza was overwhelming but he was toying with us that much i knew he wasnt giving his best against two green genin

in that second our eyes meet we formuled a plan so much was said in that glance yet not one minute passed

we managed to push back the demon of the mist and free our sensei

this was not like that every move we did haku already had a counter ready every plan we tried failed before we could even execute it

when i saw him take the attack meant for me something in me snapped

red filled my eyes and hate coursed trough my veins it felt like lava was coursing trough my very being and my very soul screamed. no roared for blood

just before i dealt the final blow i saw the kind haku with eyes so pure and innocent thats the first time i felt it

betrayal

i pleaded to haku why would he work for someone like zabuza

wanna know his response?

zabuza-sama is my precious people im his to do what he wants .still i did not want for things to go like this for all its worth im sorry now strike me down i have failed and useless tools are needless

my heart wrenched at hearing that. haku understood me he gave me my nindo and thats a memento i will carry for all my life

When a person… has something important they want to protect… that's when they can become truly strong.

haku gave me a purpose greater than becoming hokage and for that i will always consider haku one of my precious people

i hestiated and haku impaled himself on my senseis attack protecting his master

then came the mercenaries and the rignleader

seeing haku being disrespected by that waste of space gatou made me go off the deep end and join zabuza in anihilating those mercenaries

and it was my first kill too...

the problem with the chunin exams was that we were not ready we didnt even know about them until we meet gara and his brothers

i still think he looks like a panda

he was just like me sometimes i wonder if i would have ended up like him if my friends didnt save me from my darkness

the first test was hard i was never one for books and i always did wrong on tests it was only later that my teamates told me that we were supposed to cheat

honestly how was i supposed to know that?

the second test was easy we got the scroll and advanced it wasnt until we meet orochimaru that things went FUBAR

after zabuza i figured out the trick against killing intent. orochimaru didnt have any need to take us seriously so he played around and let his reputation and kiling intent disort our own (little as they were) combat abilities

the trick was not focusing on it or willing yourself to keep moving. letting fear affect your mind is the first step to defeat

or so sarutobi-jiji told me im thiinking on agreeing with him seeing how sasuke fought against orochimaru

dont get me wrong his moves were superb and his plans were sharp but even I could see the fear in his eyes

i always knew i was a partucularly strong willed person. my pain tolerance is superb because i dont let it stop me from my objective

having a clear objective will allow you to overcome fear

protecting my teamates was a worthy goal of that

after having both of our asses troughtouly kicked we descended in a troubled sleep

later i found out sakura had to protect us while we were dozing off those sound-nin tried to kill sasuke

and the group who will later be called the rookie twelve appeared

tough really lee was the one who jumped in trying to help us guy got guts ill give him that

my match up with kiba really opened my eyes i was never a particularly disciplined person so the higher martial arts were out of my reach but i was at least a little confident in my brawling skills

without my insane stamina and resistance to pain i would have never held out enough so my stomach finnaly procesed those beans

hehe dog breath

i met ero-sennin without knowing just how true that nickname was and he corrected a little my brawling and let me sign the toad summoning contract

found out more about gaara kicked and served as a therapyst for neji

then the invasion came

all of our forces were knocked out(including me) with only the upper echelons being skilled enough to dispel the genjutsu (and sakura)

so gaara let the demon out i sumon bunta kick his ass share my nindo and they escape

i was without knowing steadily getting more experience getting stronger sharper my will already as strong as iron became more refined more stronger

after a lot of adventures and more bonding with my teamates(at least from my point of view)

sasuke betrays us

i was numb, i let shikamaru do all the planning and recruiting (maybe i shouldnt have i wonder how they are? are they alive?)

then i see sakura-chan crying and that familiar feeling of my will surfacing cleared my head and an objective appeared itself on my mind

answers

did all the experiences we had toguether meant nothing to him? was our bond so weak?

so with a promise and a gesture i saw lee do once i embarked on my mision

letting each of my teamates against each one of our enemies i eventually was alone against that freaky albino with the bones

then lee appeared

he arrived just in the nick of time almost like a choreography

with a badass entrance he gave me the opening to keep chasing after my rogue teamate

but when i found him

a dark aura seeped out of his body and from that accursed mark he was darker his smirk evilier for lack of a better word and his chuckles reminded me too much of orochimaru for my comfort

when he admitted i was his best friend mixed feelings arised in my chest

joy and pain

he wanted to cut our bond one that he himself admitted was something precious to me

i let the power of the kyuby seep trought me and that cursed mark made him a monster

now each one of us with our by now signature techniques against each other leap for a mortal blow

but i couldnt do it

my own affection combined with the promise i made to my pink haired friend restored some clarity to my rage filled mind

i let the first perfect rasengan i made fade from existence and allowed his hand to skewer me in the heart

but i wasnt done yet

i saw confusion and shock dance in his eyes

say goodnight princess

with deliberate slowness i delivered a hella strong headbutt on his head

my forehead protector once shiny a reward from discovering a traitor now riddled with rain and blood held out and for all the strenght he boasted

that was a critical hit his forehead protector shattered and then he was knocked out

and he said i wouldnt be able to even scratch his hitate

i with a grimace and a guttural growl(was that really my voice?) pulled out his hand from my chest and with gentleness that betrayed my appeareance lowered in the now destroyed valley

then

PAIN!

Pain like ive never felt before erupted from where my heart once was

i could do nothing more i was drained with the last of my strenght i saw that snake kabuto holding a inu handsign and talking but my mind was far too gone for understanding

just as he was going to deliver the final blow with that chakra scalpel tecnique of his the sound of a thousand birds was heard trought the aptly named valley of the end

even he could not survive a blow like that trought his heart

i saw my sensei, i saw his facemask moving expresing what i would guess were apologies and regrets

but i didnt care i would not live any longer even I knew having my heart explode was not something you walked away from

I turned towards my teamate and with strenght that i didnt had gave him my headband

hopefully baa-chan would understand i knew that orochimaru was to blame and that seal warped his mind but there is still light in him

and with that final hope i closed my eyes

and Died

GAME OVER